the story was awesome... for the given scene u wrote this and that scene was shown beautifully and reminding us ghsp too...👏
maan ka hain bura haal... kashmash ki y he is feeling special for his chashmish😆...
but i loved some places where u shown maan inspecting geets actions minutely😆...
apt title too... the most beautiful phase of love to read... the phase where a person recognises slowly that they are in love...
thanks for such a beautiful story... am looking forward for some thing like this to happen now in ishqiya ... have got some glimpses there too😆