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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats for d new story maasi
Liked d prologue nd cd
But part 1 kaun se page pe hai.
Index banao
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
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Lekin wo to ek sapna tha 😆
Small one
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Posted: 10 years ago


di...m.waiting for the update...!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

Love in america... Nice name

Will read soon...😊


iska name kbb badla???😲😲😲
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Ishq Ghumshuda...Part 2




Handa Mansion:

The smell of morning cardamom tea along with aroma of yummy aloo paratha was awakening the taste buds , which is signal that it is time to do morning pet pooja ...All family members were at the dining table chatting while having breakfast ...

" Bitto ki maa ...aaj tho paratha bada changa bana hain" Inder handa said to his wife while licking his fingers...

" kyun ji... Aaj bada pyaar agayi mere paratho par...roj tho khate ho..." sujatha handa shouted from the kitchen while making parathas ...while dadi , rajji and bitto giggled..." waise aapki ladli dikhayi nahi dikh rahi hain...subah se gayab hain...ladko jaisa khel khel rahi hain... samjayiye usse... Shaadi ke baad pata nahi kya karegi... ghar ke kaam seekhthi bhi nahi..." she continued worried about her elder daughter...
" arre khelne dena bahu... shaadi ke baad pata nahi aisa mauka usse milega ya bhi nahi bidesh main" ... her mother-in-law Kalyani handa answered...
" Ji maa...aap theek kehrrahi hainn..." Inder continued...while Sujatha nodded her head disapproving...
"papa .. kya didi shaadi ke baad sachi main chalijayegi hume chodke" Bitto intervened in the middle ..." Tho kya hume akela chodke jayegi...tho phir humse koun khelenge..." Rajji added making the environment emotional...
" aisa hi hota hain beta... shaadi ke baad har ladki ko apni sasural jaana padta hain...tumhari maa aur dadi bhi aisehi aaye the..." Inder explained them...when Rajji said " aisa hain tho mujhe shaadi nahi karni..." With a layer of tears in her eyes...
Inder laughed and said " waise tumhari didi kaha gayi...abhi tak dikhayi bhi nahi" trying to change the emotional environment...

" didi tho subah hi utke khetho main chaligayi" bitto slipped his tongue and then closed his mouth realising what he said...

Sujatha came from the kitchen hearing this" dekha aapne..chadao aur bhi aapki laadli beti ko... " she said angrily...

" shaant ho jaa bitto ki maa..." Inder said and asked Rajji to call her sister from fields to have breakfast... Both Bitto and Rajji went to fields to call her sister...

Dadi(Kalyani) " Waise beta... Anand ka phone aaya hain kya...iss hafte unka phone aane wala hai..." She enquired...
"Nahi maa... main aaj shaam ko phone karunga...waise abhi waha raat hain..." Inder replied...

" Ha jee... jaldi rishta ko aage badaayiye... abhi bohot late ho chuka hain" Sujatha intervened while having her breakfast...Inder nodded his head and left for his daily chores...

Meanwhile Rajji and Bitto went to their farms in search of their sister..."Geet didi... Geet didi..." They found her sitting on a small parapaet wall eating sugarcane humming songs and waving at them..." Geet didi...aap yaho ho... kab se dhund rahe he hum aapko" Rajji said panting...

" Kyun kya hua...? itni subah sabko meri yaad aagayi..." she said playing with her bangles...

" Yaad aagayi matlab kya...aap koi shehzadi ho...jaldi chalo...maa bularahi hain...subah subah aap ghar se bhagkar yaha bhaithi hain...papa kehrahethe ki jaldi aapki shaadi hone wali hain..." rajji replied.

" chod Rajji...yeh tho hone wala hi hain...chal pehle kuch maje karte hain..." Geet replied jumping from the wall and dusting her dress...

"Chal na didi ...maa gussa hojayegi" Bitto intervened...
Geet is not ready to go home and is in her mischevious mood " jayenege bus adha ghante...pakka" she replied giving them pinky promise... Both of them agreed...

Suddenly they heard a shreik sound and some one singing in the fields beside a generator room...they giggled knowing who could be there at this time having bath and singing in his besura voice... Geet " Shh...shh...ab maze ko dekho..." Saying she went towards the room and hiding behind the wall, she could see her father's trusted servant and her favourite dushman( according to her)ramu kaka...
"Thande Thande Pani Se Nahana Chahiye
Gana Aaye Yah Na Aaye Gana Chahiye"
" Acha... Thanda paani se naheto...abhi batati hu...papa ka chamcha...humesha papa daante hain..aapki vajahse" thinking of some thing she went towards Rajji and Bitto and said " tum log yahi raho main abhi aati hu..." Saying she went away without listening to them...

These two were worried thinking what their sister is going to do today...Geet came back within five minutes with a bucket full of some water... "didi ...kya laye ho aapne...kuch shararat mat karna...warna hume bhi daant khane padenge..." Rajji said afraid of what their parents gonna say...
" tum dono muh band rakho aur chillao math...mujhe badla lena hain...humesha ramu kaka ki vajhase...papa aur maa mujhe daanthe hain..." Saying she went towards generator room with a bucket full of water used to wash cattle...
Without making noise she splashed the entire bucket on him...S.P.L.A.S.H...and made a run towards her house along with her siblings...
Here, in the fields due to unexpected shower, Ramu kaka was devastated and angry... shouted " koun hain.koun hain?" he heard anklets sound and guessed who would do such mischevious things...mumbling to himself he bathed again and went to his house...

Meanwhile... Geet entered her home and went to kitchen slowly like a turtle without making noise to have her breakfast... she happily was taing parathas on her plate when her mother came twisted her ear and said " kaha chali gayi subah subah... Kisko pareshaan karne gayi..."

" Awww...maa ...chodiyena...main bas kheth main gayi...kisiko bhi pareshaan nahi kiya..." Geet replied...Hearing her answer Sujatha seriously warned her " agar kuch bhi nakhre kari na...maar khaayegi tu..." Sujatha warned her and went asking her to have breakfast and clean the dining table...

Geet sat on her regular place on the verandah having breakfast beside her dadi and chatting with her..."dadi...aapka aur dadaji ka pyaar kahani sumao na" Geet asked Kalyani in a filmy dramatic way licking her fingers eating her paratha...
" meri pyaar ki kahani baad main soch... pehle teri kahani shuru hone wali " dadi replied making Geet blush..." bina dekhe hi sharmarahi ho..."

" mujhe aap par poora vishwas hain...isliye main aankh band karke aap par vishwaas karti hu..." Geet replied looking into her dadi's eyes...

Inder who just heard her words, came towards Geet and said" Geet Tum meri beti ho..Inder Handa ka guroor ho...aur muhje tum par poora vishwaas hain ki kabhi bhi tum mera bharosa nahi thodoge...aur main tum mujh par jo bharosa rakhi hain ...main kabhi toodne nahi dunga...aur tu jaha jayegi waha khush rahegi..." saying he blessed her..." Aur aaj main Anand bhai ko phone karne wali hu...ye shaadi tumahri bachpan main tai ho chuki hain...Ladka ka naam Dev hain ...Anand bhai ke saath business sambaltha hain...aur main tumhari raii jaana chatha hu " he further added looking at his wife...Geet blushed but looked directly into her father eyes and said " Main tayaar hu papa" ...Inder held his head high and hugged her with a layer of tears in his eyes...

To control the emotional situation Raaji intervened " waise didi .aap jab jiju aaye tho unhe kaise pukaroge..."

Geet made a O shaped face and made a run towards her in portico to beat her for teasing...while elders along with bitto who is sitting on his fathers's lap enjoying the drama... Atlast Geet caught Rajji, twirled her hand backwards and said " didi ko chedthi hain...teri baar aane de..." Rajji caught her ear with the free hand saying " sorry didi...chodo na...please..." making a baby face...Geet left her hand and turned back to go when she heard Rajji singing...
Rajji sang pulling Geet towards her..
o jiji kyaa kehake unako bulaaoge dulhaa banake jo aayenge
o jiji, what would you address him, one who will be your groom

o jiji bolo to kyaa kehake unako bulaaoge dulhaa banake jo aayenge
tell me, what would you address him?
Geet
a-ji o-ji hum naa kahenge hum to isharon mein baate karenge - 2
hey mister, and such like, i will not say. i will talk to him in signs

sab jaise apane unako bulaate hai waise hum naa bulaayenge
i will not address him like everybody else does

o chhoti (she sang singing on the swing in the portico)
Then rajji intervened

shaadi hai dilli ka laddu, laddu ye har man me phoote
marriage is like pudding of delhi, every heart desires it

isakaa lage har daanaa bhalaa
every piece of it taste delicious
Geet blushed and twisted her ears and sang

jo khaaye pachataaye jo naa khaaye wo pachhataaye
one will repent whether or not one eats it
to khaakar hi pachhataanaa bhaalaa
then why not eat and then repent?
ye laddu tujhako ek din khilaayenge tere saajan jab aayenge
you will also have a piece of this pudding when your beloved comes

o chhoti...
Geet sang making Rajji blush...then Rajji went towards her...pulled her towards her mother and sang

mithi hai brig ki mithai laddu pedhaa baalushahi
sweets of brij (vrindavan) like laddu, peda and baalushahi are sweet

par sabase mithi ho tum jiji
but you are the sweetest of all, dear sister


When Geet intervened and sang
kanchan ki jaisi khari hai ras ye ras ki bhari hai
pure as the gold, filled with love to the brim

ganne ki ganderi hai tu chhoti
like a cane of sugarcane, you chooti


Raaji then sang making Geet blush
brig ki ye mithi mithai sadaa ke liye jijaa bandh le jaayenge o jiji
this sweetest sweet of brij will be permanently taken by brother-in-law


gaane ko tum gaa rahi ho ji apaana behalaa rahi ho
of course you are singing, having a good time

najar to hai rahon mein lagi
but your eyes are waiting on the way (for him)

Geet then sang as if doing some work
chhoti tu chhoti khoti badi hai
o chhoti you are too smart, ain't you

behanaa ko bas chhedati hai
you tease your elder sister

main to yahaa kamon mein lagi
i am just doing my work here
Raaji laughed and sang

aane do jiji tumhare ji ki dashaa jijaako bataayenge o jiji
let him come jiji, i will tell brother-in-law what is actually going in your heart
Inder Handa and his wife felt proud of her daughters and determined to give them every happiness that he could...
Precap: (for part 3) Inder handa and Anand Malhotra talking
(for part4) Maaneet meeting...
Note:
I changed the title because I felt Ishq...Ghumshuda is well suited...
I don't know how this part came out...please do leave comments so that I can make changes if you don't like it... ...I am a big fan of 90's &2000's classic melodies.. I might include them... If you don't want any songs please do comment so that I will not include them in the ff's ..I have zero knowledge about the new songs..please suggest if you find any song is suitable.
Waiting for your response...Enjoy reading...
Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
me 1st
nice part vani all r talkng abt geet nd her weddng 😊
bt d person abt whom all r talkng is busy planng 2 hv sm fun😛
nd atlast got bakra ramu kaka 😆
geet trusts her parents so much witout even lukng at d boy she is ready 2 marry him😃
all r teasng her nd she is blushng😳
maaneet r gong 2 meet in part 4👍🏼
waitng 4 d nxt part
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i love the update di
geet marige n evry one talking about her marige
hope dev is not the person whom she married 🤢😭
mere ko asey feeling arhi hai
love they way geet trust her parent
lovly
me second pie ki bachi 😡
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
kab maan se milegi geet...

superb n lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely
Geet ko kitna vishwas hai apne father ki choice pe.
Missed maan in dis part.
Geet is so mischievous.
Geet family is so lovely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
aapko pata hai main iss threaad ko dhundh rahi thi...Love in America name se par mujhe mila hi nahi aur uske baad main dekha Ishq Ghumshuda...phir main sochne lag gayi, aapne yeh story kab start kari😕, but jab thread dekhi tab pata chala aapne name change kar diya hai

I loved the update and mostly the naughty Geet, she is so bubbly and fun loving, loved the way everyone in the family cares for each other, and the respect which Geet held for her father is awesome, but pata hai main saath me sad bhi hoon kyunki sab log abhi toh Dev aur Geet ki shaadi kar wana chahte hai but aisa nahi hona chahiye na, I want Maaneet woh jaldi se, loved the way Rajji teased Geet, song janane ke liye read kya oh main toh usse gaane hi lag gayi thi update chodkar, phir maine wapas update read karna chalu kiya😆😛

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