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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 17
I can only find one word SO DREAMY
Both their povs was amazing . This one journey from Geet's perspective shows she also likes Maan she was checking him out 😆
then she talks with sharmeen about her life partner would be that Maan overhears
The cable ride last part from Maan's pov was lovely having Geet so close him😳
On bus Geet falls asleep her head resting on his shoulder . She wakes up to see the proximity and Maan fixes her earring and the first " HI "
Maaneet conversation on Geet paying back the money was so sweet she wanted to return Rs 584
lovely superb 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Extremely sorry for the late reply...Was very busy as I was transferred to a new place...U have updated till part 17😲😲😲

As I have the access only for the first five parts reread the whole update leisurely...

What a damakka start to one of beautiful stories on Maneet.

Each character was beautifully introduced..

Maan the silent brooding one. Carrying the pain of a jilted lover.

Dadima,the strong pillar for veryone

Dev the Cansonava. Floating in the bliss of finding the ONE

Tara the fiestly one. Wary of the Cansonava Dev

And finally the Bambi Geet...The never give up attitude. Wanting for the return of her lover.

Locker has always being my favourite FF. For the first time I was involved in the story right from the first update. It had many first in my journey of Geet Fourm

I moved from a slient reader to a commentor .Ur writing forced me pen my thoughts

First FF where we fell in love with Devtara

Gave some amazing new words..Thud Thud ,Thudlicious,etc

Some of the most amazing banners

Beautiful VMs apt for the update

The list goes on and on

Was a part of the first journey of TL ,would like to participate in this journey as well
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Posted: 10 years ago
I feel two updates are good maybe because I am reading this FF for the first time and I like to read the detail and give that in comments what I liked . This time I could say more what I loved in updates .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Next update set on this thread or thread two if thread 2 then will finish this one soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
u can gv 2 updates per set.. but plz update after 2 or 3 days.. :))) not much delay.. :p

m addicted to the story now.. '**
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Posted: 10 years ago
I too wanted to read Locket from long pls PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayee sooo sweet


chapter 16
it is really war for naintara she works sooo hard and all the credit taken by dev khurana and even her tiffin also


chapter 17
hayee sooo awesome maan protecting geet
maan spoke his first word that too hi
such a nice romantic place to start their romance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 16
nice one
dev bossing over nt
aahan n relishing her tifin😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part17
very beautiful
reading it from geet pov was really amazing
sharmeen guessed it soo right but hamri bambi ko kuch samag kyu ni ata...she's soo innocent .
Aww their first convo was lovely...
N maan saying hi to her
cant w8 for next update...
Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi avi,
thanks for the pm..and sorry for the late comment...
chapter 11
geet and darji's relationship and bonding was very well portrayed ...i liked the rattling of geet to darji..and her doubts about her own self regarding the mysterious person who passed her a look that puzzled her to the core..

chapter 12
maan's insecurities and confusions has been very neatly written..i even wonder how could you bring those emotions in ur words that drown in me and i could feel it as mine...really ur a great and powerful writer the way u explained maan's restlessness and longing to see his geet was so heart touching...
mindblowing part..and the war between his ego and self was too good...but i was smiling when his sky height ego has crumbled down to earth with her one teary look...😆
so cute boy..however he tried he can't get himself to hate her.. that is the fact ..and u brought that scene very well..kudos to u👏
Edited by kalabhas - 10 years ago

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