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This update was wonderful...
I loved the way you had put out the emotions of every character...
Meet.. She knows she did a mistake.. it hurts her deeply that Maan and Geet love each other.. but she knows she has to sort out the mess that she created.. Like she said, the love was never hers to hold on to..
Maan... i guess he is totally in a mess.. he is not able to bring himself to believe that he loves Geet.. what he has for Meet is so different.. he liked meet a lot.. he cares and respects and likes her loads, but not love her as much as he loves Geet.. And here, he is not a guy who plays around with relations.. so the total revelation made him totally shocked and made his mind a mess..
Yes, when he loved Meet, why didnt he recognize the difference when he met Geet.. but i guess, whenever he found things were different, he thought it was coz of her trip and influence of her sister.. may be if he had known they were twins and identical ones, he would have got doubts.. and more than that he actually loved all the changes in her and so didnt seem to ponder too much over it..
He hated that he was lied to.. he couldnt vent out his anger on Meet when she was already suffering.. and every irritation was impended on Geet.. in the shock the only thing he felt was he was lied to and loathed himself coz he got close to Geet when he was supposed to be in love with Meet and was getting married to her..
But the whole Geet going away thing made him so restless. he couldnt understand what was bothering him.. Ideally he should have been in peace.. but the reality was totally opposite.. he missed her in everything he did.. and everything reminded him of her..
His heart loved her, whereas the mind was playing games to not accept.. but then hell broke loose, when he heard about her accident.. no amount of his own convincing could stop him reaching for her..
And then Geet.. her situation is also totally worst.. she had actually thought of shoving him off and ended up in falling deep and deep for him.. She didnt plan to fall in love with him.. but it just happened and she went with the flow.. and u cant control over it..
but then the only thing she did ghalat was not telling him the truth before getting physically close.. and everytime they were together, she wanted him to say her name instead of Meet when she knew he has been kept in the dark..
But the last part of the update was completely FABULOUS.. they were close yet so far..
She loved him.. when she knew he had come for her, she couldnt fathom herself to go in front of him and find her peace.. her guilt in her conscience is not letting her do that..
and the part where he sees her going and stands numb.. omg.. it was freaking awesome the way you had put in their situation.. he wants to hold her, but is numb coz realization hits.. he loves this damn woman who is finding it hard to even walk, but doing all by herself just becoz she loves him and doesnt wanna hurt him more..
Last part.. 😲 are you freaking kidding me??? I want a big part if its last and then usse bhi zyaada big EPILOGUE..
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