Two Brothers - Page 73

Originally posted by: nitika20

Read part 36and 37...
awesome ...
Geet got vision of her mother's last meet ..and RK saw... Mark of Geet's being princess of Zymond ..
..Geet and Madhu are princessess of Zymond ..
but I am thinking who will be King RK or Maan ...
Vikram wanted to come to meet Geet but think wrong about Maaneet ..
hehe.. RK was teasing Madhu and... Madhu make him cook... for them...
waiting for next part...
Dr... Yash know about RK... N written on RK's wrist ...
What Maan has on his wrist ...
waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 37

Fantastic Just Awesome

Loved the whole Rajveer family past sad but it was awesome
now why do I get the feeling that both Geet and Madhu are Rajveer's sisters

SANGITA..REALLY UR AN AWESOME STORY TELLER...

I JUS LOVE READING DIS STORY OF URS..👏👏🤗

SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE..MERA WIFI..HAD CHEATED ME..😡

COMMING TO UDPATESS...

SERIOUSLY...VICKY KA MONOLOGUE..HIS CHILDHOOD HIS PAIN HIS LONELINESS..HIS HATE FOR RK.😡.WAS ALL JUSTIFIED...HE WAS A CHILD WHO CRAVED FOR HIS FATHER KA LOVE AND CARE N PAMPER..BT DUE TO DOSE ...PREDICTION..HE WAS DISTANCED FROM HIS DAD.. ND DAT TURNED TO MORE HATRED FOR HIM...POOR BOY..😕

I WISH HE HAD SEEN HIS FATHER KA REAL SELF..😡😡😡😡

BEFORE ITS TOO LATE AND HE HARMS MANEET OR RISHBALA OR VIKRAM...

BT FELT PITY FOR HIM...🤔

DONT KNOW OR SAY WANNA SEE..HOW HE GONNA CHANGE HIS CURSE..OR HOW HE WILL WIN SAM BACK..

HE REALLY LOVES HER...BT OKAY I UNDERSTOOD SO HE KILLED DAT PROFESSOR BCOZ HE WAS BAD...ND PARI..BT EVEN DAT CANT B JUSTIFIED..HE DONT HV D RT TO KILL A LIFE...😡😡

SAM REALLY WAS STRAIGHT FORWARD..ND I WAS SHOCKED DAT VICKY LET HER GO WITHOUT CREATIN A FUSS..SHE TOO IS RT AT HER PLACE..TILL WEN SHE CAN B A PLOY TO HS PLANS ND ACTIONS..SHE TOO DESRVE TO B HAPPY AND CARRED..😃😃

HE WILL B SO HEART BROKEN WEN HE LL B FACED WIT D HARSH TRUTH OF HIS FATHER KA REAL FACE..😲.REALLY SAD..

GOOD DAT VIKRAM IS OUT OF SHOCK ND IS SOMEHOW NORMAL..BT STILL HIS NIGHTMARE...EVEN IN HIS DREAMS..HE CANT SEE MAAN IN PAIN..

ND I HOPE HE GETS TO KNOW SOON DAT MAAN NEVER CHEATED HIM..HA DATS TRUE HE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM ABOUT HIS FEELINGS FOR GEET EARLIER WEN HE KNEW DAT VIKRAM IS STARTD LOVING GEET ...

DAT HURTS...

SO SAMEERA..COMES TO MEET HIM EVERYDAY ...ND HE TO UNKNOWINGLY WAITS FOR HER TO COME..BT I FEEL HE SHOULD ATLEAST ...OPEN UP TO HER..

HE HAS HURTED HER N INSULTED HER ...

BT LOVED DER CUTE GESTURE...😳😳😳😳

I WAS SHOCKED WEN READ DAT SHE IS WIT RK N MAAN 😲😲..ND WAT SURPRISED😛😛 ME IS HER BOND WIT RK N MAAN ...SHE HAS SO JELLED WIT DEM...EMOTIONALLY SHE UNDERSTAND ..DEM SO MUCH ..

AWW...SISTER TO DIS TO DEVIL...😆😆

SEEMS LIKE RK ND SAM WILL MAKE A GOOD ..TEAM...

LIKE TRIO TOGETHER...😃😃😃

OHH SO VICKY KA DAD WAS ANGRY FOR D PLAN FAILED...AHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEN D HELL WILL VICKY GET TO KNOW DAT HE IS A PAWN TO HIS DAD KA DEVIL PLAN..😡😡

PLEASE PRETTY SOON BFORE ITS TOO LATE..

NOW HIS REVENG MODE WLL B AT ITS PEAK ..KNOWING ...SAM IS STAYIN WIT RK ND MAAN ..OH GOD...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\

FINALLY OUR RISHBALA MET ...I SO MISSED DEM ..BECHARE CUTE COUPLE...😳😳😳

OH ONE MORE THING...

I JUS READ DIS😲😲

8) Samar Singhania (age 19): He is purely evil & a playboy...King of Neotopia appointed him to keep an eye on Madhu.His powers are that he can change his human form into any other human form. He can also become invisible.

IS HE COME INNTO PICTURE...DO LEMME KNOW..HE IS MORE DANGEROUS..WAT IF HE CHANGE HIMSELF AS RK...

DAMN...IT WIIL B DANGEROUS...

OKAY AS USUAL I ALWAYS GO THRU ..CS..

GHAJINI HU BHULANE KI AADAAT HAI REY..😆😆😆😆

ND Y IS RK WORRIED ABOUT GEET KA WEIRD NIGHTMARES..😕

ND GOOD DAT GEET WENT TO VICKRAM TO CLEAR THE MIST..BT DEN ITS TO EARLY..EVEN THOUGH VIKRAM IS NORMAL NOW ..IT WILL TAKE HIM TIME TO COOL ND ACCEPT AND BEHAVE TOTAL NORMAL..

ND GEET HAS TO UNDERSTAND DAT ..FELT BAD ...

SO HALF TRUTH IS OUT...DAT ...GEET ND MADHU ARE PRINCESS ND RAJVEER IS DER BRO..OH HOW GOOD...

DID I TELL U ...I LIKE ...RAJVEER ND DEEPALI.😳😳😳..DEY ARE A SWEET COUPLE..ND SERIOUSLY DEEPALI IS SO INNOCENT ...I TOO THOUGHT SHE WOULD FREAK OUT KNOWING HE HAS DISGUISED HIMSLEF...BT HER REACTION CRAKED ME..🤣

SERIOUSLY...HEHEH!!!!!!!!! SHE WAS ASKING HIM SO CUTELY DEN Y HE IS WORKING WEN HE IS A PRINCE...HEHEH😆😆😆

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!

OHH.!!!!!!! VICKY IS A FIRE NOW ...ANYTIME IT CAN BURN ANYONE..ND I FEEL SCARED FOR VIKRAM ...HOPE HE WONT HARM ANYONE..

OH Y HE HAS KEPT PEOPLE TO SPY ON MANEET AND RISHBALA...

SEEMS LIKE ..RK HAS GUESSED DAT GEET IS CONNETED WIT DEM ..

SO SINCE MADHU ND GEET HAV BONDED TOGETHER..DER MUTATION PROCESS IS TAKING PLACE..

HAV A DOUBT ..DOES DAT MEANS MADHU TOO WILL BE AHAVING POWERS ?????????????????????????

ASKED SO COZ U HAVENT MENTIONED ABOUT DER POWERS IN UR CS...

LOVD D BOND SAM ND RK SHARES..SO RK NOW KNOWS ..DAT SHE TOO HAS POWERS..BT IS HE UNAWARE ABOUT VICKY KA REAL SELF AND HIS POWERS...???????????????

HEY LOVED ...TEASING TALK ND FLIRTY RK ..WIT MADHU..HOW HE WAS TEASING AND DEN HIS CRIB WEN HE WAS MADE TO COOK FOOD FOR ALL..HEHEHE!!!!!! MADHU BECHARI WAS SO DISTRACTED WIT RK KA PRESENCE ...

LOVED DER MOMENTS...

LOL RK WAS KICKED OUT BY ALL..😆😆😆

WISH DEY WERE HAPPY LIKE DIS ALWAYS..WITHOUT ANY HURDLE..

NOW GEET KA DREAM MAKES SENSE...BT SOMETIME HER DREAM OF BABY ND COUPLE..RK..DAT IS SO WEIRED ND SCARY...

SO RK IS NOW AWARE OF GEET BEING LIKE DEM...

WANNA SEE..HOW MAAN WILL TAKE DIS...TRUTH...

RK IS SAD DAT MAAN IS NOT OPENING UP TO HIM ..ND ON OTHER SIDE MAAN IS SAD ND GUILTY FOR MAKING RK SAD...

OH GOD

AGAIN VIKRAM MISUNDERSTOOD DAT GEET N MAAN ARE TOGETHER AND HAPPY...

HOPE HIS MISUNDERSTANDING IS CLEARED SOON...

EAGERLY ..DESPERATELY ..WAITIN FOR NEXT PART..

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...CONT OSOON...WAITIN

WAITN

WIAITN

LOVE UR STORY...🤗

Originally posted by: Desire6

SANGITA..REALLY UR AN AWESOME STORY TELLER...

I JUS LOVE READING DIS STORY OF URS..👏👏🤗

SORRY FOR COMMENTING LATE..MERA WIFI..HAD CHEATED ME..😡

COMMING TO UDPATESS...

SERIOUSLY...VICKY KA MONOLOGUE..HIS CHILDHOOD HIS PAIN HIS LONELINESS..HIS HATE FOR RK.😡.WAS ALL JUSTIFIED...HE WAS A CHILD WHO CRAVED FOR HIS FATHER KA LOVE AND CARE N PAMPER..BT DUE TO DOSE ...PREDICTION..HE WAS DISTANCED FROM HIS DAD.. ND DAT TURNED TO MORE HATRED FOR HIM...POOR BOY..😕

I WISH HE HAD SEEN HIS FATHER KA REAL SELF..😡

BEFORE ITS TOO LATE AND HE HARMS MANEET OR RISHBALA OR VIKRAM...

BT FELT PITY FOR HIM...🤔

DONT KNOW OR SAY WANNA SEE..HOW HE GONNA CHANGE HIS CURSE..OR HOW HE WILL WIN SAM BACK..

HE REALLY LOVES HER...BT OKAY I UNDERSTOOD SO HE KILLED DAT PROFESSOR BCOZ HE WAS BAD...ND PARI..BT EVEN DAT CANT B JUSTIFIED..HE DONT HV D RT TO KILL A LIFE...😡😡

SAM REALLY WAS STRAIGHT FORWARD..ND I WAS SHOCKED DAT VICKY LET HER GO WITHOUT CREATIN A FUSS..SHE TOO IS RT AT HER PLACE..TILL WEN SHE CAN B A PLOY TO HS PLANS ND ACTIONS..SHE TOO DESRVE TO B HAPPY AND CARRED..😃😃

HE WILL B SO HEART BROKEN WEN HE LL B FACED WIT D HARSH TRUTH OF HIS FATHER KA REAL FACE..😲.REALLY SAD..

GOOD DAT VIKRAM IS OUT OF SHOCK ND IS SOMEHOW NORMAL..BT STILL HIS NIGHTMARE...EVEN IN HIS DREAMS..HE CANT SEE MAAN IN PAIN..

ND I HOPE HE GETS TO KNOW SOON DAT MAAN NEVER CHEATED HIM..HA DATS TRUE HE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM ABOUT HIS FEELINGS FOR GEET EARLIER WEN HE KNEW DAT VIKRAM IS STARTD LOVING GEET ...

DAT HURTS...

SO SAMEERA..COMES TO MEET HIM EVERYDAY ...ND HE TO UNKNOWINGLY WAITS FOR HER TO COME..BT I FEEL HE SHOULD ATLEAST ...OPEN UP TO HER..

HE HAS HURTED HER N INSULTED HER ...

BT LOVED DER CUTE GESTURE...😳

I WAS SHOCKED WEN READ DAT SHE IS WIT RK N MAAN 😲😲..ND WAT SURPRISED😛😛 ME IS HER BOND WIT RK N MAAN ...SHE HAS SO JELLED WIT DEM...EMOTIONALLY SHE UNDERSTAND ..DEM SO MUCH ..

AWW...SISTER TO DIS TO DEVIL...😆😆

SEEMS LIKE RK ND SAM WILL MAKE A GOOD ..TEAM...

LIKE TRIO TOGETHER...😃😃😃

OHH SO VICKY KA DAD WAS ANGRY FOR D PLAN FAILED...AHAHHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WEN D HELL WILL VICKY GET TO KNOW DAT HE IS A PAWN TO HIS DAD KA DEVIL PLAN..😡😡

PLEASE PRETTY SOON BFORE ITS TOO LATE..

NOW HIS REVENG MODE WLL B AT ITS PEAK ..KNOWING ...SAM IS STAYIN WIT RK ND MAAN ..OH GOD...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\

FINALLY OUR RISHBALA MET ...I SO MISSED DEM ..BECHARE CUTE COUPLE...😳😳😳

OH ONE MORE THING...

I JUS READ DIS😲😲

8) Samar Singhania (age 19): He is purely evil & a playboy...King of Neotopia appointed him to keep an eye on Madhu.His powers are that he can change his human form into any other human form. He can also become invisible.

IS HE COME INNTO PICTURE...DO LEMME KNOW..HE IS MORE DANGEROUS..WAT IF HE CHANGE HIMSELF AS RK...

DAMN...IT WIIL B DANGEROUS...

OKAY AS USUAL I ALWAYS GO THRU ..CS..

GHAJINI HU BHULANE KI AADAAT HAI REY..😆

ND Y IS RK WORRIED ABOUT GEET KA WEIRD NIGHTMARES..😕

ND GOOD DAT GEET WENT TO VICKRAM TO CLEAR THE MIST..BT DEN ITS TO EARLY..EVEN THOUGH VIKRAM IS NORMAL NOW ..IT WILL TAKE HIM TIME TO COOL ND ACCEPT AND BEHAVE TOTAL NORMAL..

ND GEET HAS TO UNDERSTAND DAT ..FELT BAD ...

SO HALF TRUTH IS OUT...DAT ...GEET ND MADHU ARE PRINCESS ND RAJVEER IS DER BRO..OH HOW GOOD...

DID I TELL U ...I LIKE ...RAJVEER ND DEEPALI.😳😳😳..DEY ARE A SWEET COUPLE..ND SERIOUSLY DEEPALI IS SO INNOCENT ...I TOO THOUGHT SHE WOULD FREAK OUT KNOWING HE HAS DISGUISED HIMSLEF...BT HER REACTION CRAKED ME..🤣

SERIOUSLY...HEHEH!!!!!!!!! SHE WAS ASKING HIM SO CUTELY DEN Y HE IS WORKING WEN HE IS A PRINCE...HEHEH😆😆😆

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!

OHH.!!!!!!! VICKY IS A FIRE NOW ...ANYTIME IT CAN BURN ANYONE..ND I FEEL SCARED FOR VIKRAM ...HOPE HE WONT HARM ANYONE..

OH Y HE HAS KEPT PEOPLE TO SPY ON MANEET AND RISHBALA...

SEEMS LIKE ..RK HAS GUESSED DAT GEET IS CONNETED WIT DEM ..

SO SINCE MADHU ND GEET HAV BONDED TOGETHER..DER MUTATION PROCESS IS TAKING PLACE..

HAV A DOUBT ..DOES DAT MEANS MADHU TOO WILL BE AHAVING POWERS ?????????????????????????

ASKED SO COZ U HAVENT MENTIONED ABOUT DER POWERS IN UR CS...

LOVD D BOND SAM ND RK SHARES..SO RK NOW KNOWS ..DAT SHE TOO HAS POWERS..BT IS HE UNAWARE ABOUT VICKY KA REAL SELF AND HIS POWERS...???????????????

HEY LOVED ...TEASING TALK ND FLIRTY RK ..WIT MADHU..HOW HE WAS TEASING AND DEN HIS CRIB WEN HE WAS MADE TO COOK FOOD FOR ALL..HEHEHE!!!!!! MADHU BECHARI WAS SO DISTRACTED WIT RK KA PRESENCE ...

LOVED DER MOMENTS...

LOL RK WAS KICKED OUT BY ALL..😆😆😆

WISH DEY WERE HAPPY LIKE DIS ALWAYS..WITHOUT ANY HURDLE..

NOW GEET KA DREAM MAKES SENSE...BT SOMETIME HER DREAM OF BABY ND COUPLE..RK..DAT IS SO WEIRED ND SCARY...

SO RK IS NOW AWARE OF GEET BEING LIKE DEM...

WANNA SEE..HOW MAAN WILL TAKE DIS...TRUTH...

RK IS SAD DAT MAAN IS NOT OPENING UP TO HIM ..ND ON OTHER SIDE MAAN IS SAD ND GUILTY FOR MAKING RK SAD...

OH GOD

AGAIN VIKRAM MISUNDERSTOOD DAT GEET N MAAN ARE TOGETHER AND HAPPY...

HOPE HIS MISUNDERSTANDING IS CLEARED SOON...

EAGERLY ..DESPERATELY ..WAITIN FOR NEXT PART..

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...CONT OSOON...WAITIN

WAITN

WIAITN

LOVE UR STORY...🤗

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

I don't mind long comments...Infact , I love them a lot...😳...Thank u for such a wonderful comment...😊

Vicky knowing about his dad is not anytime soon...It will take time & trust me , it will be very late...

Vikram is not hurt that geet doesn't love him...He is hurt that his best friends lied to him , betrayed his trust...He is thinking himself as a fool as he always shared his feelings for geet to maan since childhood ...So, he is more hurt due to maan's cheating...But his subconscious mind can feel maan's pain as bond of Maan & Vikram is unique & very rare , full of love , care & trust...Maan's innocence will be revealed to Vikram in ch 58 or 59...

All his life Vikram saw geet as his future ...Seeing her sleeping with his bestie torned him from inside..At the same time , Sam's sudden confession shocked him...He will take time to accept her wholeheartedly...As long he is insecure & hurt due to maaneet , he can't move on in his life...He is guilty for hurting Sam & ashamed of that ...He knows about Sam's new friends Maan & RK...So , he is not very much comfortable in keeping contact with her & confront her for that day...

Coming to Vicky's revenge , he is not that Vicky anymore...He has changed...Sam was the only good thing in his cursed life...She was his support system ...With her gone , his life has stopped...However he tries to harm Vikram , Maan or RK , but that will power , that hunger to win & defeat his enemies were gone...He will be on right track...Sometimes we need something drastic & painful to make ourselves realize our faults & this make us a better human...We will see a new & improved Vicky in future updates...Vicky has asked to spy on all as he has to report everything to his so called dad...it helps Vicky to plan his next move...

Samar will be introduced , but not anytime soon...He will be a great hurdle in Rishbala love story...but with him , there is one more who will try to harm Rishbala...I am not revealing that name now...😆

Past of Vicky , Dev , Sam , RK & Maan were painful...So, they were always emotionally unstable...So, they mutated fast...But , Madhu & Geet led a very peaceful life...Their parents pampared them a lot...fulfilled their all wishes...But Geet first time felt strong emotional turmoil due to maan & Vikram...So, her mutation started...She will be having nightmares...it will not be that smooth & frequent...Madhu is still very happy & content with her life...So , her mutation will be last when she will get her share of pain...Their powers are not mentioned as it will spoil the suspense ...

Moreover , I never intended to write the story like this , so Madhu & Geet's power not mentioned...Previously I planned very less Maaneet & Rishbala romance in this story as it was about brothers ( the male leads...female leads were like supporting characters) , but all started complaining...I also planned RK to play geet's character & Sam-Vicky as evil couples where Sam in love with RK...Vikram a supporting character ...Vicky forcefully marrying Dipali & killing Rajveer-Dipali mercilessly...But I changed the plot , after reading the comments...Infact , I update my plots everytime after reading comments...That's why I want ur comment so badly , so that I can understand which plot u are not liking & which not...

RK is curious about geet's dreams...He has super sixth sense...He can sense danger & anything weird...He can sense geet's mutation by seeing the Z mark on her wrist just like N mark on his biceps...but still he is not so sure...Only Rano can tell him the truth...But , as RK's life is messed up due to the fight between Vikram & Maan & geet being the reason , so he is not getting that much time...Also Rano is out of town , that's why Madhu is living with them...Maan will not know the truth now...

About Geet's dreams only about RK is of great significance...Sometimes we can't see the truth in our conscious state...but our subconscious mind keeps on trying so that we can see the truth & donot make any mistake & regret later...😊...confused kar diya kya?😆...U can mention ur weird imaginations regarding her dreams in ur comments in future updates...😳

Hey , whom u like more Mahira Khan or Surbhi for Vicky?

Originally posted by: Desire6

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I WOULD LIKE ,...MAHIRA...NEW FACE...FOR VICKY...

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oh ...u mean ...it will b too late na. he knowing about...his dad...oh 😡

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oteri...20 more chapters...for vikram to know about maan ka innocence...😲😲
bt u r also rt..it is gonna take time..bt till den maan will be all broken yaar...
still..ll b wiaitn..

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good to hear somethin +ve about vicky and his revenge plan ..bt still he is very good pawn to his dad ..nd surely dat will create a mess...jaldi ..bring mahira in his life..dat lost love..so dat he can be again stable..nd b a good man...

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waise ..hi ..Samar ke bina ..der are many hurdle in rishbala story...
i think its mohini u are talking na..who is wit ...dat king . his puppt ...nd has a crush on RK ...
am i rt... jus read d cs today again ...so bhuli nahi..hu ..nd somethin connecting to rk ..how d hell ll i miss it...😆

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Okay..i gues...madhu too gona get her share of pain..to get those..power

oh please dont seprate...dipali nd rajveer dey are my adorable cute couple in dis ff..till now..
waise rishabala..nd maneet also..vicky nd sam tha..bt now ..i shippin ..vikram nd sam 😆

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yes ,,,..geet n her dreams..nd ur answer ..confused me..bt no problme ..i am waitn for ..next part..cont soon...