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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part eagerly waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice work. Thanks for the new one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESUME LOVELY
KEEP IT UP
CONT. SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrast on new thread

part 19
Awesome update
Thank god..dev n doc's words make maan realise abt geet condition
he s now taking with her softly ..but poor geet is scare of him thinking he s doing thhs for baby

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 20
Awesome update
Coffee scene was really
Hope maan wont leaver her
precap seems scary
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago


PART - 21


Both staying together in same mansion,still so far from each other. Maan stop scolding and threatening Geet but she her pain was still same.


2 months passed and her first tremister completes. She do everything which was good for baby and Maan also.


Geet made Maan dependend on her,even for small samll things. She become his habbit. Without her he cant even able to search single paper. But she was only his habbit not his need. Emotionally he had no connectivity.



Geet gloomed when he left her daily. Maan was womenizer and he wont ready to change for anyone. Not even for his baby for whom he brought her in his mansion. Since morning she was not feeling well. Now her morning sickness start troubling her more. But she hide it from Maan as he wasn't available any time.


Its 11 pm. Maan was with his bed pleasure. He was completely lost in her soft arms and exploring every detail. His all servants are instructed not to disturb him at this time so they never couraged to call him.


Vinny went to give milk to Geet and he dropped the glass when he found her weltering on a bed like a fish thrown out of water. His hand turn cold. Without wasting a minute he alert all the servants. All came in her room but had no clue what they would do in this situation. Geet no able to told anything and Maan wasnt there. But seeing her tossing on bed in extreame pain they forgot about their jobs and called Maan.


He nearly about to explode. His blood race until the rythem of his passion roared in his ears. But his phone irritating him. He raised his arm but the girl with him pulled him to her and he ignored the call.


One by one all trying to contact him but he doesnt pick any call. All scared so much. 'Vinny dont waste time. Sir call nahi lenge. Ab hume hi kuchh karna hoga.' Meghan suggested seeing the condition.


All are paniced. 'but what we can do?' he asked helplessely.


'call the ambulance from near by hospital. Till i call Dev sir. And Micky you collect all the reports of mam. Doc definatily asked about treatment history.' Megan instruct all and they proceed.


He called at KM. Luckily coz of Alya both Dev and Meera were awaked. Dev roaming in room with her. 'aap so jao iska to pura raat chalna hai.' Meera said to him.


'dont worry. She is almost in sleep. Then our own sweet time starts.' he winked and smiled naughtily.


Same time his phone rang. Meera quickly ans before Alya start crying. Meghan in a pace told her everything. 'dont panic Meghan. Call the ambulance fast. Main or Dev aa rahe hai.' she instruct him.


'mam we did all the arrangement. Bas aap or Dev sir please jaldi aa jaiye. Maan sir b nahi hai or na hi phone ans kar rae hai.' his trembling voice scared Meera alot.


She cuts the call. Dev hear everything and asked. 'Geet...'


'Geet? What happened to her?' Dev's eyes narowed.


'i dont know Dev. But Meghan sound so scared. They called bhai but...' Meera not even completes when Dev cuts her.


'but wo to apni night life me busy honge na. Koi jiye ya mare,he doesnt care.' Dev gritted his teeth in anger.



'Dev dont waste time and lets go. Geet need us.' Meera calmed him and asked to hurry.


'Meera you stay here with Alya. I ll go.' Dev suggest.


'nahi Dev akele apse nahi hoga. Or waise b yaha mujhe bechaini hoti rahegi. Dont worry about kids. Parth is already with dadima. Alya ko peggy sula degi. Main use bulati hu aap car nikalo.' Meera wont ready to stay at home as she was worried for Geet.


Dev went out and drove out his car from garage meantime Meera to came there and both left in his car. Both reached to Maan's mansion where Ambulance came to pick her.

'Dev i'll go with her in ambulance. Aap car me aa jaiye.' Meera quickly moved out from the car and went inside the ambulance with her. Geet's condition was worst. Her eye bolls were not stable and was on the verge of lossing concious. They quickly placed oxyegen mask so she could breath. Soon they were reaced hospital and quickly she got all the medical attention. Dev reached and complete all the formalities. She do her all tests. Dev and Meera was so scared,dont aware what's going inside. Though he trying to stay strong in front of her but deep inside he himself was scared.


Doc come out and Dev asked about her condition. To which she only gave a dreadful glare to him. Both's heartbeat was unstable and her glare somewhere told them that she was not well. Now they only praying for her and baby. Even all servants at home doing the same that nothing will happen to baby and Geet.


Whole night passed. Both Dev and Meera,wont closed their eyes for a minute. Both stayed leaving their four month daughtet with a servant. Meera called peggy to know about her. Alya was crying for her mother. But they cant leave Geet in such a crucial condition. Geet's condition was stable but she was under observation that's why her doc dont gave discharge. On the other side all servants at mansion spend their whole night in prayers and when sun dwan their eyes were glued to main door in her wait.


At 4:30 am Maan arrived at home and glared everyone as they had done some crime. But today no one scared of his glare. Infact they just ignore him as all are angry with him. Maan threw his coat at sofa and start shouting on them. 'what the hell was emergency that you disturb me last night?' how dare you? First tell me who couraged to call me again and again. It was his last mistake.' He was shouting on them madly. But no one was readt to talk to him so he threaten them more.


'sir we all did so if you want fires all of us.' Vinny came forward and took the responsibility.


Even Maan was so confused on their courage. Before he could react they all heared a sound of car. All rushed to check and they were right. Dev brough Geet back. She looks feeble and was sitting on wheel chair pulled by Dev. Meera walking by her side. Meghan and Vinny rushed to them and help him. They brought her inside. Maan saw her and moved towards her but Dev not allowed to touch her. He carried Geet in his arms.


'Vinny one hot water bottle and vegetable soup fast.' he istruct and Vinny went quickly to arrange everything. 'Micky opened one room which was neat and clean.' he moved to Micky and instruct him.


'sir come this way.' Mickly show him the direction and Dev moved with Meera,carrying Geet in his arms.


Maan was so confuse and worried to. He wants to know what exactly happened but no one was ready to talk to him right now. Micky opened one room and Dev maid her laid on bed. Meera arrange bed as per her needs. She asked for extra pillows. Micky quickly provide and she placed underneath her feet. Maan came there and asked. Geet was still not fully concious and others were annoyed.


'bro i dont wanna make a scene here so please leave.' Dev asked him in a very decent manner,holding his all anger.


'Dev pls.' Meera signaled him to stay calm.


Both left the room. 'Dev can you pls tell me what happened to Geet and why dont you guys allow me to meet her? What happened and how is my baby?', Maan's question now irritates him like hell and he loose his all control.


'your baby? Really bro? Just stop faking this concern. You are the most selfish person i had come across,who only cares for himself. Last night Geet was weltering in immence pain thats why all trying to made contact to you but you are so much busy with some girl that paid no heed to any call. Atlast they called us and we took her to hospital. If we failed to reach on time na bro then we lost both Geet and baby. Her inner wound swelled due to some reason and she was in danger but apko kya farak parta hai. Apko to bas apni aiyyashiyon se matlab hai. Bro i just dont understand what you want. Jab apko uski parwah hi nahi hai then why the hell you kept her with you. Trust me bro if she doesnt force me i would not brought her here again.' Dev burst his all anger on him without holding any fear. He glared him and his jaws clenched hard. For the first time he roared and on his elder brother.


Meera gave her medi and explain all the servants about her routine. They listen her carefully and assured her that they will take care of her. Meera knows how much angry was Dev so after feeding Soup she came and joied Dev.


'its ok Dev. Bhai na samjhe hai na samjhenge.' she to taunts him indirectly. 'lets go kids are waiting for us.' She diverted him and asked to leave.


'Vinny we are leaving but incase of emergency like last night no need to waste time. Directly call us ok?' Dev gave instructions to everyone that infuture they must act fast then last night and left.



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Posted: 10 years ago
what did he do
if she loses her baby then its over
then he will have nothing left
she wont be well geet
so much happened
aadat she may be
but inki zarorat inhe nahin hai
and seems geet doesnt need him either
nor does her baby
thank god for the servants
and dev meera
they left all to be with her
she was in danger of losing her baby
and her life
whgat was maan doing
lets not go there
its okay like meera said he wont change
if he really cared he would set her free when she has the baby
but he wont
cause he is self centred
no one asked him to change
and best he doesnt
but if he thinks that he can carry breaking geet like this
then he might as well let geet be with family
why break her little by little
thats gonna hurt her more
that was too close again
am worried next she will lose her baby
and her will to live
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update i hope mann ko thodi akkal aaye
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice n painful part
maan is so selfish n mean
very upset with maan
how can be so careless
Geet is saved by dev
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg it's height of carelessness. I mean if someone is calling him at that time when he ordered everyone to not to call him at this time , then he should pick up the call. Doesn't he know that a pregnant women is staying at his home. Any emergency could occur anytime. It's the extreme height of carelessness. Thank god dev and meers reach on time otherwise anything could be happened. waiting for next dear

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