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Hello my dear friends

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 52
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Part - 53

Next day was Sunday nd Geet knew if she stayed at home Manu wd force her to meet Maan so she planned to go out ,, she finished her daily work then both got ready nd went out ,, she did some shopping for coming week from supermart nd then went to a children park where Manu cd play ,, in their return journey Manu asked about his uncle Maan ,, Geet heart felt a pain seeing how her lil kid missing Maan but she was helpless to maintain a gap .

There in Maan's house he woke up tired nd disheartened in d early morning ,, his hands wr paining ,, Maan got up nd cleaned them ,, d fleshes of last day wr running in his mind ,, he wanted to meet Geet nd manu , though he knew that he had to face a tough side of Geet but he made his mind to carry on his efforts to remain close to Manu nd Geet ,, distance nd aloofness cd create more gap which he cdn't bear ,, he was determined to remain close with both of his possessions .

Maan ST: Geet tum kitni bhi door jane ki koshish ker lena per mei ab peeche nahi hatunga ,, chahe mujhe kuch bhi ku na sahana pade ,, lekin ab mai tum dono ko dur nahi jane dunga.

Maan smiled with determination ,, he applied ointment on hands nd made coffee for him ,, he was early in d mrng so he thought to talk to his mom-dad 1st ,, he talk to them normally but his heart was crying thinking that he cdn't say they wr manu's dadu nd dadi in real nd Manu was their own blood ... How cd he ? it cd tore all's heart ,, he realised Geet's miseries nd mantel dilemma ... how much she was helpless that time ,, she cdn't share her pain to any one nd bore that heart wrenching incident all alone .

Maan's heart was drowning in pain nd sorrow realising Geet's tortuous past which she had faced coz of him .

Maan( Self Talk): God kitna dukh diya hei maine Geet ko aur uske sath masoom Manu ko ,, sab kuch hoty hue bhi ye akele they dusro per depend thy ,, kaise saha hoga Geet ne sab... Kaise ?

Whole morning passed in thinking nd regretting ,, Maan took his phone to call Geet but stopped himself ,, he tried many times but didn't get courage to call her then lastly decided to visit personally .

Maan: no Geet , we have to face nd talk ,, u have every right to avoid me but I have to bear all ur accusations, anger nd indifference .

He got ready , took some ready to eat BF nd went to meet Geet nd Manu ,, but they wr not at home ,, A&U Sam informed him that they wr out for weekly shopping ,, he stayed there with them to wait for Manu nd Geet ,, now U&A Sam wr very comfortable with Maan nd talk to him openly ,, both took Maan as Geet's family member.

In their talks they expressed their desire to visit Vatican City on coming Christmas ,, they wanted to visit many times but they didn't want to leave small Manu nd Geet alone so postponed their program but now when Maan was there to look after Geet nd Manu they wished to go .

U Sam: Mr Khurana , we r growing old nd in our life tme we both want to visit VC ,, now Geet nd Manu have u to take care in our absence , we want to go for a week.

Maan's heart skipped many beats ,, thinking how Geet react on this ? Wd she allow him near her nd Manu in U&A Sam's absence ? in front of them he was forced to agree.

Maan: Of course U sam ,, u don't worry about them ,, i'm very much here for them ,, if u didn't mind I want to arrange this trip for u ,, plzzz .

U&A Sam: no son ,, we'll manage ,, it'll be a big favour nd opportunity for us that u r here nd we cn visit with no worry .

Maan: plzz uncle ,, let me arrange this holy tour for u ,, i'll feel good if I do something for u ,, plzz it's a request .

U S : don't trouble urself son ,, we r fine .

Maan: Plzz ,if u think Geet as ur child then why not me ? Plzzz it's for my happiness.

U&A Sam reluctantly accepted Maan's proposal ,, He at once called his co partner nd he told him that d PS of d co cd arrange all d things so contact her ,, Maan called d PS nd narrated her to do d things ASAP ,, she asked d details of U&A Sam nd Maan's provided her after getting them at once ,, in half an hr she informed him that she had sent him d details of flight tickets nd hotel booking ,, Maan checked his mail in phone nd showed to U&A Sam ,, he told them that at eve he'll give them d print out of tickets nd other details ,, both wr so happy ,, thanked Maan nd blessed him for this quick arrangements ,, Maan felt happy that he did something good for U&A Sam who helped Geet nd Manu ,, they deserved this care .

Geet nd Manu didn't returned nd Maan came back to his home with heavy heart after spending near 2 hrs there ,, he was feeling empty nd craving to meet Geet nd Manu ,,, took out d print out of details nd decided to go again at eve .

Geet nd Many returned home at eve ,, Manu was tired ,, he played many games in children park so slept in car ,, Geet settled him in bed ,, change her dresses nd started unpacking nd arranging d things ,, she was busy in her work nd sipping coffee when got a call from U&A Sam .

Geet: U Sam , manu is sleeping , if it's not urgent then i'll come after some time when Manu get up Or u both cn come here , plzz .

U Sam: OK , fine we r coming there .

After few mins U&A Sam wr there nd Maan was behind them with a faint smile ,, Geet heart sank with fear seeing them all together ... Why Maan came with U&A Sam ? What they wantto talk ? she gave a confusing look to all giving them way to enter in d living hall ,, all settled there with a smile ,, U Sam had few papers in his hands ,, Geet was feeling nervous nd knotting her dupatta .

U Sam: Geet, dear wr r here to talk u , hope u too feel happy like us after listening this.

Geet: what uncle ..? any good news ?

A Sam: yes dear ,, u nd manu r very lucky for us ,, gave many happiness to us nd u care us like ur family ,, nd I thing if we get this chance , it's all bcoz of u .

Geet : I did nothing aunty ,, it was me who is blessed with d ppl like u ,, u always care for me nd manu ,, i'm so much thankful for u , now tell me what u got ?

Maan was listening them quietly ,, he was fearing how Geet wd react after listening U&A Sam's visit .

U Sam: Geet , from many yrs we both wanted to visit VC on christmas but didn't get d chance ,, we don't want to live u nd Manu alone , but I think god listen our prayer nd sent Mr Khurana for ur help ,, now a member of ur family is here to take care both of u so we planned to go VC ,, we r very thankful to Mr Khurana who arranged things for us ,, after 4 days we both r going .

Geet: it's good uncle if u r going there ,, i'm very happy , but felt bad too that bcoz of me nd manu u postponed ur visit ,, why didn't u voice out ur desire to me?

U Sam: it's OK dear ,, now Jesus give us chance nd we r going there ,, Mr Khurana is here for u nd it's a big relief for us ,, we'll come back after a week .

Geet : it's good U&A Sam ,, don't worry about me nd manu ,, we have holidays too , so i'll manage .

A Sam: that's why we wish to go , u won't be alone here bcoz Mr Khurana is here.

Geet felt a pang thinking that how they wr trusting Maan nd treating him as her family member but they didn't know d reality ,, she cdn't say that she don't want him near her ,, she was helpless in front of U&A Sam nd showed her fake happiness but she was worried inwardly ,, she never live alone in last 3 yrs ,, it was d 1st time she was going to live alone in this big house ,, a fear engulfed her .


Precap --- skirmish nd nemesis ... ..


Part - 54




sorry for updates ...



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Please update soon. I am waiting all day. Love this story very much.
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awsemm update maan arranging sam couple holy visit geet is scared
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😃 Updated ..pg..136


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🤗 Hi Tabby dear..
how r u nd mom ..?

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Nice part. Maan is determined to stay close to Geet and Manu. It's going to be tough for Geet but I guess Maan has no other choice too. He is guilty and repenting.
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uncle and aunty going for vatican , leaving geet with maan
will this bring together
precpae 😕
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nice ud
maan arranging holy trip of VC 4 them

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