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No, no please keep it coming.

part 7 - I'm really falling for this lover boy Maan, so cute. Rab de is one of my favourite movies since its very simple, so it makes sense for Geet to also like it. But Maan getting jealous of a celebrity is funny, yet cute. Their walk in the rain was the highlight.

chapter 13

chapter 14

chapter 11
even geet is thinking about maan
loved geet n darji's bonding and how geet take care of darji

chapter 12
very emotional part
first maan angry on geet and after knowing the truth gets angry on himself that he hurts himself
felt sorry for geet

chapter 13
loved the way naintara protects geet and helped her to know real intention of people in the world
NT wants to talk to dev but dev doesnt listen n then blames her only
its nice to see how dadimaa made geet sister of dev
good that dadimaa makes them separately know has to work n skip his enjoyment

chapter 14
so maan is sending to geet even without geet knowing about it.so sweet
its beautiful how geet explained about her part time job to darji
maan rushed for the trip knowing geet being there

chapter 15
amazing trip
how beautifully maan expresses his feelings in the dairy
maan n geet together in ride
maan consoling geet and fighting his emotions

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Sorry I have not commented for 15 part...
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chapter 15

part 10
lovely update
maan need a little push to express himself which he got in the form of aisha
aisha was a smart person who actually knows her way to get all the answers to her question
maan getting into her trap and telling everything about geet
she actually made it easy for him to confess his feelings to geet
really loved the way she explained things to him
in form of aisha he has finally got a friend to share his feelings
loved aisha's words were she advises maan to stay with geet always so that she become used to him her words were simple but it holds deep beautiful and true meaning
you have actually used simple but meaning lines and words for explaining maan and aisha's views with complicating things which actually seen in very few writers
amazing

hey first of all so sorry to comment so late but I was suffering from severe ear n throat problem since one week n also nt going 2 work. sorry

cha11-very hear touching update. darji brought geet up. u described their childhood hardship so well that we can feel the pain just by reading it . maan is affecting geet in a sense that she herself is clueless of it.

cha12- maan is in pain missing his parents, responsibility n now missing geet. geet is back but her indifference is hurting him that he refuses the first aid help. but finally in end he got to know geet problems.

cha13- innocent geet being tamed bt NT n also succeed in making her see the harsh reality of life where people like to take advantage of innocent n weak ones. at the end dadima realised that dev is using NT work so the intelligent lady separated both their works. good that will bring responsibility on his shoulder. new character is chipkoo zarin wondering what will b next

cha14- geet such a kind hearted girl. no wonder darji is so proud of her n trust her. silly girl is also making money account for the notes. deewana maan sending her notes. but will geet ever finds it's maan sending notes n will maan accept the money. deewana maan ka bhagaam bhaag on bike with the bus to meet her beloved after so many days. uff in donon ka ishaaron ishaaron mein baat karna kab khatam hogi...but it is cute

cha15- kabir our new entry which am sure I hate already. geet relishing spicy food while maan reluctant to eat road side stall food. these scenes depicts the likes n dislike of a person. maan had such an ego to misunderstand geet but bless adi's call to make him realise his mistake.