MG ff Bleeding Heart pain of love note on 69 -14 jan - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-6
geet now don't even want any women to touch her & she doesn't want to go back to maan's house too.
Dev is maan's bro or frnd? but whoever he is, he seems to be close to maan.

Part-7
Adi is finally out of jail & got to meet his daughter whose innocent question make him numb along with maan, dev & geet.
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Posted: 9 years ago

part 8

Geet feel blank ,that night incidence travel from her eyes ,she closed her eyes but same time she don't want to hurt maan Because he know that she is not comfortable with nurse and doc also that's why he ask this for change . else he never ask ,she very well know that he is also suffer like her in all this ,koi aur hota to usko wahi fake ke chala jata ,but he followed his promise as Husband ,before Husband he is HUMAN BEING Jo abhi bahot kam milate hai ,jaha husaband simple sa adjustment karne ko ready nahi hota ,wahi pe he is man of word ...

A small tear escape from her eyes

Maan - maan get worried and little bit hurt that she is not trusting him, with worry he say its ok geet if u don't want main nahi karunga change ...but u don't cry.

Geet - aisa nahi hai maanji bas wo main ,thodi ...I trust u maanji she say with soft tone with bending head

Maan say softly thanks geet ,u r not going to regret your decision

And maan stand from his sit and make that room total dark he pull all curtain make that room all dark so nothing is visible

Both feel tension with sudden things ...geet tense because she don't want to hurt him to show her fear and uncomfortableness and maan is tense because he don't want to hurt her or fear her with his action

Both souls thinking about each other

Maan feel first time his hand shaking in fear ,he slowly went behind bed so his body don't get touch to geet body ,than he slowly touch chain of hospital gown and open it softly without touching her back he handling like flower, not once his finger touch to her body than he mummer please geet pull your sleeves of dress and geet follow his instruction without hurting her hand she pull out and same time maan make her another hospital dress and closed the chain of dress

Maan took deep breath and say ho gaya geet ...and geet get surprised without touching once he done that a happy tear come in her eyes her mind know that he will done this but she fearing about her body reaction ,if it react in other bad way ,slowly maan open all curtain and look to geet ...and smile aper on his lip when he found small smile playing on her lips

Geet want to thanks but they get disturbed with knock on room door

Geet hurriedly cover herself and maan gulp hard ,he don't want to geet get scare ,but yes she is not yet come from her fear . She scared now also ,his heart ache for while

But he get happy also that she trust her , both maaneet lost in thinking ,they heard another knock on door and this time loudly

Maan hurriedly went to door and open

Dev hurriedly enter in room ,he is looking tense , and same time geet cried maan ,she get tense with dev entry her face turn white ,her body start to shake with fear ...maan almost push dev to outside of room and run to geet and taken geet shaking body in his tight hug

Maan - its ok geet its ok ,wo apna hi hai ,he is not going to hurt u ,lesion me geet please clam down please

But geet can not face sudden entry of dev and she get fainted in maan arm

And maan cried in loud voice geeettt

Doc doc maan cried in high voice ,as she is fainted in his arm ...other side dev who feel frustrated on his own self, heard maan voice and open room door and found geet fainted in maan hug and maan cried in loud voice ,dev just pick room phone and called doc in there room

Doc come there and make geet lay down on bed with help of nurse and ask to maan what happn mr.khurana

Maan give hard look to dev and say sorry doc wo she get fear with dev sudden entry and get fainted like this

Doc give hard look to dev and maan and give some necessary instruction to nurse and called both dev and maan in her cabin

Dr give hard look to dev and ask ,mr khurana what is a stranger doing in geet room

Maan mummer sorry doc wo mera friend and I am don't have any idea why he coming like this in room ,maan give a disappointment look to dev

Doc - u r educated person don't u know that this people have to treat differently we have to behave properly ...and if u don't have this much commen sense than mr khurana I appreciate if u put out this man from this premises get it

Dev - who feel shame as well as angry also say in hard tone I know a mistake happen from my side but it's not intentionally ,that time

I need to talk maan that's why I behave like that

Doc - what imp work u have that u behave like this

Dec turn to maan and say maan sorry for Bhabhi but chutaki ...

Chutaki name alert both maan and doc . Maan ask what happen to her

Dev - maan chutaki and her father both r not in their room maan and doc stand from their respective chair and ask what ...

Maan - what r u saying yaar

Dev - I serch every where but I don't get key of one terrace and other terrace door was shut from inside

A land escape from doc foot ,she took phone and she called to cctv control room ,but her face trun pale

She cut the phone and called security

Maan - what happen doc

Doc - wo terrace ka cctv camera band hai ,u both me I think we need your help also with that doc start to walk and maan dev follow her with so much tense

And all reach to terrace area ,but the door is shut from inside some security person open other terrace door and try to go to other side which area closed

They gasp when they saw that side view ...they imm open door of terrace and all enter in that area and gasp come out from all mouth doc called out security called ward boy imm jaldi

There is chutaki and her father lying unconsciousionally on floor within few second both r in operation theater

And maan all lost sit outside of that operation theater ,he all lost his ability of think ...

teaser of os baate kuch unkahi si

Maan and dadi first time feel that rather than

them there r someone who caring for our pari both
look to each other and dadi stop maan to say
anything

That women - how dare u, how dare u ,himmat kaise hui

muje slap kanreki and Dhaka dene ki

Geet - ku ek baar de ke batau kya Dhaka deke with slap haa

Edited by Mahimaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice
geet trust maan that give him little happiness
chutaki n her father attacked by some one

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan asked geet can he change her dress.
Nd when she allowed he becomes happy.
Geet is slowly slowly trusting maan nd maan is happy with this.
Adi nd chutki found unconscious on terrace.
Maan is not understanding what happening.
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Posted: 9 years ago
uffo ...
Adi ...himmat haara hua ..hai...
chhutki ...
waise hi weak thi ..aur ..abb ..kya hua.. usse ..
Maaneet understanding EO ..and..trying not oto hurt other...
Geet fainted...
Update next part.. soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear Mann change the geet dress mean while dev entered in room by seeing dev geet fainted doctor scholded both for there carelessness
Dev told that chutki and his father are missing there found them in tares unconcies
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi emotional update, well written! Maan feels she doesn't trust him! Geet is scared! she assures Maan! Maan helps her change without touching her! Dev enters the room n she faints! Doc shouts them! Chutki n her dad found unconscious! Maan tensed! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates till now, maahi. U have narrated each n every scene so beautifully n naturally. U r an awesome writer, i can tell u zat.
Really, chutki n geet r going thru so much without any fault. Hope u reveal their culprits in d next updates. Good to see geet is now getting better n started trusting maan.

But will geet's in-laws accept her d way maan's didi supported her?? Shez afraid to go home. Hope she overcomes her fears completely n starts living normally soon.

But poor chutki, shez bleeding till now, n her father too is in pain, hope the surgery cures both of them properly. Seriously, monsters always ruin innocent people's lives for their so called satisfaction, lust n sadistic pleasure. Such criminals deserve to be cut into pieces with huge swords. They don' deserve d slightest mercy. Even death is very less for them.

Plz keep updating quickly, maahi. U inspire us very much. Hope we r able to bring about changes n positive attitude in d narrow minded mindsets of the indian people. U n sonia are such writers who can start a revolution so go ahead, we all r wid u till d end of this earth.

We all looove you to bits.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear, finally geet start trusting maan its gives him little bit happiness, geet fainted to seeing dev, chutki and her dad got attaced by some one
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. Geet is still afraid of any outsider. Dev came to their room and she fainted seeing him. Doc asked the reason of his intrusion, he told about chutki and Aditya missing from their room. Later they found at terrace unconscious.

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