MG FF : DILWALE DULHANIA LE JAYENGE Teaser / Page 143 Jan 27th - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
As I have promised you that if not an update I'll post a teaser..
So here comes not one but two teasers..😃
I hope you like them..

Teaser 1

Tears are endlessly flowing through her eyes and in a hurry to find her missing anklet she got tripped. She was about to hit the ground when she found someone holding her hand and making her stand. She immediately opened her eyes and saw someone looking at her closely. It is not that lusty gaze which brij or other men always give her which scares her, disturbs her make her feel disgusted of herself as to why always she becomes prey of such looks. Instead she got some warm feeling, some concern, some kind of promise as if he is the one who is going to be her savior.
With tears in her eyes when she is busy analyzing his look a strong punch has landed on his face which made him take two steps back and wince in pain. She is shocked to see what has happened and before he could get another punch she has held the person's hand...

Teaser 2

He slowly took his hand behind her and draped the duppatta around her head. When she realized what he has done, she immediately dipped her head. Some unknown feelings started dancing in her heart which she has no idea of. She was feeling excited, scared, embarassed, nervous, shy and what not. She couldnt understand as to why he did this. Just then she felt his finger under her chin which made her part her lips in shock but still she couldnt raise her eyes to meet his.
When he finally got succedded in making her raise her head their eyes met and she could see the twinkle and some sort of hapiness in them as if he got some priceless treasure.

Hope you continue to show your support..
Thank you once again...
Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Di its great to see u writing
Waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
nice part
loved it
DEV MD of Khurana construction ..
dev going to mumbai to fulfill his father's wish
but where is maan..?
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
nice teasers
eagerly waiting to know who is that person with geet..?maan or Dev..?

Edited by _lehar_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
congrats for ur story. nice story liked it very much.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
interesting teasers! update soon n pls try n pm so will knw u updated! Thanks
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

congrats on ur first MG FF! interesting update! Where is Maan? Geet n Dev?? Pls post cs! update soon! Well written

Thank you soo much...🤗
I cant post CS now..
U will get to know the characters along with the story...
but once the story gets on the right track i may post just to explain their behavior.
You will get maan very soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidhi24

Nice start dear, do continue soon

Thank you soo much...🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Congrats for your first attempt

Bookmarking

Thank you soo much...🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: k1k1k1

Interesting like it but we're manneet on all this will be waiting

Thank you soo much...🤗
U will get to know that very soon dear..
till then have patience..

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