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Posted: 10 years ago
part 8
hui adi pinki and sujal ki entry..

adi and pinky are too cute together...he is south indian..great..

oh toh maan was all dressed up on graduation..but his mood changed by the end of the night..areh geet nai ayi na isliye...may be he was plaaning to talk to her...poor him..
oh toh maan baabu chehke kyunki he got to know k road blockage ki vajah se geet bhi nai aa payi hogi...
i so much love maan's love for geet...

loved it


loved pinki and adi's convo too...
aww sujal is such acaring bro..failed maariage?? poor guy..
Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 9
something is terribly wrong in past of tara...curious to find out...
love the way how she always riles up and how dev finds it amusing...
so there is a pari angle to the story////...but how come pari knows tara?? am confused again...help!!!!


loved the description he gave about tag and brand value...but i guess he will be in shock as he is facing i star and she beleives he is #Back stabber, Credit stealer, show off # and it will take a long time for him to make her understand lol...2 years that is//:) am so loving this dev taara of urs..:)


so in the end he was not sleeping..just pretending..interesting!!!!!!!!!
Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 10
loved how u introduced ayesha in the story for him to understand things...
knowing the circumstances under which maan has to take responsibilities on his young shoulders it is quite understandable to why is he so reserved...glad that he cud open up to her and be his naughty self for a while..

loved how he relates everything with geet and has dremas of bringing her at the sam eplace..he is so in love with her..
glad that he got the new vigor to fight for his love..stand by her side..to get her used to his presence in her life..amazing
loved the following lines.//:
His mind had woven a hundred dreams with that gaze, of which the first one was definitely going to be putting his fingers under her chin and raising her eyes to meet his.
Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

^ aisse comment dekh ke dil ko thand padi

thank u😃



hehe thank you.. :p

i guess dat was d longest comment i hv evr made in IF history lolzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 6...
I star 😆

Very superb update...
Naintara was very scared because of her little adventure in the lift..
Aww...I found her so cute... She was imagining her gate pass from office...
And thinking all the possibilities of being in safer side... with rent n all
Though her thought gives a comedy touch... She is on a vulnerable situation... Without having any support..
For her job she was ready to apologize also...


Hayee... for the first time I so much loving this Dev character
Pura ka pura entertainment package... And also a very good hearted person at the same time...
I loved the whole scene of him teasing I star 😆 ... giving theme songs for her... Haathi...baarati 😆
And now I am very interested to read their further story...
Little curious to know how Dev will handle this I star...

Very nice writing...I loved the way it actually started...
Their monologue's are very good... Loved dev's naughtiness...
I thought it is really required for him to be like this to tame the hard naintara...

Now heading to next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late reply
simply awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 9

again devtara part.. :)

its really refreshing to read NT n dev lovestory.. :)

so nw NT z late n dev z waiting in parking lot n poor dev door pakd k hi khda reh gya n NT dusri trf chle gyi bethne.. hahaha n alleee dev ko gussa aa gya :p

n here comes sasha screaming Devuu devuu lolzz devu u r my favu it rhymes lol



n nw ride to singhania estates.. n NT z hell bent on staying away frm Dev but dev knws how to come closer .. here comes d bahana of blueprints n ppt.. ;) n dev drops bomb on nt dat she ll b gvng d ppt.. haha poor NT..


singhania z also dev ka fan hmmm... n want dev to gv d ppt .. n dev b shanna h last me ek line boli n singhania became d fan.. no no AC of khuranas nw.. :D


NT z cursing dev for backstabbing lolzz.. here aftr dat came pari. who knws NT already.. n Dev iska crush hai.. dats y dev was uncmfrtble whn mr singhania said abt pari earlier..

dev praised pari n nt felt lil J :( poor NT just saw his prince chrmng in dev bt dil toot gya tbhi n left dev with singhaniass...

arre ye dev itni jldi wapis b aa gya NT k pass??

lo ye firse ldai krne lge. ufff !!!

n dev ne NT ko chuppp kra dia :oo
okkk mjhe b kuch smjh ni ayaa wat dev said :pp

btt he made NT shut ...

nw dev z sleeping on NT shoulder on bahana of jet laggg... NAUGHTYY DEV :)))))

Offf to nxt part. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update i m missing maan j wid srk n salman
devu-istar nok jhok ...
so beautiful updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
finallyyy part 10

bht slow reader hun me.. :(((

Maan z in mumbai n remembering his ist rains with geet .. feeling geet in the waves of sea.. :)

awww poor maan missing geet n stuck in mumbai with a client..

aisha n her fiancee r getting married n want a dream home for them n maan z dere to finalize d deal as dadi z not well.. hmmm .. so maan has a huge responsibility.. :(

n aisha z not liking d designs so poor maan z stuck for more days..

soo aisha finally undrstood maan z in love.. n now they will talk their views n make a dream home... :))

maan z atlast njoyng his work.. :)

aisha z a smart gal .. sb kuch uglwa liya maan se,. haha..

so now maan has a frnd lyk aisha with whom he can open up n tell his feelings abt geet.. :)

like maan's opening up to someone aftr his parents death..

chlo maan ka kaam finish hua .. nw back to delhi..

back to college..

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back to GEET.. yeahhh

waiting for nxtt ..

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm...re reading this FF! splendid updates! beautifully written! Chap 6 - NT working at KC! NR still in shock as he slapped Dev n nw has 2 wrk with him! she is worried abt being fired! she is tensed on hw 2 she will survive! Dev thinking abt Nt n wt happened! Dadi questions abt wt happened 2 his cheek! Dev relies! hilarious! dadi teases him. Devb n Nt talk! they behave normal! Dev has a theme song 4 her! Chap 7- lovely song! Maan's inner thoughts well portrayed! Maan with Geet! he leaves her at the hostel! Maan mesmerised! Chap 8- superb intro of Adi, Pinkly n Sujal! Adi calls Pinky n they talk abt Maan! Maan is staying with Annie in London! Sujal is Pinky;s cousin! he is worried abt her tht she may elope with Adi! protective bro! he doesn't want her 2 b hurt! his past makes him weary! he had an arranged marriage n things didn't wrk out! he js wants her 2 b happy! awesome song! Chap 9 - Nt admires Dev! Sasha is hilarious! Dev teases her! Nt fuming! Dev indifferent! Nt affect by him! they go n meet Singhania! he tells Dev abt Pari! NT is upset! n doesn't knw y! first Geet n den Pari! Pari meets Dev! NT realises Pari has crush on Dev! Nt excuses herself n Dev angry n confronts her! they argue! Chap 10- Maan thinking abt the moments with Geet! fab song! he loves her! Aisha n Maan meet! she explains at wt wants n aks him 2 think abt it! she wants a dream house! she asks Maan abt the special lady in his life! Maan calls her aunty n Aisha miffed! update soon!

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