MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-12~ UPDATED Pt 122 / Pg 100 / 26th Feb..... - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully updated
loved it
manu jumped in joy ...aftr getting his 2 jojos
last part was very lovely
intresting precap
waiting fr maan expressing his love to geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet accepted.. Manu is Maan's...
Maan so much relived...hearing her ..acceptance..

Maan is strong with family support.. Show his love in action..
Geet did not push him away...reluctant toward his love..
Not sure of anything as of now...

Superbly written..👏
Loved puppies for many...
Waiting 4 nxt..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Now that Geet has openly accepted Maan as manu's dad things will settle down. Now Maan can focus on making Geet accept him.
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Awesome...Geet has accepted maan as manu''s father. Now ma'am doesn't need anything more as Geet herself confessed the truth. Now he has to win her. Think she is already getting affected by him but not able to trust completely. Maan has to make her realise his love for her and remove her insecurities . Hope everything goes well now. She has pecked him. That is the initial step. So hoping maaneet will get together soon. Good work babbie... 👏
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Lovly upart... Geet s breakng down @ she said tat manu s maan baby. Both r feelng vry emotional ... Lovd it... Continue soon waitng
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finally geet told maanu is maan son
she poured her greif and suffering to maan, nice part dear loved it
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Finall geet accept maanu his blood he supported her making sleep with him maanu got cute gift puppies from u&s geet was scared how to face too all maan assured her waiting for maan confess his feelings to geet nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Now Geet accepted that manu is maan's son.
Now manu can call maan as Dad.
Now can we get Maaneet papmpering Manu or Manofying Manu. Please

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Posted: 10 years ago



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Updating


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 120


Part - 121


Things started clearing of their own bcoz every single change in situation changed whole line of thoughts ,, we cn't overlook d positive efforts of others ,, every genuine selfless efforts left its mark on our heart .

Maan nd his family's behaviour cleared all d mist from Geet's mind ,, she felt their pain nd helplessness ,, in present situation her indifference cd make them more woeful ,, she cd ignore Maan nd DM but not Yash uncle nd Rashi ,, she love nd respect them a lot ,, 1st she bore all d pains for their happiness nd now she cd accept all for their happiness too ,, when Maan is promising to be with her then she cn give him a chance for Manu nd all ,, with this decision she took a deep sigh nd looked at Maan who was calmly cherishing their closeness .

Maan looked deep in her eyes , aroused taking support of his elbow ,, he knew that she was in dilemma ,, this was d high time to bring her out from her dismay ,, Maan's instance look made geet restless nd she tried to avert her eyes but Maan held her face to make her look at him .

Maan: Geet , kya humara rishta aur ye nazdeekiyan kaafi nahi hume pass lane ke liye ? kya tumhe kuch mahasoos nahi hota ? kya meri aankhon mei tumhe apne liye kuch nazar nahi aata ? bolo na Geet .

How cd she lie ,, she felt many emotions in those deep honey brown eyes but she was confused in d effect of her dreadful past ,, she never thought in her life what is love nd how it feels ?

Geet : in my whole life I saw only haterd nd sympathy for me in all's eyes ,, I don't know what u feel for me now ? u always hate me .

Her words pierced his heart ,, she was right at her place ,, she experienced only one relation nd love related to that ... That was d relation of a mother with her child .

Maan woefully : I promise u Geet , i'll make u realize love ,, pure love for u ,, i'll give u all relations with respect , give me a chance to prove u that it's my love for u not guilt nd sympathy .

Geet shuddered ,, her heart beats increased nd she felt ripples nd tingles in her body ,, with moist eyes she nodded in a yes nd her that lil gesture filled Maan's heart with joy ,, he beamed nd thanked her many time hiding his face in d curve of neck ,, his warm breath nd soft touch of his lips on that sensitive part giving goosebumps to her ,, to save her from this sweet tourtur their small angel came with his newly found buddies ,, both parted with d sweet barking of puppies nd Manu was mimicking them .

Rest of d day went well ,, Maan was free to drool over her nd taking all care of Manu like a doting dad ,, at night Geet took d charge of making dinner for all ,, helper finished other works nd retired to her home ,, Geet brought dinner for U&A Sam with Maan nd Manu who wr carrying bags filled with gifts for d couple ,, they spent a good time with them nd then came back to their home ,,Geet set d table for their dinner nd Maan went to lock nd check all d doors ,, their small family was settled for dinner ,, there was no snags nd hindrance now ,, all wr enjoying together.

Maan: Manu , baby what name u gave to ur buddies ?

Manu: uncle Maan , one is jojo n nd othel is goofy .

Geet smiled at his craziness for jojo nd T&J ,,, she was happy seeing her child's happiness ,, Maan was feeding Manu ,, there was a contented smile on his face.

Geet left manu with Maan nd securing n checking d things ,, everything was new in this new house ,, she received Heer's call nd both talked for few min,,

she didn't know when Maan nd manu talked to his parents ,, Maan had a long talk with Yash ,, asked about new house nd thanked him , then told him about his letter nd Geet's reaction ,, Maan said sorry to Yash for giving this pain to all ,, both talked on business matters too .

That was a peaceful nd night for all ,, next day was off which was sufficient to settle them ,, from coming week Geet had to join her prev office ,, Manu to his creche nd Maan planned to visit office nd then new project's site.

All well settled in their routine like they wr before ,, Maan schedule became lil hectic boz he spent his day in this office attends meetings for their upcoming project nd spent many hrs of nyt on skype nd conference meeting of KC ,, his Dad was in work load in his absence so he tried his best to handle max work from here .

Few days slipped peacefully ,, Maan didn't left any chance to show his love for Geet nd slowly Geet to started responding ,, she didn't say anything openly but her eyes nd bashfulness reflect her acceptance ,, everything was going fine but Maan was sad boz Geet was not talking to his parents ,, her hesitance was creating a gap between her nd his parents ,, this thing was paining all but bearing quietly ,, Maan was trying to get any chance to bring them close nd to share their hearts but nothing was coming in his mind ,, he didn't know that his Dad was many step ahead from him .

Annie's daughter turned 40 days old nd there was a small function in d family ,, it was a tradition that family of maternal side gave dresses , jewellery ,gifts nd dry fruits to their daughter nd G child as well as for d whole family nd close relatives , Annie was in UK nd her baby was very weak so they did a small pooja at her Naming ceremony but now they planned a big function nd whole Khurana family was going to UK .

Yash nd Rashi talked to Maan nd forced him to bring Geet nd Manu with him to attend d family function ,, their this demand put Maan in trouble , he new that Geet wdn't agree for that ,, he was in a fix ,, after coming back from office he was in his room nd thinking how to ask Geet .

There Geet got a msg which made her restless nd put her in dilemma ,, she didn't know how to reply nd face this situation ,, it was really very tough for her .

Maan and Geet both wr muddling with their mind nd heart ,, d time was hard for both to face bcoz both didn't want to hurt each other nd it was d matter of their elders happiness.


Precap --- a family visit to UK ...


Part - 122



sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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