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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
part 1
He sit outside of operation theater , watching own blood soaked hand without blinking eyes for second ,he feel like he himself kill her like this ...

A smile full ,full of life pic come in his mind when his ma show him her pic ...so beautiful and and now ...injury main wo chehara dhoondna pada usko ...so much injury ...ye zkham shaayed bhar bhi jaaye like wo jo injury damage on her and his soul can be get ...erased or get ... Cured

He stand from his sit and went near image of babaji ,his eyes on image ...and he start to talk thru his eyes kis baat ki saza mili ye usko , aur muje ...humane to kabhi kisiko hurt nhai kiya na hi bura soucha ...ager main usko save nahi kar sakne wala tha to meri life hi ku finish nahi ki apne ku ...aise mote de di muje bhi use bhi ...

Kaise face karunga main usko jab main puri taraf fail ho gaya usko bachane main uske soul ko tartar hone se ,jab wo usko haat laga rahe the ,jab unohone usko maara tha jab unhone usko nud* kiya tha wo nahi main nud* ho raha tha slowly apne nazar main ku kiya aisa ku ...

Ku muje itni taaqt nahi di ke main ya to un logo ko maar deta ya fhir khood apne app ko maar deta ku...few tear fall from his eyes ...which get mixing with his blood which coming from his injury which he get in fight

Injury zhakam ...a flash come in his mind how she cried when she get injured with little needle yaha to ...

Uski eyes jab mili thi mere sath jab wo log usko notch rahe the ...wo pain ,wo dar ,wo helplessness ab muje meri puri zindagi pitcha nahi chodenge ye wahi eyes thi jis per mera dil zoro se dhadk gaya tha aur aj wo behosh none se pehel jab khalipan dikha tha usi ankho main meri dhadkan to wahi ,usi pal ruk gayi ...ab is dil main kya hai muje nahi pata

deva tujya gaabhaaryaalaa, umbarach nhai

Oh God the place where you reside has no sign

sanga kutha, theu maatha kalanaach kahi

tell me where I should bow as I am unable to decide it

deva kutha shodhu tula, mala sang na

Oh God tell me where I should look for you

prem kela evadhach, maza re gunha

I loved someone that's the only crime I did

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

majya hya jivachi aag laagu de tujhya uri

my soul is burning all the time hope you will feel those burns

aar paar kalajaat ka dilas ghav tu

why you gave wounds to my body and soul inside and outside

dagadachya kaaljacha dagadacha dev tu

you are made up of stone and your heart is also like stone

jo ladki bolti thi ke usko apne pote ke shadi main danc karna hai wo behosh hone se bolgayi please kill me please kill me ...uske sapna aise barbad hona tha ish tarkah ise se acha tum usko maar ( kill) hi dete

Female -

ka Kadhi kuthe swapna virale, prem harale

why when where dream lost love lost

hann

ka Kadhi kuthe swapna virale, prem harale

why when where dream lost love lost

hann

Female -

swapna maze aaj navyane khulale

today my dream has once again blossomed

artha saare sparshane ulagadale

because of touch I understood all the meaning

hum log jab yaha aaye the kitane saare emotions uske face pe the , happiness ,shyness , love ...and all ...kuch hi ghanto main maine (nyself ) and u all sanctch from her all snatch from her ...

Male -

aar paar kalajaat ka dilas ghav tu

why you gave wounds to my body and soul inside and outside

dagadachya kaaljacha dagadacha dev tu

you are made up of stone and your heart is also like stone

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

majya hya jivachi aag laagu de tujhya uri

my soul is burning all the time hope you will feel those burns

main Maan sing khurana a business tycoon number one business man of country ...ghin ho rahi hai muje mere hone ki ,jab mera hona usko nahi bacha paaya muje ,mera hi life boje lag raha hai all saying its your game a human life is your play than u take birth and face this ,suffocating ,helpness ,fear ,pain please u face it

kaare tadfhad hi hya kaalja madhi

why my heart is feeling a pain like when a fish is kept outside water feels

ghusmat tujhi re hote ka kadhi

Oh God do you ever feel unable to express yourself

maansacha tu jalma ghe

Once you take a birth of human being

daav jo mandala modu de

the game which you started let it break

Female -

ka haat sutale... swash mitale... thech laage

why lost the company lost the life got the wounds

hann

ka haat sutale... swash mitale... thech laage

why lost the company lost the life got the wounds

hann

Female -

uttaran na prashna kase he padale

why the answers are creating questions

aantaranche antar kase na kalale

why the distances between distances [ differences ] did not understand

Male -

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

majya hya jivachi aag laagu de tujhya uri

my soul is burning all the time hope you will feel those burns

hey

aar paar kalajaat ka dilas ghav tu

why you gave wounds to my body and soul inside and outside

dagadachya kaaljacha dagadacha dev tu

you are made up of stone and your heart is also like stone

deva kalajachi haak aik ekadatari

Oh God just once listen to the request of my soul and heart

majya hya jivachi aag laagu de tujhya uri

my soul is burning all the time hope you will feel those burns

hey

aar paar kalajaat ka dilas ghav tu

why you gave wounds to my body and soul inside and outside

dagadachya kaaljacha dagadacha dev tu

you are made up of stone and your heart is also like stone

Maan once last time look to god image and went to treace side of hospital and cried

Ma maaa I need u I need u ...main nahi bacha saka usko ...nahi bacha sake mere samne wo use chute rahe main kuch nahi kar saka maaa please muje apna pass le lo ma ek baar ...mera heart ,head pain se faaat (brake) jaayega ma apko MSK aj sabse bada failure hua please

maaa and he fail on his knee and start to cried bitterly and start to punch floor with his already injured hand ...they rap* her in front of me they rap* her in front of me front of me ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
kamnagupta7 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Superb starting mommy. 👏
Geet is raped nd is in hospital. 🥱
Maan is feeling guilty nd ashamed of not being able to save his wife.
He is crying 😭
The period which should b their most beautiful period of lyf has devastated them completely. 😭
How Geet is going to cope up with this situation.
How maan is going to gather himself nd Geet.
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Awesome start mahi...
it is really very painfull mahi...😭
geet is in hospital..
maan is so ashamed and feeling very gulty of not saving his wife...
the song mahi it really took my heart away..
it perfectly depicts the situation of maaneet...
oh god the girl who is full of lif enow how is she going to cope up..
ho no kya bolu koyi sabh hi nahi hai mahi
iss update ki baare mai baathaneki...
hope maan appni guilt mai kucth aisa na karjaye jo geet ko aur hurt kare..
patha nahi how he is going to cope up with his emotions and stand up for geet...
continue soon mahi...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
An Amazing Start Yet Emotional And Sad Update

Geet got raped and Maan is all emotional

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
maan emotional and mentally drained away
Its going to be Very hard to Maan to console geet
maan want his mom support
Very Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
intense emotional sad update! Well written! Maan feeling guilty 4 nt saving her as she was raped in frin of him! Maan shattered! bt he needs 2 b strong 4 her! It was their HM! what was supposed 2 be a happy moment turned out 2 b sad painful day! Poor Maaneet! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Awesome update
geet got raped
waiting to know how will she react
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
emotional update😭
geet is in hospital she was raped
maan feeling guilty not save her wife in front they raped her
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Painful ,sad update..
Good start ..
Maan completely broken.. Couldn't save geet..

Main question is how he gone face the reality..the society..
Emotionally drained will not help in faceing situation..
And the support that Geet needed..

Superbly written..
Song perfect..
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
i was shock
i was shivering after read this
how you type
i can say any thing

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