MG ss- LOVE ME NOT #3 LAST PART-22 Pg-31| EPILOGUE Pg-41 Jan-26th

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"...The course of thy love never goes swift

For thou shalt fathom the hurt of drift

How shall thou hold it... firm yet gentle

Hearts entwined with fates entangled

Let her go yet hold her tight

Bleed and die or hold the fight"


"Charmed and bewitched and lost in bliss

Loving you all is what I wish

Chained by fate but my heart laid bare

Love Me Not...If You dare!"


Story So Far...

Maan and Meet met in college and they knew there was something between them from that instant. They were drawn towards that underlying attraction and realized they were in love! Things were beautiful when they accepted the fast and confessed that they were meant to be together. Two years of soft subtle flourishing relationship made them realize that they were forever. But Meet had a thesis to submit in a reputed University in the US and had to leave for the same for 6 months. Maan, unable to hold himself back and proposed for an engagement before she left. So the couple were happily engaged before Meet flew off to pursue her dream.

Things took a turn when Maan suddenly lost contact with Meet and her family in the course of the months that Meet was in the US. restless and worried, he tried to look for her which went in vain. After seven whole months he got a text from Meet that she was Back in India and that she'd like to meet him.

Surprises and shock awaited when Maan met a very different Meet altogether...Geet! She was twin of Meet who had been studying in the US for a long time about which Maan wasn't aware. Geet, bound by her promise to Meet, had to pose as Meet to push maan away, but guilt ate into her. And as she interacted more with Maan...she never knew when lowered her barriers, stopped pretending to be Meet, became herself and fell for him. Maan, all along, with an impression that he was head over heels in love with Meet, never realized what game the sisters played.

As Maan and Geet take their love to the next level, their intimacy grows and thats when fate conspires and tells Maan the truth. hurt by deception, he vents out his pain to Geet. unable to take this rejection, Geet goes back to the US.




Kiss me sweet
I'm sleeping in silence
All alone
In ice and snow


In your eyes
I search for my memory
Lost in vain
So far in the scenery
Hold me tight,
And swear again and again
We'll never be apart


If you could touch my feathers softly
I'll give you my love
We set sail in the darkness of the night
Out to the sea
To find me there
To find you there
Love me now
If you dare...


Kiss me sweet
I'm sleeping in sorrow
All alone
To see you tomorrow...



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Edited by kawaii_geet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii 😃

Congratulations on the new thread 🥳 🤗

Seeing the second banner I really wanna kill you 😈

Where the hell are you taking this story?

What pleasure do you seriously get from making Geet suffer? In ANA you've done that, as well as in Parineeta, oh and not to mention Fairy Tale!

ASH!!! 😭 😭

You're breaking my heart here. 💔

I am absolutely dreading catching up. 😆

I am only 6 parts behind on LMN now 😛 and will comment as soon as I completely catch up. 😳

Love you lots and may you have many more threads. 🤗

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P.S Yayy I'm first.. 😆

Even if it's not under an update. 😉

Been a long time before I came first. 😛

Edited by Jannat-Fictions - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread👍🏼
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congrats for the new thread !!!!!
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Update as soon as possible dear...
Cant wait for maan's reaction
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congrats on yr new thread...
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Congo for new thread :-D
waiting 4 update
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Hi dear... yesterday I finished reading all the 20 parts...
But it was too much for me to take , so commenting now...
OK before talking about the story ,I just want to tell u about your writing...
Even though it is a complicated plot, u have written it so nicely... I loved your writing very much...
But u have given enough twists in only 20 parts

Maan n meet love story was cute... may be it is considered as love at first sight... But confessed late...
maan's condition when he was not able to reach meet was unbearable
Bechara he suffered a lot and he is suffering now too...

How he adjusted to geet's behavior... he just thought that meet is changed because of geet...
He must be very shocked to face the truth...

I don't want to blame anyone... They didn't had any bad or mean intention...
But they were concerned for their loved once...
Meet for maan. And geet for meet...
But only mistake is not thinking of the consequences further...

Meet didn't even thought that how it may effect maan n geet...
K now the worst has happened... And all 3 of them r suffering...

And coming to geet's part... She was just helping her sister... No one can able to refuse meet's request in her state
now...
But no one can control a heart ... It was not so easy for her also...
Pretending as meet.,. Loving him as geet... But at the same time getting hurt by the reality that maan is loving meet not her
Can it get anymore complicated than this...

Meet could have stopped this when she found out geet's indifference behavior...
But she ignored... Blinded with her ultimate motive to make maan move on from her

Maan geet's shimla's trip was superb... It's just the dream come true for geet... spending some time with him before the storm...
Geet's confession part with the song was awesome...
And I never thought maan will face the truth like that...

He misunderstood her... and what shocked me was maan's reaction...
He was like a zombie... Not knowing his own feelings for geet...
He is hurt that she left... But at the same time not yet realized his feeling for her...
Oh god... and I am confused from meet's word to maan...like...u were always geet's ... some thing like that..

May be she is telling like this because maan didn't recognized her...

Can't blame anyone... But the love which is responsible for their haste decisions...

I want maan to find geet...and at the same time don't want meet to get hurt...

I don't no how the story goes further...
Already this much twists u have given... Please don't make geet suffer... She is not at fault...

Waiting for maan's reaction now...

I have not read some updates in Ana as it was too painful
Will read as soon as possible
Please don't hurt geet

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congrats on the new thread

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