SS- My Mistake His Love - pt-1 pg10... 30 dec ON HOLD

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: disha31
lovely update...
so her 1st mistake is the plan for movie..
is maan that rahul's friend??
interesting...eagerly waiting for nxt part!!

U WILL KNOW IN NEXT PART

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: mishtypie
nice update neer maan is shy nd geet is ignorant nice combo😃
simi wants 2 meet rahul nd she hv tld rahul 2 bring his frnd👍🏼
nw geet gave idea 2 go 4 a romantic movie nd it was her 1st mistake😕
waitng 4 d nxt part neer update soon

i too thought it will be different

yup it was her 1st mistake

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 updating! Y no pm? Amazing update! Well written! Geet is friends with Simi who is also her room mate! Simi wants top spend time with her bf Rahul n needs the room! So Maan is his friend! update soon!

i don't get time that why i send pm late😳

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: vrinda22
nice start
simi with rahul
n rahul bringing his friend means
is it maan
geet did the first mistake for film agreeing to simi..

yup di n tkx

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: kamnagupta7
Awesome start
Geet is in second year.
Her roommate is Simi
Her bf is coming to meet her in their room.
A boy is also coming so dat geet doesn't get bored.
Geet agrees for movie plan nd it is her first mistake.

👍🏼

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: vrinda22

tkx di🤗 n same to you

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Nice update
Simi rahul ko room mein milna chahti hai...
Rahul apne friend ko saath lana chahta hai...
Geet movie ka idea deti hai...
Geet ko lagata hai ki yeh usski pehli mistake thi...
Waiting for Maan ki entry...

Happy new year

Happy new year🤗

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: nakh5683
lovely update I m waiting to see shy maan loved it immensely how about u give us the most romantic first meet of our maaneet waiting for ur next update plzzz in next update give by both maaneets pov and ab plzzz gayab mat hojana after reading the prologue I was desperetly waiting for ur update isliye don't forget to update plzzz

dear the story will be from geet's POV as she is the one who writing it... i will try to make in clear to understand maan's side...

i will try to update soon but already i have 4 ongoing works so i will update them turn by turn

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Neer Kataria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: jayshu17
Awesome update!!!👏👏👏So for her first mistake she gave an idea of Romantic movie...Awww shy Maan and ignoring Geet😉...they are such a wonderful combo.😳Loved it so much...waiting for the next update...Thanks for Tthe PM dear😳

tkx dear😃