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Posted: 10 years ago

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KD only influenced vikram like this.only vicky can save him.is vicky really going 2 help sam 2 cure vikram?loving vicky mahira scanes.even in fight scenes their chemistry is terrific

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Posted: 10 years ago
its really nice concept. to make RK and Maan brothers i am biggest fan of both hero and serials and now i can got chance to read both on one story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan & RK are two orphans having supernatural powers crossed each others path when their foster family chose to kill them.They became each other's support system and started living together.To others , they are brothers.No one knows that they are not blood related. Maan's best friend Vikram & his uncle were the only ones whom Maan & RK trust & considered their family.

Maan & Vikram fell in love with the same girl Geet Handa who was a complete spoilt brat.To remain loyal to Vikram , Maan chose to hide his feelings for geet whereas she misinterpreted it as his high headedness.Madhu , sister of Geet , returned from abroad after her mother Padmini revealed that she belonged to Rano(Geet's mother) on her death bed.To fulfill her mother's last wish , she came to Dehradun to start a new life with her family.

On the other side , RK's biological father Kabir Raizaada , the king of Neotopia in the other supernatural world , started creating an army to destroy his younger son RK.He brainwashed his elder son Prince Vicky to avenge RK just because the eldest witch of Neotopia forecasted that RK would be the one to end King's life.He also made Vicky his puppet to fulfill his long lost dream to become the king of kings(the ultimate power) after he gathers all the spirits of the 4 important power- the earth spirit of Tusks , the water spirit of Templar , the wind spirit of Zymond & the fire spirit of Neotopia.Vicky who blindly loves & trust his father set out in a mission to destroy RK after getting engaged to beautiful & innocent Princess Dipali of Templar.But Dipali doesnot know that Vicky was in love with her step sister Sameera(the illegitimate daughter of King of Templar).Before heading towards Dehradun , Vicky declared Knight Rajveer as the incharge of Templar & protector of Dipali , without the knowledge that Knight Rajveer was the Prince of Zymond who was there only to spy on Vicky.

In Dehradun , Vicky put many hurdles in RK's life and with the help of Sam & his trusted spy Brij , he came to know about Maan's dark past secrets.The incidents took a drastic turn when Geet realised her long buried feelings for Maan when she witnessed madhu to be extra friendly with him.On the other side , Vicky who was blindly chasing his father's each & every order committed a sin when he killed his unborn child with Sam.Sam who was attracted to simple , kind & selfless Vikram ,gradually fell in love with him due to Vicky's negligence towards her.Her relation with Vicky turned bitter , and she chose not to be involve herself in his revenge plans.Vikram who was equally smitten by Sam's beauty & felt an unknown attachment with her , chose to shrug of his feelings , reminding herself everytime that he loves only Geet & no one else.


Geet who was constantly trying to convince Maan about her love , got a positive result when they made love in Maan's cottage.But a call from Vikram , broke all his trance & he immediately stepped back.But Geet was all determined to get Maan after realising that Maan also loves him.She made plannings to make him confess & support her so that it gets easy to break up with Vikram.Everytime , she tries to do something RK became a hurdle in her path unknowingly.Things worsened when Maan tried to commit suicide & RK threatened her of dire consequences if she doesnot stay away from Maan.Her bitterness turned towards hatred when she saw the attention RK gets from all her loved ones like Maan, Vikram , Dr. Yash & even Madhu.

Madhu who was in love with RK at first sight confessed her feelings to RK , but in return he asked for some time from her.Their relation grew more & more intimate & strong with the passing days without the knowledge of anyone else , other than Maan who obviously knew his bro in & out.

In the Vikram's birthday party , all the characters seemed to come there with some hidden agenda.Geet bribed the waiter to find Maan's location so that she makes him confess his feelings & bring that in front of Vikram face to face.Sam came to the party to serve Vicky's last plan to trap Maan of sexual abuse , but backed out at the last moment.Maan who was drugged became unsteady.When Geet came to him, she tried to inform Vikram but found his cell switched off as he was waiting for her in the terrace to propose her.On the other side , Vikram proposed Sam thinking her to be Geet & later apologised.But Sam stopped him & confessed that even if he loves someone else , she loves him with all her heart shocking him to the core.Things took a major turn when Vikram found Geet & Maan in an uncompromising position.Geet who was equally shocked decided to confess her feelings for Maan to Vikram.In shock & pain , Vikram turned mum whereas Sam took the matter in hand & punished herself & Geet and then nursed Vikram to ease his pain.RK who realised his feelings for Madhu proposed her & made love to her.But when he called maan , he found his cell switched off.He became worried & called vikram.Instead of Vikram , Sam answered the call & told him that Vikram was sick & Maan was responsible for that.RK rushed Vikram's house & understood that they were in a very bad mess.Maan helped Vikram to come out of his depression , but himself became sick & suicidal due to extreme pain of losing his best friend.Sam who was now clear of her feelings , broke up with Vicky , shattering him completely.He gathered his broken pieces & decided to avenge Vikram , blaming him for his break up.On the other side , Geet's extreme mental stress triggered her mutation process & she started dreaming events that will take place in future.Sam who left Vicky's home , was in need of job to survive herself and RK gave her a job to look after Maan's needs.Slowly , she became a part of RK & Maan's life & they started considering her as their sister.RK became her best friend who came to know about her powers & her relationship with Vicky.She also told him about the other world , but smartly hid about Vicky being RK's step bro.Sam came to see Vikram with a wish to mend the relation between Maan & him , but Vicky again poisoned his mind & change the situation in his favor.Vicky who was in revenge mode hired Mohini , a seductress to trap Vikram & make him a sex-maniac.He organised a party to start his plan.Sam who was restless , knowing Vicky's nature , rushed to his mansion in order to reach for Vikram but failed.Vicky made her to come outhouse to see her after a long time , after he gave KD(Vicky's soldier) to take care of Vikram until Mohini reaches the party.But when KD saw Vikram leaving the party , he used his visual illusion of Vikram's dead mother to stop him from leaving which messed up his mind , making him mentally unstable.Sam on the other side remembered her moments with Vicky , but when he refused to drop his plans to avenge Vikram , they had a fight.The distrust & her repulsion from his touch hurt Vicky very much and he understood that he was just chasing a mirage.Infact , love story of Sam-Vicky is no more.Maan , RK & Sam returned back to their cottage with Vikram and with a book "History of Neotopia" and Vicky decided to meet his father in Neotopia to get some solace.

In the book ,maan got a brief idea about the dictatorship of the king of Neotopia & felt disgusted.Madhu was upset when Geet badmouthed about RK & she fought for her love with her own sister.But inside she was getting weaker day by day as she realised that RK is hiding something big from her.Vicky who was on his way to meet his father , automatically his steps took him to the temple of Neotopia where he came to know about a ritual which his mother performs every year for his well-being.He became guilty & promised to do everything to make her happy.He met her & performed the puja for the 1st time , starting his redemption.While he was on his way to start a new life , RK & Sam had a tough time to handle a mad Vikram.They decided to take Vicky's help for it while Maan & Geet decided to stay away from Vikram to avoid further complications.Vicky who was lost in his broken relation , met Mahira , a beautiful witch & he remembered how much he was lost in her beauty when Sam introduced them.His trance broke when she insulted his dad & they had a fight , but Mahira seemed to be a girl with thick on whom no insults seems to matter.

Sam who was on a mission to save Vikram , couldn't locate Vicky.So he seeked brij's help & found that Vicky was in his Homeland.She contacted him & requested him to save Vikram.At first , Vicky was hurt but he recovered quickly & promised to everything in his strength to get Vikram back to normal.

To be contd...



Sorry for late update. Actually , I have lost interest in this story...still I am updating & my updates will be not frequent depending upon my writing & ur comments...


Edited by sanghita0000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ch 52A & 52B are updated in blog...Comment if u like me to continue my story...Comment before sat as I may update that day...can't promise considering my poor health & disinterest to this story & ur comments...


My oses:

FORBIDDEN TALE OF LOVE:


Bounded by destiny:


Edited by sanghita0000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haw ...
Adi is Rajveer friend and... he is spying on Maan ..
Good that Adi is not bad ...
Depali and Rajveer will get married secretly ...Maaneet are fighting and Maan says Geet will spoil their relation...
Madhu is not happy with RK hiding his truth from Madhu ...
What was That in the letter ..
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the post with the Summary i came to know about the story in short and also being curious to know further and thanks a lot for the link that u provided me. can u also provided the link of all parts.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc updts,cont soon.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update... waiting for the next
update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update... And the summary.. It really helped out.. Adi has found a letter of maan and is set to go to witches for further interrogation... Maaneet is having a fight but now things have settled but still they are lacking in their relation.. Rajveer and dipali will marry secretly... Madhu feeling bad that rk is hiding his part from her... There is too much in the story that sometime I gets confuse but seriously u r doing a great job...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet fights with maan dragging RK into it.but she grets n they patched up.liked maaneet scenes.Madhu feels fishy abt RK hiding sth from her.her mom rano knows it but she also hides.loved rano madhu conversation.will rajveer b able 2 marry dipali soon as per his promise?What twist is that letter going 2 bring?Who is that wicked girl with adi?

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