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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the welcome Geet got. Such a contrast to how she left. Maan is over the moon. Curious to know which room he has arranged for Geet and Manu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part...
maan gav such a warm welcome...
loved how he is all excited..nd all khurana was surprised...
gud dadi ache say thi...
maanu was so happy...
nd geet all confused... y he is so nice...
cant wait to read next part...
dear..waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 26
awesome dear...
Geet is still scared and also not that comfortable...
the others are so shocked and surprised...
Daadima knowing Maan brought Geet to the mansion has no problem with her...
all are happy with this and also Manu...
how come Maan has changed this much and also this attached to Manu?
maana hai hes his son but he doesnt know that...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m happy that Geet was welcomed gracefully in KM
Even Dadi too was looking cool as she saw that Maan was very happy
Maan was so much happy to see Geet and Manu with him..He did everything for them what he could do..I m really waiting to see his reaction when he will know about the identity of Manu
awesome update babie
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovly update :-) :-) finaly geet arrivd n km.. Al welcomd geet warmly... Lovd it dr:-) :-) thank u 4 pm ... Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
enjoyed reading.thanks for updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waitin Di..for next part...
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Originally posted by: arunima.

Aaj ud ni milega kya?



😆😆 milega...
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Posted: 10 years ago



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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 26


Part - 27



There wr many questions in all's mind , how Maan knew about Geet nd Manu this much ? how Manu was so comfortable with Maan ? How he knew everything about Geet nd Manu ? Why he didn't say it before ? they wr giving him only looks nd he knew that now he had to open d truth .

All wr comfortable now nd talking to each other ,, Dadima was sitting there but she was quiet ,, Manu was sitting on carpet nd playing with Jojo who was happily sitting in Manu's small lap nd licking his hands nd some time nose nd chin nd made Manu giggled ,, Nakul nd Satish who wr enjoying sitting near them went to kitchen with a smile .

Manu: mommy ,, Jojo is s o cu te .

Geet : yeah , but be careful baby ,, don't let him lick .( she asked Maan) ye katega to nahi na?

Maan: no, don't worry .

Geet: wo mai bhi kitchen mei jati hun , , manu ke liye formula milk banana padega .

Rashi: mai bana deti hu beta tum baitho .

Geet: nahi aunty, mai bana lungi , aap ku pareshan hote ho aur fir aapko idea nahi aayega ,, plzz.

Rashi nodded in a yes nd Geet opened her hand bag nd took out Manu's milk box nd bottles ,, she went in kitchen nd wash nd then boiled d bottles ,, prepared his milk nd than filled d bottle ,, working in kitchen she asked about Nakul nd Satish well being nd about their families ,, both wr very happy to see her nd surprised with a big change in her but her nature was same very humble.

There Rashi asked Maan about Geet ,, they knew that he knowingly hide this from them.


Rashi: Maan tum Geet ke bare mei sab janty thy to bataya kun ahi ?

Maan: wo Geet ne mana kiya tha ki wo khud baat karegi .

Yash: wo aa rahi hei ye tumhe pahale se pata tha?

Maan: Ji , ( he hide that Geet didn't want to come in KM) , I wanted to give u a surprize ,, I know u missed her .

Yash : thanks a lot Maan u really gave me a happiness today ,, hope aage ab koi usse kuch nahi kahega .

Maan: i'm sorry Dad , I hurt u nd Geet a lot ,, now i...

He stopped his words in mid seeing Geet ,, she was coming from kitchen ,, Nakul ns Satish wr behind her with coffee nd snacks trays.

Geet removed her shoes nd sat near Manu on carpet to feed him ,, all startled seeing that .

Yash: Geet beta neeche ku , yahan aao ,, manu ko yahan le aao.

Geet : it's OK uncle , mujhe aadat hei ,, wo jojo ko nahi chodega ,,, Manu baby have ur milk nd sleep .

Manu: mommy no sleeping ,,peezz

Geet: baby u didn't sleep properly in flight ,, nd jojo also get up early, he too has his milk nd sleep .

Maan ordered Nakul to settled Geet's luggage in d room nd mentioned d room ,, Nakul went with Satish taking her bags ,, all wr busy in mommy-son's cute talks .

Manu: mommy ,, bling othel bottle of milk fol Jojo .

Geet: he didn't drink with bottle beta ,, he has his bowl .

Manu: OK , give him half of my milk .

Geet: u have urs nd he'll drink his .

Manu: not this ? he drink choco milk ?

Geet: no , come ,, ( she took d jojo from his lap nd put that aside but manu held his rope in hand ,, she took manu in her lap nd gave him d bottle ,, Manu started sucking his milk ,, jojo was looking at him sitting near Manu ,, manu took out his bottle nd asked )

Manu: mommy ,, give jojo his milk ,, he is hungly.

Geet: Ok ,i'll tell Nakul kaka , OK u finish ur milk .( she placed his bottle in his mouth ,, after few sec he stopped again)

Manu: mommy jojo'll sleep with me .

Geet rolled her eyes nd all started laughing it was a sweet treat for all listening these cute talks of a small kid nd Geet knew she was going to face a tough time to handle Manu nd his unique demands .

Yash: Geet beta apni coffee lo , tahandi ho rahi hei.

Maan stood up from his place nd brought her mug there ,, Geet felt odd , she never got this special treatment in this house nd hesitated she gave a quick feared look to Dadima , she looked down nd took d mug from Maan's hand with a faint smile whispering him thanku .

Manu: Mommy , it's molning , no sleeping .

Geet: no baby it's too early ,, nd i'm tired baby , u too ,, first sleep for some time then u cn play whole day with Jojo .

Manu: mommy ,,

Geet: manu finish ur milk before my coffee otherwise i'll send jojo to his home .

Manu: no mommy ,, uncle Maan don't send jojo .

Maan: Ok baby ,, then finish ur milk .

He hardly finished his milk ,, Geet took him in her arms nd rested his head on her shoulder to make him sleep .

Maan: Geet mujhe de do mei sula deta hun u have ur coffee ( He came nd took manu in his arms nd started patting his back slowly to make him sleep .

Dadima, Yash nd Rashi wr surprised seeing this side of Maan ,, he was so caring for Manu .

Maan: Dad, Mom nd Dadima plzz aap sab bhi kuch der rest ker lo ,, I woke up all of u very early ,, Geet tum bhi ,, tumhare bags room mei rakhwa diya hei .

Yash : haan beta thoda rest ker lo BF per milty hei , u both r very tired, Rashi Nakul ko BF ke liye order ker do .

Rashi nd Dadima got up nd went to their respective places ,, Dadima was oddly quiet ,, she was only listening nd smiling but didn't say a word nd ask anything to Geet .


Precap --- a lil argument between maan nd Geet ...

Part - 28



sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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