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nia24

@nia24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Updating.. replies to comments will be posted later 😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

loved the part ..

so they are progressing positively!👍🏼

waiting for the next already!!

n yes about ur note... nothing negative till now

will defiantly let u know if we'll find something out of the place😊

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

nice part
loved it
meera and geet are besties meera engaged to yash and going to marry soon..
geet was in her office when someone rang reception bell
geet was surprised to see maan there
both are holding eachother when suddenly meera entered saying something she was stopped seeing them
geet inroduced her to maan
three chatted for some time
maan asked her for lunch but geet denied saying she has overloaded with work
but meera heared this and assured geet that she will look after the work
geet and maan ready to leave when meera said he is handsome poor him he dont know the language and asked geet what she said geet cover it with saying it's their joke

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Clairvoyant20

@Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

I am liking Meera's character 👍🏼 Maan dropping by Geet's office and taking her out to lunch

Geet sure needed this after a hectic day . The last part in Spanish was cool !

I can't see anything negative so can't comment on that

loving the story👏

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Ok... so Geet's past is a mystery that will be explored at some stage; Maan and Geet have gotten so comfortable with each other in such a short amount of time; 2 new characters introduced to the mix.

So, Maan, Geet, Adi, Meera and Yash are enough to create a wonderful story; but add some suspense, comedy, love and obvious romance to it, how can it not be nice?

Great story. I don't have any negative criticism so far... although I was surprised with Maan and Geet's chemistry and comfort with each other so soon. This is afterall their 3rd meeting...

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

nice part. whats the story with Geet's parents.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Geet and Meera together set the Eagle's Eye business in Rome, that's cool..but why did Geet's expressions change with the reference of her parents...Maaneet's increasing attraction and Meera spotted them...loved the teasing in Italian (I guess !) between Meera and Geet.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

hi thanks 4 updating so soon! Thanks 4 da pm n spectacular update! superbly written! Geet at wrk n is tired! Meera is ner best friend n colleague! they share a wonderfiul bond! she tells Geet her parents called! Geet stunned n in pain! Something is wrong! she leaves! Geet back at wrk n hungry! Meera left 4 wedding prep! Maan arrives! Geet happy 2 c him! Meera arrives n blabbers away till she notices Maan! She is shocked n apologises! A shy Geet moves away frm Maan! Meera introduces herself n asks who he is! Maan introduces himself! they get along! Maan asks 2 go out 4 lunch n she says no cos of wrk! Meera overhears n tells her 2 go! theleave! Meera says in Italian tht Maan is attractive n Geet responds tht she is engaged! Maan asks wt they r talking abt bt she lies! update soon! waiting 4 pic😊