New story - PYAR KA BANDHAN| Updated part 4 on page 26 | 16/3/18 - Page 2

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interesting prologue...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

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congrats on the new story! Thanks 4 da pm! superb emotional prologue! update soon!
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nice prologue waiting for update
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congrates for new story
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very emotional prologue. looking forward for this.
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nice start, waiting for part one.
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THANK U ALL U LIKE MY STORY AND GIVE COMENTS.SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE GUYS. I TYPED THIS UPDATE 2 DAYS AGO BUT CAN'T FIND TIME TO POST IT. TODAY I GOT FREE FROM MY COUSIN SHOPING SO THOUGHT TO UPDATE IT. HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT.

PYAR KA BANDHAN

PART 1

After 1 week of geet outbrust

Geet is sitting on her room window panel staring at nothing in sky with tears in her eyes. Her daughter mahira came and saw her mother is all silent. Its not her mother who talk nonstop. She call her mother but her moyher didn't react. She touch geet and geet came out of her thought.

Mahira - mamma maine aapko kitna bulaya aapne suna hi nai.

Geet(wiping tears) - sorry beta main kuch soch rahi thi.

Mahira - mamma aap roli roli kal rahe ho kya? Aapko toh pata hai na hero ko aapki aur meri eyes mein water pasand nai hai.

Geet - meri eyes mein kuch chala gaya tha iss liye water beta. Aapko kuch chahiye tha kya?

Mahira - mamma muje aapna phone do na.

Geet - par aap phone ka kya karoge?

Mahira - muje hero se baat karni hai, unnhone mahira se kitne se baat hi nai ki hai. Main unne phone karke dadu se data khilaugi.

Geet eyes again turn wet after listening her daughter talks. Who will make her understand that her hero is not coming to her. He left her and geet forever and went to that place from where no one come again. Geet control her tears and take mahira in her lap and said

Geet - beta aapke hero jaha gaye haina waha koi phone nai hai.

Mahira - toh hum hero se kaise baat karege aur unnse kaise puachege ki who kab wapis aayege?

Geet - aapko unnse milha hai?

Mahira - ha mamma

Geet - look there. Who jo sabse bright star hai na woh aapke hero hai.

Mahira - par mamma hero inti dur kyun hai.

Geet - beta aapko toh pata hai na ki aapke hero kitne ache hai aur who aapke hero hai.

Mahira - ha mere hero toh best hai.

Geet - aur godji ko ache logo ki jarurat hoti hai, dusaro ki help karne ke liye toh unhone aapke hero ko bula liya.

Mahira - par hero toh mere hero phir kyun?

Lady( in choked voice) - kyunki godji ko help chahiye thi issliye.

Mahira - par dadi muje hero se milna hai aur baat karni hai.

Shakshi - toh hum baat karege.

Mahira (innocently) - kaise mamma ne toh kaha waha par phone nai hai.

Shakshi -aap unn stars ki teref dekho aur jo aapke mann mein hai who unne boldo. Aapke hero aapki baatein sun lege aur woh aapko waha se dekh bhi rahe hai.

Mahira (cutely)- dadi sachi hero bina phone use kiye mahira ki baatein sun lege.

Dadi ( in choking)- ha bacha dadi ne aapse kabhi jhut bola hai. Ab aap chalo bed par so jao kal school bhi jana hai.

Geet is listening their conversation and weeping silently. She thought her daughter is fatherless now just like her but she lost her mother when she was born. Her father played role of her mother also, now again time came where she has to become father and mother for her daughter. God always played cruel game with her, this time he include her daughter in his play. Little did she know god always play fare if he take something, he also give something.

Shakshi - geet beta tum kuch khalo.

Geet - maa muje bhuk nai hai aur plz muje kuch time ke liye akela chod dijiye plz.

Shakshi - tekh hai par tum bhi soo jana unn yaado mein mat kho jana jo tume aasho de.

With dat shakshi left geet and geet lied down beside mahira. She thought how she gona handle mahira alone. Her father left them and how geet tell mahira her father is dead. She again come to window and start crying and said between her sobs.

Geet(crying) - main tume iske kabhi maaf nai karugi raj. Tunme aapna wada break kiya hai aur muje yaha akele chod gaye. Tum dekh rahe hona ki mahira kaise tumse baate karna chahti hai par usse kaise batau ki tum kabhi nai aaoge usske pass, kabhi usse koi kahani nai sunaoge. Kaise batao.

On other side of world in newyork in a big mansion

A man is doing tai-chi wearing only a loose pant. He is very handsome girls die for his a glimpse but he don't give a damn to their thoughts. He got many success in his career, already achieve best businessman award. His professional life is good but his personal life is nothing. He lost his parents in his early age and after dat he got only loneliness. Only a cousin sister he consider as his family and get some happiness with her and her small family.

Now he is doing his morning exercise and thinking about a deal. His thought broke by his phone ring. He answer call after seeing the caller.

Maan - hello di, gud morning

Other side -******

Maan - ya I know waha night hai, par yaha toh morning hai.

O.S. - *******

Maan - aaj kaise phone kiya aapne? Kal toh baat li thi humne.

O.S.- ******

Maan - main toh bhul hi gaya, anyways thanks.

O.S. -******

Maan - abhi kuch final nai hai.

O.S. - *****

Maan - ha main pura try karuga aur yah aka kaam katam karne ke baad jaldi waha pahuch jao.

O.S. - ******

Maan - ok then bye muje office jana hai and thanks once again.

So this is maan singh khurana, whose birthdat is today but he like always forgot about it. Only his di remember his birthday and wishes him. After exercise he went to his office where he is a terror.

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT

CHAHAT

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice part dear...
Emotional update... geet and her daughter..remembering her past and crying...Maan in US...😃...waiting for maaneet meeting...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice ud
geet was sad on raj death
her daughter continuously
asking fr her father
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hi thanks 4 da pm! lovely cs! Emotional sad update! Feeling 4 Geet n her daughter! Geet hubby died! She is shattered! hw can she tell her daughter tht her dad is dead? Geet is in tears! She also lots her mom at a young age! Geet does nt knw hw she will handle her daughter alone! Fab intro of Maan! he is alone in NY! Its his bday n his sister wishes him! Maan 4gt his bday! update soon! Well written. waiting 4 Maaneet 2 meet!

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