~~Astitva~~ MG SS PART 7@69 ON 22/12

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Superb part vani di.. Mr.kapoor made maan realise his mistake and now he is repenting..no need to do this maan..u don't deserve geet..u should have trusted her instead of throwing her out of house..

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

superb update. jitna maan ko sunaye jaaye kam hi hai. just mindblowing dialogues by mr.kapoor. jitna wo samajh paye geet ko utna bhi nahi samajh paye geet ke parents aur maan ne. kya khoob sunadiya geet ke brother ne.👏

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Are wah bahot achi dialouge baji ki maan gaye,,,,,😛

aur humare maanji bichare...kya kahe ab...na jjaane kab tak intjar karna pade shayad jidgi bhar but after all he is my fav charecter so ek mauka to use milna chahiye lekin itni jaldi nahi gunah kiya hai to saaza bhi to bhkatni padegi na...? unless you write the story like aap ki kasam where rajesh khanna ne mumtaj per bharosa nahi kiya aur wo ghar chodke chali gayi aur wo prgnant this badme rk ko bahot pastahwa hua lekin wo to chali gayi this aur uske father ne use milne nahi diya akhir rk devdas aur bhikhari badgaya aur mumtaz ko dundhte dhunte 20 sal nikal diye aur jab mile tab usne dusari sadi karli this aur uski ladki ki sadi this rk use mila lekin apni pahechan chupa li aur fire ho gayi usme apni ladki ko bachate bachate uski jan chali gayi mile lekin alwida kaheke chale gaye bahot tregedy ending tha bahot royi thi main.

aap aisa mat karna...!

Jidngi ke safar mein nikal jate hai jo mukam wo phir nahi aate wo phi nahi aate...

aankh dhoka hai kya bharosa hai?

dosto sak dosti ka dushman hai use dilme jagah mat banane na do

kal tadap na pade yaad mein jiski rok lo usko ruth ke kabhi jane na do

badme chahe tum pukaro sau bar wo phir nahi aate wo phir nahi aate...

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

now maan and everyone is repenting

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Gr8 updtss ... Waiting fo d leap

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Awesome update!! the update was beautifully written...

So now Maan and his parents and Geet's parents are repenting...

What's the point they could have hear her atleast...

Kahi geet na doosri shadi to nahi kar li..?

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Maan did a big mistake by not trusting her...
now what is the use of crying...:(
Don't no whter geet will accept him ifasked forgiveness
precap-leap...so maaneet baby..
eagerly waiting for the nxt part

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Nice part. Well delivered dialogue's by Mr.Kapoor 👏.

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

wow! well written dear...so now maan realised how wrong he was...mr.kapoor and geet brother are right..he doesn't deserve forgiveness...even geet brother went to search his sister...precap is leap...want to know if geet brother able to search geet in these years. ..continueee sooonnn dear..