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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#551

Part 9

here comes our Tom nd Jerry with their never ending kich kich...Tara is afraid of getting scolded for being late nd Dev made her realize his mistake in his own style...Sasha nd Dev were fun in their little shot...

Liked the way how Dev proved his point to Tara about the project nd made her shut...lets see how long his I star will remain calm...

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Part 10

Aisha was the main focus in this part... A client which helped Maan realize what he actually need to do enjoy his personal nd professional life...Aww...Maan dreams of taking Geet on this Beach sometime in the future...

Lets see if Aisha will be there in future when Maan will be living his dreams with his Geet...

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Oh My! I am loving to read this epic story again.

Part-1

This one is the only ff where i love Dev-Tara story more than maan-geet & about dev's character her, totally flat over him. A complete carefree guy, charming, handsome, lives life to the full met a woman who is complete opposite of him. but as they say opposite attracts.

Part-2

Savitri Devi is a strong headed woman, who after losing precious people in her life still living for her grandchildren & KC. But her worry is maan who was so much attached to his parent, shy, introvert, a complete replica of his sibling, who is now way too quiet than he used to be before. Savitri Devi still needs to know what's troubling him.

Part-3

i laughed like hell, when naintara slapped Dev. Poor guy!

Part-4

Geet had missed maan like hell in these 2 years & along with that she had waited for him, waiting to tell him so much that had happen when he was away from his home.

Part-5

Like geet, maan too had missed her but some misunderstanding had kept him to go close to her & what's that we old reader knows it really well...

M sorry for commenting this late. Firstly, there was some personal problem i was dealing with & then i have to go through eye surgery & doctor recommend me not to use laptop more than 2-3hrs.

hope to get a pm from u for the latest update.

Edited by impoojaverma - 10 years ago

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Hello my dear Avi

😃 how is weekend..?

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

Part 7..
Here comes the silent love story or we can say crush of maaneet...
Oh god they didn't even shared a single word...
Both have that spark which makes them speechless when they r together,..
Msk Ki bolthi bandh in front of geet
So true Dev would have romantically said that song...
This maan has a longgg way to go to open his mouth...

I love the update dear... And I love this writing...u r writing the story in everyone's view...
Like in the previous part Dev n naina... and starting parts for each characters...
This is giving the better understanding of the characters...
Awesome writing...

Ha ha ha the devil warden... Actually she is not devil... It's her duty...

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dhanyabinu

@dhanyabinu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

thanks you so much but i can't able to read all the chapter because i have exam starting from 28th of this month. it will be finishing only end of feb. please don't cut be from the list . please,,,,,,,,,

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

awesome updates. all the songs perfectly suited the situation so wonderful selection

cha 6- dev very charming guy. tara getting frustrated with his flirty behaviour . I-star nice name. theme song tutu tu tara was so funny just like the elephant part. liked the virasat song

cha 7- maan is totally smitten by geet since college. both r playing the shy shy game. kya hoga inka. kab inki gaadi chalegi...uff

cha8- adi n pinky r cutie pie. am imagining our adi with muscles n all. enjoy their phone conversation. sujal want to b a good brother

cha9- am loving this dev tara story. dev answer abt learning rules made me laugh. I feel NT is true in the sense that we can't take credit of whole work by just rectifying a small mistake. pari has a crush on dev but he has eye only for his I-star

cha10- aisha wonderful character. finally maan open up to someone n aisha words gave him confidence. love him teasing aisha. love how he was thinking to bring geet at the beach n fight like other couples.

finally will only say am totally fida on ur style of writing

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Chapter-2

A bit o finsight into the lives of Khuranas...that was nice...

Already introvert Maan has totally went into his shell after his parents demise...thats hard to take, but the one hope he had seems to be losing and the shadow of that feeling seen by his dadi who couldn't pinpoint...wonder is Maan's love dev's love or he missed to see anything...hope he did but at the same time hope things doesn't go too tough...i guess we might see the cute nokh-jhok of maaneet if this is all mu of maan😆 (all the more i hope my comment is making sense😛)

The lyrics at the end...maan's pain in it...made me emotional...I better read them all fast, fast and see something real hopeful and colorful in Maan's life

Well so dadi knows something is wrong...will she gonna talk to Maan, will he reveal anything i doubt

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dqno1

@dqno1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: dhanyabinu
thanks you so much but i can't able to read all the chapter because i have exam starting from 28th of this month. it will be finishing only end of feb. please don't cut be from the list . please,,,,,,,,,

send me a pm when ur exam is over

best of luck 😃