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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely story...glad to seee you back and glad that you have turned this story into an ff😃
looking forward to read more of your works
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Hi hope u had a wonderful Xmas! 😊
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Wish u a very happy new year😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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In my haste, I realised I never uploaded a photo! Sincere apology for that!

I hope you all had an incredible Christmas and spent it with your loved ones and a wonderful new year!

The next chapter will be uploaded soon (I hope).😆

This is where they went to lunch 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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happy new year! Thanks 4 da fab pic! ok np...will b waiting! 😊
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Updating soon! It's short though so forgive me 😛
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I'll post replies for chapter 3&4 first 😊
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CHAPTER 3 REPLIES

@Clairvoyant20: Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Arre... Geet has to check out Maan na, who wouldn't check out Maan 😉 Hope you enjoy the rest!

@sporthy_smile28: Awww that comment has definitely made my day and made me smile!!! Thank you so so much. I try and keep it original and cheesy... but sometimes I feel like it's too boring so thank you for reassuring me. Hope you enjoy chapter 5 😊

@flowing_river: Thank you! 😊

@khwaishfan: Thank you for taking out the time to read and comment as well! Haha exactly, who wouldn't go for a date with Mr Maan Singh Khurana 😆I'm glad you like the pictures and I'm so glad you've liked all the updates so far, as an amateur it's pretty hard not to doubt myself but I love hearing all the feedback and kind words from you! Thank you so much again and hope you enjoy chapter 5! 😊

@aparna301: Thank you!😊

@ramarora: There is nothing more accomplishing than to hear that, thank you so much!!!🤗 I really hope you enjoy the rest!

@Drashtilove: Thank you so much, enjoy chapter 5! 😊

@Kabslock: Thank you 😊I hope you enjoy the rest!

@Punam2712: Yep exactly! 😊 Thank you so much and I hope you like chapter 5!

@Soapoperasrfun: BINGO! I was hoping someone would mention it, seriously love the movie so much! Thank you so much and I really hope you enjoy the rest.

@Flame_of_Forest: How do you always find a way to sum up my thinking so brilliantly? I love reading your perspective on what has happened. Those are the exact words I would use to describe Maan's perspective on Geet (the only exception would be that I'd add alluring too the list). Thank you so much for commenting and I really hope you enjoy chapter 5! 😊

@anky_s: Ah When in Rome is such a beautiful movie but no as you know it's not based on it. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, I appreciate it a lot and the movie is Confessions of a shopaholic' (would definitely recommend watching it if you haven't, it's a great movie). I really hope you enjoy chapter 5 😊

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Chapter 4 REPLIES

@sporthy_smile28: Thank you, I'm glad you loved the part!!! And okay, thank you- please do let me know! I am open to constructive criticism! I hope you enjoy the next part 😊

@_Chinmayi_: Thank you so much and yep bang on!! Hope you like the next part 😊

@nanor: Thank you so much for commenting! I hope you enjoy chapter 5 😊

@aparna301: Thank you so much 😊

@Clairvoyant20: Yay, I'm glad you like Meera's character (I love her too 😆). Isn't Maan just the charmer? and I'm glad you liked the last bit. Thank you, please do let me know if you find anything! Hope you enjoy chapter 5.

@Soapoperasrfun: Thank you so much for your comment! Haha you've picked up the past bit, let's see what happens 😉. I can't promise anything but I will definitely try to write a nice story! Yes your pick up is very fair and genuine, to be honest reading the last chapter again I kind of felt the same way. I don't think I was able to convey the picture I was trying to portray very well in the last bit. I was trying to portray Geet giving maan a hug and Maan unknowingly/casually hanging on to her whilst they were talking. I think the Meera scene was meant to be a cue for the two to realise how close they actually were but I was not able to express it clearly. Thanks for pointing that out and the feedback, appreciate it tons! Hope you enjoy chapter 5

@fict: Thank you so much and wait and watch 😉

@Flame_of_Forest: Hmm I can't reveal that yet but I would love to hear your thoughts and what you think has happened! 😊 Yes you're right, it was in Italian and I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting and I hope you enjoy the rest

@khwaishfan: Thank you so much for your comment and yep, bang on! I'm glad you liked the picture and will enjoy chapter 5, hopefully the wait was worth it! 😊

@punam2712: Aw thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the rest! 😊

@Ash1991: Thank you so much and I guess we'll have to see what happens 😉 enjoy chapter 5!

@honeygrape: Aw thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it and yes it has been turned into an FF but I'm not sure of how I'll juggle it with school. I hope you enjoy chapter 5! 😊

Edited by nia24 - 10 years ago

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