MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-12~ UPDATED Pt 122 / Pg 100 / 26th Feb..... - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Geet sad! she is thinking of Maan! Manu misses Maan! Geet n Manu arrive! Prem picks them up! Geet stunned seeing Maan! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago





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Updating


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 116



Part - 117

There Geet was staring at him ,, it was unbelievable for her ...how cd he be there ,, she left him in Ind airport then how he was here before her ,,, no ,, he cdn't be ,, she was hallucinating but manu is with him ,, lost in a delusion she dragged herself near Maan ,, he was still smiling at her nd shyly looked at Prem nd U&A Sam ,, Manu too was looking at Geet with a smile ,, Geet went close to Maan nd in her daze she lift her hand nd going to touch Maan's face when Manu broke her delusion.

Manu: mommy ,, see my uncle Maan is hele (here).

She startled nd pulled back her hand ,, she was hell shocked seeing Maan there ,, she cdn't be thought in her dream that he cd be here .. How ? all r watching at her with a smile nd she was blinking swiftly to get d reality that she was watching right then narrowed her eyes ,, lastly Maan spoke.

Maan: G e e t .

She literally gasped placing her hand on her mouth then mumbled after few sec ... Aap sach mei ho ?

Maan blinked with a smile nd replied: yes Geet .

Geet: h h how it possible ?

Now U Sam came to clear her confussion : Geet , mr khurana came few hrs back only .

Geet: but ,, I I left him there then how ...

Maan: my flight was direct Geet .

Geet : what ?? ur flight ?( she looked at him confused narrowing her eyes )

Maan: humm.

Geet : means ?? I m not getting this ?

Maan : i'll tell u later Geet ,, everything was shocking nd surprizing for me too ,, 1st take some rest .

U Sam : yes Geet he is right , u cn ask him later ,, there is some more to come .

Geet: some more ,, means .. God I m not getting what is going on here ? nd nd why we r here U Sam ? let's go home we'll talk there.

U Sam: we r at home dear ,, there is no need go anywhere ?

Geet was now going to lost ,,, nothing was going in her brain ,, everything was like a riddle for her ,, she looked at all puzzled ,, her this state fearing Maan inwardly ,, didn't know how she wd react for all this ? He himself was in confussion nd d all facts ,, he had to talk his Dad only then he was able to clear Geet's dilemma ,, but Prem cleared one thing which was another shock for Geet.

Prem: my dear Geet this is d surprize for u ,, Khurana uncle purchased this house for u ,, so now on wards u r living here .

Geet: what ??? what did u say ? ( this was unbelievable for her ,, Yash uncle bought this big house for her ,, when ? Why ? )

Maan: Geet come nd sit here 1st .

Maan encircled his arm around Geet's shoulder nd brought her near sofa nd made her sit ,, d helper placed d coffee tray nd asked to A Sam what that d lil kid take ,, A Sam told her to bring jouice for Manu ,, Geet was not surprized but shocked ,, so many things happened all of sudden ,, she sat holding her head in his hands Maan looked at all helplessly ,, U Sam sat near Geet nd cleared some facts to make her understand .

U Sam: Geet , it's true ,, Mr Khurana bought this house for u ,, he kept all secret , but we knew from start even Prem too ,, Mr Khurana visited here to arrange everything nd nd requested us to keep hide ,, this was d surprise for u .

Geet (lost) : it's a shock for me ,, when he came here nd why he purchased this house for me ?

She looked at Maan questioningly but maan shrugged his shoulders nd nodded his head gesturing that he didn't know .

A Sam: his condition was like u Geet ,, he didn't know anything .

This was really hard for Geet to digest ,, things wr puzzling her more nd she was rubbing her mind to understand something .

Prem handed coffee to all nd Manu was having his juice in Maan's lap ,, all wr exchanging looks seeing Geet quiet nd confused .

Prem: Geet yaar we know that this is a big surprise for u but why r u so shocked ,, it's simple yaar ,, Khurana uncle came here nd he he purchased this house for u ,, this is a surprise gift for u nd ,, now see it nd thanked him ,, he'll clear ur all puzzles .. OK.

Geet : yes , u r right ,, I have to ask him .

She replied looking at Maan thoughtfully ,, her look gave a shiver to him ,, he understood that time has come to open everything on Geet ,, he tried to pacify her .

Maan: Geet , we'll talk to dad later about all this ,, I m also clueless about all ,, 1st u both take some rest .

A Sam: yes dear ,, we'll talk later ,, now we r going home nd join u at lunch ,, I m instructing d helper who'll make d lunch for all ,, Prem r u joining us ?

Prem: no thanks aunty ,, Heer is waiting , her family is coming to visit us .

A Sam: OK .

Prem: Geet, i'll call after reaching home ,, Ok Bye nd take rest ,, Bye Manu buddie ,, we'll play TM.

Manu: OK , uncle Plem ,, bye ,, uncle Plem I bought gifts fol u nd heel aunty .

Prem : really ,, thanku so much buddie .. love u a lot.

Prem loved Manu nd shook hand with Maan saying bye nd then gave a side hug to Geet .

Prem: take rest , we'll come TM ,,, Bye U &A Sam .

He left nd A Sam too went to kitchen to instruct d helper for lunch .

U Sam: Geet ,, we showed d whole house to mr Maan nd now he'll show u ,, this helper lives here from mrng to eve nd did all d work for both houses ,, both d houses r connected from back side ,, OK , now take rest dear nd we all meet at lunch ,, bye ,,, bye sunny .

Manu: bye , U Sam .

Geet: I m also coming uncle ,, my whole stuff is in my home ,, come baby.

U Sam: no,, ur all things wr shifted here ,, ur bedroom is closed nd Mr khurana kept something for u there ,, go nd check ,, ur old house is at it's nd u cn check if something left there .

U&A Sam left nd there wr only Maan nd Geet with manu ,, who also was waiting to go his home .

Manu: mommy ,, come home ,, I 'll play thele with uncle Maan ,, we play uncle Maan,, OK.

Maan: this our new home baby nd we'll play here , OK.

Manu: oul new big home ?

Maan: yes sunny .

ho o o ,,, manu was excited getting big home .

Maan was in a fix what to say ,, now they wr alone ,, he didn't know how Geet wd react ,, she was oddly quiet nd her this silence was fearing him ,, he was boosting his heart to make her understand without hurting her feelings.


Precap ---- a letter to Geet ... ????


Part - 118



sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




hello babbie

aaj tum day time aayi... mujhe bahut acha laga❤️



😃 ye beautiful banner kiske liye...?
love it..😃
tum koi story start ker rahi ho kya..😃
sach bolna...😃
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Originally posted by: singh24


😃 ye beautiful banner kiske liye...?
love it..😃



ye banner nahi meri puraani siggie hain😃
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



ye banner nahi meri puraani siggie hain😃


😲 siggi .lo.. mujhe laga banner hei...😆
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Originally posted by: singh24


😲 siggi .lo.. mujhe laga banner hei...😆



banner hotha tho writer ka naam hotha na😉
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



banner hotha tho writer ka naam hotha na😉


😆 neeche hei na tumhara...

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😆 neeche hei na tumhara...



i was bhatking on ur nd priya's trd..

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i was bhatking on ur nd priya's trd..



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