||MG OS: Avow to abide by you|| 30th Oct|| - Page 4

Originally posted by: chahat_mannat

Nice os dear

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Competition me blog me n now forum me...

have read it so many times already but comments nahi diya... hmmm... chalo tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi!!😛

It was one of my fav stories which I loved in the comp!

I tho thought ye maan sach me devdas bangaya!!😆

N drama ko maan ke thoughts se ache se blend kiya👏

Loved the os so much!!🤗

oh... thank you dear... u read it so many times

Originally posted by: icskwt

wonderful os dear JP...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

terrific OS! superbly written 😊

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

beautiful & fresh concept...fantastic writing...👏

Originally posted by: chavvi16

uh you were part of the os contest right
i remember reading it there
awww poor thing
he thought she went away from him
that she is marrying another
but she wasnt
not really it was all a play
bless due to that he confessed
and his boss or dad caught him too
but he sure gave maan a right heart attack

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Nice os..

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Lovely OS Jeev.. 👏

I read it os competition.. Liked it ! Keep it up 😛

Originally posted by: leenukiguru

amazing os

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I had read and commented it in the OS competition thread..

so a little bit of repeating it here..😊

the dream part and the portrayal of his feelings was beautiful, kind of mysterious and intriguing one..where he was moving forward on the pathway to approach her, still not sure of her reaction...always carrying the fear of her rejection which never allowed him to speak openly..and the play took the best out of Maan to express it in front of everyone including his dad..the pink confusion, the thesaurus Geet, wake up alarm was funny...enjoyed reading it very much.