MAANEET OS ~ OUR FILMY LOVE STORY

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~ OUR FILMY LOVE STORY ~





Maaneet sat on sofa with lowered head in a spacious hall of lavish mansion . Their parents and siblings were sitting on opposite sofa . Their parents were giving them angry glares while their siblings were glancing at them with teasing looks . Who will believe thattwo superstars of Bollwood were actually scared of their parents ??


" dare to answer Maan " spoke Mr.Khurana with high tone..


" hmmm dad actually wo " stammered Maan while giving his answer..


" Geet hume aapse yeh umeed nahi thi " complained Mrs.Handa with a sad face and Geetdidn't dare to raise her head..


" but mumma maine toh kuch nahi kiya joh kiya woh inhone kiya " meekly said Geet poiting towards Maan andin return got a glare for him..


" acha maine kya kiya tum bhi toh bade maze le rahi thi and now u areaccussing me " retaorted back Maan standing up from sofa..


" Maan chup chap baith jaiye " outragely commanded Mr.Khurana and Maan like a obedient child immediately sat down..


" Maan agar aapko I LOVE YOU hi kehna tha toh akele mein bolte..yeh kya shooting ke time propose kar diya Geet aur wo bhi kiss ke saath " annoyingly said Mrs.Khurana..


" haabhai itni bhi kya desperation thi " teasingly told Vicky winking at him and Maan showed him a punch..


" aur haa jab humne inn sahabzade ko kaha tha Geet ki photo dekhne ke liye rishte ke liye toh inhone staright away maana kar diya yeh bolkar ki dadi I am busy shooting for my new film " exclaimed dadi showing her big eyes to Maan..


" kya ?? wo photo Geet ki thi " shockingly asked Maan..


" ji haa beta " replied dadi..


" maa Geet ne bhi same reason diya tha jab humne unko Maan ki photo di thi " told Mrs.Handa..


Both families wereknown producers of film industry and were friends . Maaneet were also childhood friends but got seperated when Maan was 11 yrs old and Geet 7 yrs old bcoz of Maan studies . Khurana's have decided to send him to abroad for his studies . After Maan's arrival to India , both didn't get time to meeteach other . They both wanted to become actors but never took their parent's help . They set their foot inthe industry by their own will and hardwork and soon become superstars bcoz of their breathtaking looks and phenomenol acting but never got to chance to work together whereasfamilies were planning for their marriage..


" ab kya kare hum..saaremedia mein inke proposal ke baat spread hu chuki hai " tensed Mr.Handa spoke breaking silence..


"shaadi karni hai aur kya " said dadi shrugging her shoulders shocking Maaneet..


" but dadi thodi din toh hume boyfriend-girlfriend ki zindagitoh jeene do " whinned Maan while Geet nodded her head making a puppy face as if agreeing to him..


" aap logo ne jo karna tha wo kar liyaab humari baari hai " told Mr.Khurana with authorative tone and Maaneet made a baby face..


So everyone decided to marry them after a week and got busy in their marriage talks except for bride and groom who were sitting with face inbetween their hands and giving each other looks..


" chaliye bhai ab hume apni FILMY LOVE STORY bataiye aur sabse important shooting mein kiss ka chakar " excitedly said Annie while Vicky and Rajji ( Geet's sis ) too forced them to reveal their love story..


" oye Annie..FILMY LOVE STORY kaise " asked Geet confusingly.. " kaise kya..aap dono ki love story film set par shuru huyi isliye FILMY LOVE STORY " replied Annie with a wide smile..


" accha thik hai..here u go " said Geet and started telling about their FILMY LOVE STORY..


Both Maaneet got offer for a film from same producer and both instantly said yes for the film as the script was really good and secondly their character's name in film were Maan and Geet only. As usually their first meeting was totally wierd.. Geet entered set and started talking to everyone bcoz of her chirpy nature. She asked about Maan and director told her about his location..


" hii..myself Geet Handa..ur co-actor" introduced Geet herself toMaan standing beside him.. Maan was sitting on chair playing on his I-pad . He looked towards her on hearing her voice and then spoke rudely " hii "..


" itna sukha hii " Geet made a cute frowning face..


" aur kaise hii bolte hai Ms.Geet Handa " said Maan totally engrosed in his game..


" well forget it..I am not in a mood to fight " said Geet and walked towards director..


Director made them understand their scene and gave them dialogues to read . After 30 mins , both come back in their desired dresses and started shooting for their first ever scene . It was a normal scene of their first meeting in film..


Days were going on shooting with each other . Maan was attracted to Geet from their first meeting and Geet was as usually ignorant to all these things .Their romantic scenes made them to fall for each other but both were not ready to confess their feelings and Maan was going insane bcoz of his love towards her and that dreams of her which didn't let him sleep peacefully . Their cute fights added more fun to their love story..


Finally after 3 months of shooting ,Maan decided to confess his love for her . He thought to ask her for a date after shooting last scene of their film . He was so excited . He was jumping in joy from morning and everyone was giving him wierd looks..


Maan entered set and roamed his eyes all over to look for Geet and found her standing with director . She was dressed in white suit with blue border on her dupatta as per the scene . She was looking breathtaking in that attire making Maan's heart skipped a beat.. He walked towards them smilingly and gave his charming smile to her . Director told them the scene and they started shooting..


Geet was sitting on swing cribbing to babaji " plz babaji let it snow..even 2-3 kg will be enough otherwise he will not say ILU to me " and it started snowing .Geet happily ran to call MSK..


She finds him in the alley and pulls him outside and says " I won so now tellme those magical words "..


" u think I don't wanna say those words to u " said Maan..


" but u troubled me so much for these magical words so I thought u didn'twanna say " told Geet making a baby face..


Geet was blabbering and suddenly Maan says " I LOVE UGEET " and shukran allah starts..


Maan comes closer to Geet and with serious tone confessed his love" I LOVE U GEET really..in real life"..


Geet shockingly looks at him with teary eyes . These words she wanted to hear from so many days from his mouth . All cast and crew were shocked this line was included in the scenes . The scene was to end with Maan saying saying ILU but from where this twist came..


Geet kissed him on his right cheek emotionally but Maan had other plans . He grabbed her face and without thinking about anything smacked his lips on her kissing her passionately . The media which was there to capture some behind scenes got superb news for their channels and it just took a minute for video to go viral and their parents got shock of their life after seeing news and immediately call them to Handa Mansion..


" rest u know " said Geet sighing . All gave Maaneet a teasing a look..


And finally after one week both got married in a grand way grabbing whole India's attention..


I have written this OS for DIL SE competition and luckily won too so now posting it seperately..


If u don't know about DIL SE forum then have a look..here is the link :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4254649/dil-se-for-geet-forum-last-note-page-no-138































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congrats preeti for winning in OS competition
loved ur story
maan and geet childhood friends but they parted away because maan went abroad for studies
both wanted to become actors and they succeded in their dream
maan and geet worked together in movie there started their love story
on last day shoot of movie maan actually said i love u geet in real and geet reciprocated to that and this news spread like fire so their parents asked them to marry ...
nice story
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Originally posted by: arunima.

Very cute os ... n congratulations ... party to banti hai ...chalo ialdi se mujhe party do aur DNJAK ka ud do ;)


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