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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SAI92

her husband should understand his wife and make her comfortable to speak with like friend not as husband.because husaband has responsibility for her safety he failed it ,he should mend the mistakes

friendship hu true medicine
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 1
poor Geet and Maan...
thats terrible...
cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very painful emotional
geet in hospital and unconscious
she been raped in front of her husband
maan in guilty fr not saving his wife
he feel lifeless how to console his wife
and also come out from his guilty both
r totally shattered no one come out fr
this humiliate fess they need dr fr consoling
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional update😭😭



feeling sorry for maaneet😭



geet is raped and in hospital😭



maan is feeling guilty😭



hope maan control himself and gave strength to geet 😊



update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update beautifully written maan is in pain he cant save his wife sad 4 maaneet how they get alone god give maaneet courage
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Posted: 10 years ago


Mahi these incidents are very cruel for a girl and I hate to read stories based on real horrible incidents of anybody's personal life...

humein inn real life incidents ka use nahin karna chahiye...making story is like making mockery of someone's life...some time back one writer wrote story on Delhi rape victim Nirbhaya...many readers oppose that also...

here we all are women who are reading this story so what is the use of sharing it with women...it will be useful if u share it in forum where men read this and realize the pain of a woman...

these are my personal thoughts...u r not bound to my thinking...but I can't read this story...


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Posted: 10 years ago

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Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 2

He is crying his heart his cry make cry to stone also so much pain , in his cry dono ne dekha hua ek chota sa sapana aise bhiker gaya kuch hi minto main he so much wanted to rewind time and go back kaash wo yaha aata hi nahi pal bhar main kya se kya ho gaya ...wo aise ek beautiful doll aise bikharker reh gayi

His tear not stopping same time his phone start to ring he don't want to talk anyone now but mobile is not stopping at last with anger he took call and its from hospital she gain her hosh and calling him he run like manic tear falling from eyes ...he somehow reach to her room which number he get on call

He open door but his hand froze on their itself how he going to face her how no its not possible , when he fully fail to protect her how he will show his cowered face to her jisne uski raksha karneki oath li thi wo aise fail ho gaya how he going to show his face to that innocent soul

He feel lifeless himself and he took some step back and start to walk outside of that hospital ,nurse get that he don't want to

Went inside ...

She enetered in room and found that girl looking to door, jaise dhoond rahi ho kisiko nurse feel bad for her and say unka mobile nahi lag raha aa jayenge till than u finish your juice

Other side maan come out from hospital ans sit near one tree little away from he closed his eyes ...he feel so helpless he want to see and avoid same time ,big question is hammering in his head how he going to face her

Same time his phone bippp its from his near one he took deep breath and mummer hallo

Maan - hospital , how u know ,

Ok this xyz and he cut call tear again start to run from his eyes 10 min went like this and someone put hand on his shoulder and mummer maannn

He know who is that he trun and sobbed diii sab khatam ho gaya di main ,I can not able to save her di ...wo toot gayi like doll di kaise jodunga main ab usko how di kya karu di

That person also sob with him and cup his face in plam and say look at me mere taraf dekho

Tum mile usase ,hosh main aa gayi kya bolo ...

Maan look to her and mummer main dar gaya uska samna karne se , I feared to face her and next moment he get tight slap he look her with shock and mummer di

Di - kya kar diya tume maan ab sabse jada usko tumari zarrort hai wo wiase hi mehssos karegi jaise tum react kroge maan ...ku smaje nahi pa rahe ho tum a woment fight with all odd but she need support of her husband, ku samje nahi pa rahe ho

Maan closed his face with his own plam and mummer wo mujse nafrat karegi di nafrat karegi ...main kaise jau uske samane di

Di took him in hug and say in firm voice u have face this ,tume hi usko smbhalna hoga usko pata bhi nahi chalna chiye ke hum log yaha hai tumare pass samje bacha please ,mere taraf dekho maan mere taraf dekho

Maan look to her ,kya ye sab mere sath hota to tum muje avoid karte maan put his palm on di mouth and mummer aise mat bolo app di aise mat bolo and he hug his di ,like small kid who searching peace in mother Aram ,away from all tension worry pain

When he gather himself somehow and again look to di ,di nodded in yes and maan went to geet room to face a new storm ...

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Posted: 10 years ago
note
bahot jada serious and subject lake main
ye sotry start kiya hai comment bhi bahot
ache mile hai jo muje kuch sikha gaye
aim behind this ff is to talk
with u all about this
abuse ,virginity and all
koi hume chuta hai to hum
ku apne ko takleef dete hai koi
ku nahi bhool jate ek accident samje ke
I know ye bhool na bahot muskil hota hai
lakin hum try to kar sakte hai
now think about following point
koi humare samne kisiko unnecessary touch
karne ki koshis karta hai to ku hum
ye sochte hai aree ye muje kaha touch kar raha
hai
to main ku dakhal du
to kya ye souch sahi hai
think about hum khood kitne aise inncidance
hone se rok sakte hai
ek baar soch lena is bare main
Mahi...
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

😃

nitika

page 12
u give beautiful comment but dear
har ek ladki ladati hai apne ko bachne ke liye
but success nahi hoti na
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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