New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016

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Mayuvani5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

me first

Beautifully written...

Geet's and Maan's thoughts are simply amazing..

continue soon

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Sweta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

wow...

this was so amazing...

maan and geet thoughts are the same...they r trying to knw undertsand their new feelings for each other...

Nice update..!!

ill wait for the next part..

😭 i dint come first vani di ne phele post kar diya

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love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

are baba dono baat karlo aur clear kar lo...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

awesome parts
just loved it dear

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Thanks yaar but that was much needed for such a story!

It helps in connecting with the plot...

Even though short its beautifully written!❤️

If not as separate part try n blend it with the current track/part...

It adds to the beauty of the whole chapter. ..

Now that's a reader's point of view. ..

rest up to you😊

Waiting for the next part!

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

nic part
both are thinking about what happened whole day
nice precap
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

WOW!! that was fantastic ...loved it dear

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! beautifully written! Maaneet's thoughts n confusion well portrayed! Maan wanted her 2 say yes bt agreed 2 wait 4 her! Geet wanted 2 reject him bt sed yes! update soon!