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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#1421

ch-17

..wowww !!! avi dear... very beautiful update !! .. must say well written! ..maaneet little little close sweet moments were very nice ... the way u explain beauty of mountains and hills ..just amazinggg! ... maan surprised by her honesty ..and the prayer she unknowingly shooted for him... loved his reply on it!... aww.. geet complaint maan not talked to her ever ... and see.. maan fulfilled it ... now me wondering ..geet iska kya matlab nikalegi ... hihi... and ya ..poetry u used here in between ... very nice.. just perfect match with maaneet situation..

..thanks for long update dear ..

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shanilaa

@shanilaa

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#1422

Hey dear I want to read your stories but problem is that I m less active due to my tough schedule but whenever I m going to read I will define post a comment because I know how much difficult to write so if u feel like do me send me pms of all ur stories :)

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#1423

Originally posted by: shanilaa
Hey dear I want to read your stories but problem is that I m less active due to my tough schedule but whenever I m going to read I will define post a comment because I know how much difficult to write so if u feel like do me send me pms of all ur stories :)

Are you sure you want to start this if you have less time? This is an FF 108 parts

try one of my SS's

they are much shorter 5-6 parts

Send me a pm if you still want this.

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#1424

Originally posted by: dqno1

The Locket

Chapters 1-5

Blog update

link and password sent to those who have requested to read it

NEW READERS must post a comment per chapter

Please remember, I will delete readers who don't comment

Video credit to uploaders

hi,
i want to read dis story. Cn u plz send me links. I knw i hav to comment,i alwaz do wenever i read :)

waiting for ur reply

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ppriyanka83

@ppriyanka83

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1425

part 1-5..
Maan misundestood Dev-Geet bonding..Maan n Geet both r of reserve nature..no wnder they r not sure about each others feelings..not confessed yet.
Maan-Dev lyk East-West..bt best..
not 2 4get Dadimaa.
and i think dis Mini-bomb-ready-to-explode Tara iz very bst 4 Dev.bad luck Mr Dev 1st day p hi encounter ho gya..i think charm vll not wrk here.
i enjoyd it..dying to go to nxt prts..
thnx 4 PM Avi..

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1426

chapter 16

dev tara are a clash of titans. ek taraf girl magnet and dusri taraf our professional disciplinarian, it is a very interesting story to read. imagine tara having to do everything for that bluffmaster just bcoz he conned chopra. and imagine her situation finding him at her home when she was just in a nighty !😛😛😛 never read a better story of dev tara

chapter 17

what a heart warming part for silent lovers. a perfect bday gift of geet in his arms on his bday

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#1427

prologue

itna hi smjh aaya abhi toh

sayad dreamy like angel

par baazi sayd dev ne maari hai

now time of part 1

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#1428

i read upto part 3

and am telling about some scenes only

ist the song

and the whole flashback , kiran & raj

really emotional

then

bus scene

sch mein ase insaano ko pitna chaiye

but in last dev galat pit gya 😆

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#1429

part 4 & 5

both are awesom

both like each other

par kh nhi paa rhe

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ppriyanka83

@ppriyanka83

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1430

ch 6-10
Dev-Tara scenes r beautifl..Dev haz a soft cornr 4 Tara..in fct 4 evryone..he iz a happy-go-lucky boy..wid a open n pure heart n intelligent mind..
so Pari luvz him bt Dev don't seems 2 knw..
Tara iz furious on Dev but he haz logic man..
Maan n Geet..got their first walk..together..in rain..1 umbrella..alone..thanx 2 prof. Manon..
Man didn't lyk Mrs Iyer questioning Geet..Y not
Geet iz watching him frm hr room..oww..how sweet..made Maans day.
Sujal iz facing prob in hiz married lyf..dats Y he want 2 sure 4 Pinky..v can undrstnd..
thnx 4 pm..