ISHQ GHUMSHUDA .MG FF. Part 4 updating - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
mere ghar pe...pav bhaji ban rai..hai..sab log invited hai...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

mere ghar pe...pav bhaji ban rai..hai..sab log invited hai...!!!


main ready...🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
updating...
Thank you for your likes and comments...

Part 1:

XYZ AUDITORUIM... NEWYORK...

" Maan...Maan...Maan...once more...we want once more..." the cheering is heard in an audience packed auditorium...The audience were cheering and enjoying to the core..." Want more" Maan asked...The audience were again cheering " Once more..."

Abiding to their wishes, he started singing
" ek pal ka jeena...song" ( Kaho na Pyaar movie...one of my fav, hope you like it.) the crowd started dancing, whistling...encouraging him... As he finished the song there was a loud round of applause...Thanking them, Maan said " I thank each and every one for coming here... for the release of my new album... DARD-E-DIL" The crowd was applauding, when the CD of the album was opened and first song was released by Anand Malhotra...Listening to the song the crowd went mad in enjoying... when Maan interrupted the crowd" Thankyou everyone. I hope you will enjoy my new album...you can receive the album at the reception... all the money you donated will go to PENNY FOR A CAUSE" then the curtains went down marking the end of the show... and

then ...Splash...thud..." he fell down hurting his bum...

Opening his eyes he ran behind him shouting" ruk jao Dev, subah subah maar khane ka irada hain kya...". {stop Dev, are you determined to have good beatings from me}

Dev replied while running around the house" aur nahi to kya... 10 bajgaya . tum nahi uthrahe the... subah se 10 baar papa ka call aaye the... 12 baje ki flight hain... wo aarahe hain { Dad called 10 times since morning, reminding his flight at 12, you were not waking ... so I had to do this} saying he made a run to the garden of the house...

Both were tired...after running...at last Maan caught Dev and he got a good beating for disturbing his morning sleep.

Later they freshen up and were waiting for Mr. Anand Malhotra... who went out of station for some businesswork...

2 PM
Both Maan and Dev were playing video games... when Anand Malhotra came... Maan was excited to meet him.. he wished him and took blessings, but Dev could not meet his father eyes... he came to wish him but instead received a tight slap on his cheek...Dev was holding his cheek looking down... when Maan about to ask, Anand interrupted him saying... " DO you know Maan, what this useless son mine did"... Maan was expecting something bad..." he spent 10,000$ in one day playing in casino... he called my manager and asked him to transfer money..." then he looked towards Dev and said" If you dont know how to earn money..better don't spend it..." he said angrily and left to his room... dev without replying took his car keys and left... Maan decided to leave Anand alone for some time and decided to talk to him after couple of hours...

continued in next part...
I know this is short... next parts will be long... waiting for your response...😊
Comments please... warna ... next part will be delayed...

If any one wants pm for the story... add me in your buddy list...




Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: svani



main ready...🥳


come..di..and meri in shatain bachoo ko..smbalne mai..bhi help..karo..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vani when r u gong 2 update??
Sweta prepare smthing sweet baby ill finish it witin sm minutes
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Posted: 10 years ago
savi i think u didnot mention maan in characters detail😕...
i want index with direct link plz😳...
awesome update but very smalll...
it start just end...give long update sweety ...
so maan was actually dreaming...introduce geet soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Gr8 start ... waiting 4 upcoming uds
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Posted: 10 years ago
lol..that Dec..is such a spoilt brat..

u knw m glad u r writing this..story..!!coz this part was amazing ..can we have pics in the update too..??plz..

if not then.its fine..di..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
maan was dreaming...his dream got disturbed by dev ..
maan ran behind dev for breaking his sleep
anand came and gave a tight slap to dev...when maan asked the reason anand told him dev spent 10000$ in one day...
eagerly waiting to know more about maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! So Maan is Dev;s friend! Maan dreaming! Dev interrupted him! Maan angry! Anand slapped Dev as he spend to much money! update soon! Well written!

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