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azaina

@azaina

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -indu-

update is still under process... but lamha wala milega...😉

wow ... di long ke saath .. hot n sizzling bhi dena 😉

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

ab main kya likhoon comment mein. sab ko sirf likes maarthi gayi .🤣

Edited by priya111111 - 10 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

His dadaji

That was funny

So she wants lying

But that was good

Hmmm maan finally you said it

She just wanted to hear it once

Not much she is asking is she dude

Wow yeh ladki bhi naa

She sure knows how to make him confess

And all this while she was talking about his Dada

Ahhh they are cute

She is perfect for him

So the sisters wanted him marry from their family

But in the end he can't marry three girls

Good they thought geet will be perfect for him

And she is

Maan bhi naa kitni mushkil se I love you kaha

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maaneetkimeet

@maaneetkimeet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awww so Cute n lovely

Edited by maaneetkimeet - 10 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I really liked this one 😃

cute OS

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

lovely os indu absolutely loved it

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

hi indu

lovve this story ..specially the last part ..geet was kissed by dadaji..hahaha ..

its a beautiful confession os ..

thank u

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Beautiful os..
ek secret batao I knew it from beginning that its ur os..

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

lovely os

maan did say the words

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

CONGO for the OS indu😃

An os written on a given scene... and the scene was so aptly included here... Ghsp ki yaad bhi dilaadi... the first half of the story where geet is cribbing for hearing those words and maan khadoos banke maze le raha hain...

the second half of the os was awesome... the way geet was narrating the night scene... it looked like she was narrating a horror incident... i loved that part a lot ... and later when the full truth is out it was like oyyee teri😆

thanks a lot for writing for dil se... wish to read more of u there😳