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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_
Loved it<33

Thank you😃

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Congo for wining comptn i really like this os very much their love is truely out of the world

Thank you so much darling!

Glad you enjoyed it😳

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

This one i've guessed it right it is by u😃

too good ... the separation period her faith to get her love back!

her attempts to move on...

the delight on finding him back safe n healthy!👏

some how the whole journey which she walked alone in his wait touched the cords!

Congratulations one again!🥳

N Thank u For giving us a beautiful Story to read!😳

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frostedstarlit

@frostedstarlit

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
This one i've guessed it right it is by u😃
too good ... the separation period her faith to get her love back!
her attempts to move on...
the delight on finding him back safe n healthy!👏

some how the whole journey which she walked alone in his wait touched the cords!

Congratulations one again!🥳

N Thank u For giving us a beautiful Story to read!😳

Hehee

Good guess😃

I am delighted you liked it...the inspiration came from a song called Come Home

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: frostedstarlit

Thank you so much!😳
Maaneet romance is eternal for me too...so much so that no other romantic couple comes even close into consideration.

I have added a link of my collection here, its called frosty's literal anthology. For PMs on my works and updates for FF add me to your Buddy list😃

true...maaneet were spcl...aftr so many yrs dey r still in our heart n bindn us all here too...

thnx fr link n pm...will surely read soon

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Congrats for winning Os compition for this OS. I already knew it was written by you. But did not know that you written Finished Hour also.

Beautiful story. Loved its full of every emotions. How she lived on a single hope that he will come back one day. Loved how she kept going with the help of writing for him. She relied on info given by adi. He was the only source of info for her. He was the only person to support her when she totally lost her hope. But maan misunderstood her seeing both together that she moved on. I liked how she recited every vow of them to clear his misunderstanding

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UNICORN75

@UNICORN75

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Such a beautiful piece of writing...The flow of the story,emotions,love... all awesome 👏 👏 👏
Loved it

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mhappy

@mhappy

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Hey you wonderful writer sahiba

many many congrats yaar

so you are the writer of this so beautiful story

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I had read it before and liked it also

it was so so very beautiful story

their strong love conquered all the difficulties and emerged as the winner

geet's wait for her sir and her constant hope that he will come , her pain her mails and her messages

oh that was so painful

but when at last her never ending hope won, their love won

thank u so much for such a lovely os frosty dear👏👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

ahh you wrote the winning os
it was beautiful
she didnt give up
even though he told her to
am glad she didnt give up
her wait was paid
though he thought she moved on
but she hadnt
how could she right
just magical for sure

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Aphrodisiac

@Aphrodisiac

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Its so beautiful I feel like crying in happiness for at the end he returned to her 😭

Beautiful ... actually falling short of words just loved the plot , the love story , the longing , the hopefulness amid literally nothing to hold on to until when her faith won Maan returned to Geet inspite of the henious war , himself being scarred for life , he returned to his lady love for that one promise made 👏Its a Pure Delight reading this , it stayed with me for a long time . I am so greedy a reader 😛 now I wish to read another part giving a glimpse of their lives post this sometime , anytime whenever you feel like 👍🏼

And you truly deserved to win Frosty 👏

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