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Intriguing prologue..
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interesting start ...
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hope ur viva went well will be waiting 4 update
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
SOUNDS PSYCHIC
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Awesome one dear
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meri jaan di ALL D BEST allah meri di ko inshallah kamyab karenge ameen, meri jaan di in love wid the prologue aur waiting for the story now more eagerly aur dyingly😊
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PART 1:

FLASHBACK

December 1st 2014,

A random classroom,


He came back from the war to see his beloved wife with his brother ... in the bed ... What happened next was what every sane man would do ... He killed his brother first and then chased his wife to death in the corn field ... Seema was brutally murdered ... And it was believed that since then every 31st December night Seema's found running in the field the same way she was murdered that night.



The bell rings ... all right then I am going students ... may you have a bright new year 2015 ... I want you to learn the moral of the story ... don't ever fall in love and if you do then don't cheat ... the professor winked at his students and left the room.



Geet: Well so?? She turned to her friend Piya with a glint in her eyes



No way Geet ... we are not going to the corn field tonight ... Mujhe apni maut nahi dekhna ... What if the soul kills us??



Nothing's gonna happen ... I am going it means you are coming with me ... Chal na ... December 31st would be very exciting ... We will have a psychotic new year welcome ... she saw Piya nodding her head in a NO ... Determined that she will never ever listen to Geet. Getting the message she scowled, So you aren't coming?? Fine ill go myself ... I am not a coward like you ... Get out of my way, she stormed out of the classroom. Few people stared at Geet smiling for what they were planning for the night.



Late night Geet got into her car and drove into the corn field ... excited to see the adventure, have some fun ... She was a bit frightened too ... she was alone and what if the soul tries to take her life?? It was fine either way all she needed was a real thrill and she could go to any level for it.



Time passed and she heard the screams ... Geet looked around to find the source ... She walked in the field to find Seema ... There was no sign of her and then she heard footsteps ... She followed to see a young woman running with blood on her body. Geet's eyes widened in fear ... she began to shiver suddenly the spirit turned to look at her with blood dripping from her forehead ... I'll kill you bitch ... you want to see my torment?? Is that why you are here??



Geet began to run ... all the thrill transforming into qualms and after sometime she banged into someone ... she screamed loud and loud like a puppy thinking that was the end to her, that was perhaps going to be the last on earth ... What she then heard was laughter ... She saw Piya dressed up as spirit while the rest were her friends and the lead of the group was Maan.



The field lit up and the people gathered, Geet became a clown among them ... she didn't feel like going angry coz she knew it was the plan of that idiot Maan, only he can dare to scare her .. she stood staring at him intently and then heard Piya announcing ... hey guys lets party its past 12 happy new year to everyone ... for Geet that will be happy dum-dum year ... she giggled and the music started, and wine was circled filling their mouths.



Maan stood in front of Geet surrendering himself for the punishment which he deserves instead she pounced on him slamming her lips on his ... he inched back with the way she put all her weight on his.



Few clapped ... few took out their cell phones to capture the steamy kiss that was happening ... really happening allying Maaneet.



Few closed their eyes finally witnessing the awaited confirmation of love of the couple ... if this is your love proposal guys then how brazen .. Get a room yaar ... its new year don't start with your adult content ... Piya smiled hiding her face beneath her palms.



I love you Geet ... Maan panted resting his head against hers, she giggled and hugged him ... you could chose a better way to propose ... it wasn't romantic at all ... I am not saying anything ... get lost ... she replied and walked away wishing them ... happy new year friends



Excuse me?? When did I propose?? It was you who leapt on me ... So I proposed ... he yelled but she didn't turn back ... Ill make up to you sweetheart and then I am going to see what you are going to do ... he smiled wickedly.



It didn't take long for their video to go viral ... to go into the internet ... One of their classmate uploaded in the youtube and tried to blackmail Geet. She cared a least but her dad couldn't tolerate it when he knew of it. He couldn't face his colleagues ... he cancelled all his meetings for the first time in life to come back home.



Geet ... Geet ... Where the hell are you?? Mohinder yelled on top of his voice for his daughter, the video became a trending topic on social sites ... So does around the people ... Geet was from one of the reputated families in India. Mohinder felt so embarrassed, so shameful with his daughter,




What happened Papaji?? She asked getting down the stairs ... she seemed least bothered.



What the hell is this?? He put the cell phone in Geet's hand ... is this why u were going to college?? How could you forget your limits?? He lashed on her trying to get a grip on his temperament.



Dad chill ... I love this guy and he loves me ... You don't need to worry about me ... you never gave a damn ... All you gave me was money so why bother now?? Let me be ... Kaun si time mein atak gaye aap?? Kuch din baatein banayenge phir bhool jayenge sab log aap kyun itna pagal ho rahe hai?? We had far more intimate moments than this ... You like it or not ... Just mind your business ... She spat on her father's face in rage not liking him bursting on her. She was totally insane for Maan ... she loved him to the level of madness so did he.



Maan was the first person on the earth to love her for what she was ... they've always been cozy just that they never went verbal with their feelings. Maan was her everything, her life ... Unlike her father who had no time for his daughter ... He never cared to look after the motherless child. He made money like machine and it was only that mattered him.



You know I can do anything ... You are getting married to slok ... You like it or you don't ... But this is going to happen ... Mohinder snarled at Geet like she had a no say on it. But she was Geet who will not resist her father's nonsense ... she retorted ... I am not marrying any bas***d ... Get that straight ... I love Maan and I belong to him



If it is then I am going to kick you out of my house ... You won't get a penny from me ... Ek din road par rahogi toh pata chalega zindagi kya hoti hai ... I know how much you are addicted to luxurious life ... you can live without Maan but not without money.


Precap: Erotic Moments☺️


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PROLOGUE


Edited by dreamyharika - 10 years ago
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Amazing start maaneet love each other the sudden kiss was awesome but geet father found it poor geet her father just care 4 business n wants her to marry someone else really interesting thnx 4 update
Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago
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Possessive geet.
Maaneet love each other.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for next update

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