ISHQ GHUMSHUDA .MG FF. Part 4 updating

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thankyou Sweta for the Awesome concept ...

I loved the banner ... Priya,... Thanks a ton...😊

Note: By reading first part many may think it is adapted from a movie...but its not...the story completely take a different turn after couple of parts...😃



Character sketch:

Malhotra's Family:
Anand Malhotra, originally from Punjab moved to United states 25yrs back for a better future after his wife left him with 5yr old son. His sister Radhika Singh(Rads) also stay with him.The family is one of the richest in Newyork, USA. He still believes in his motherland and the culture where he grew.
His son Dev, spoilt brat in other words bigda hua ladka... Loves to spend his money and time in casinos and boozing...

Radhika Singh: Anand Malhotra sisiter, lives with him in USA and supports Dev, always have an eye on their property.

Honey Singh: Radhika's husband... good for nothing...

Dev Malhotra:

Anand Malhotra:


Maan Khurana:: He is childhood friend of Dev, lives with his sister in Newyork. He isvery attached to Anand and dev. Most of the time he is seen in dev's house...saves Dev from his father's scolding... he is working with Anand in his company...





Radhika (rads) Singh(Anand sister)





HANDA's FAMILY...

The family is settled in Chandigarh, Punjab... A well settled Agricultural Family... The family is full of life and every day happens to be festival for them...

Inder Handa, a loyal and down to earth person, is well respected in the village. His mother kalyani's words are always final to him.. Sujatha handa , a perfect house wife.

Geet, their elder daughter naughty yet innocent girl, loves to play around fields with her sister Rajji , brother bitto and bacha log of her village...She completed her college and her marriage is settled years ago... with son of her father's friend... she is waiting for her groom...always shies when ever her marriage is being discussed...

Geet Handa








Inder Handa



Sujatha Handa



Kalyani Handa



Scroll down for prologue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:
" pia mera piya ...jaha piya waha main...

mera piya... waha main

des chudayaaga ... pardes bulayega...

sandesh aayega ... mera naam" a young girl was singing swinging in her garden..

A voice disturbed her surroundings..." aayega aayega ...tera piya aake tujhe lekar jaayega, chal chal , tera sandesh aagaya,... ...Bidesh se Anand bhai ka phone agaya teri shadi pakki karne" the old woman said.
Hearing the words, Geet felt as her whole world is blossomed and made a run towards the living room and she stopped hearing her father...

" Ji bhai sahab, jaroor... hum intezaar karenge...ji... hume batiyega kab aarahe hain aap phir phone karke batiyega" Inder Handa said and disconnected the phone...

Geet was still peeping through the door, hearing their talks.

" ma, meri gudiya dulhan banne wali hain" Inder said happily hugging his mother...

Waiting for your response . hope you like it...

Index:

Part 1-pg20

Part2- pg30

Part 3 -pg 40



Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratz 4 d new story vani 🥳
nice CS bt apna maan kidar hai??? 😕
geet's dad got cal 4m.his frnd askng geet's hand 4 his son 😳
waitng 4 d update
priya u hv made an awesm banner lovd it 😃
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Congratz vani for the new story. I'm so so happy for you.. Keep on writing and we are here to read your stories. I know I'm always late but I love your stories..
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nice prologue
mujei srk ki film yaad aayi reading the cs..
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Hii.. Congrats for a new story..
Par concept kaha likha hai? Or is that in your mind... Hume nahi bataogi?
Pr isme maan kaha hai? Jaldi update do.. Bahot confusion hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
but this make me remember pardes..

hope its not like that ..but agar maneet hai toh chalegi
waiting for maneet ..
why didn't u put maan's character ..


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Originally posted by: vrinda22

nice prologue

mujei srk ki film yaad aayi reading the cs..


Thankyou vrinda.di..
😆 SRK ki filmm... 😃

Glad you liked it...😊
Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

lovely thread...di...!!!!!!
awesome!!!


Thankyou...😛🤗

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