MG SS: Kya Pyar Karoge Mujhse! Complete! Sequel Link is Up! - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: honeygrape

awww poor geet...that was bad maan...you should have checked the lifts too...poor thing...anyways enjoyyyed the part...very very tempting teaser 😃 waiting for more

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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! Well written! Poor Geet! Maan made her come to his office so many time! Lift nt wrking! Geet did nt knw abt the other lift! Geet reveals 2 dadi! update soon! Past well incorporated!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAAN HAS GOT GEET TO HIS OFFICE BUT HOW TO ROMANCE HER IS THE QUESTION

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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

naughty maan

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

lolz .. poor lover boy😆

Nice part

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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Deelight

wow.. wat a wat a precap... muaah...!!


lovely update...her narration was superb n thn his was lyk a cherry on top!

waitin for the nxxxt!
tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet was so excited and Maan uff he didnt know he was troubling her so much on her first day itself...
Geet got so tired...
and told everything to Daadima...
and the whole issue reached Maan too...
well Geet for the first time felt something for Maan...
well Maan Babu aapki koshish safal hona shuru hogayi...
cont soon dear...

Yup! Maan's plan is working!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Awesome part..maan is so chaloo

Yup! That he is!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3. PLAN No. 2. HUM TUM EK LIFT MEIN BAND HO!

Geet bit her lip nervously as she looked at the man in standing beside her. He was pensively looking ahead. Feeling her eyes, he turned to look at her and she looked down with a jerk. After few seconds, she slowly raised her eyes and looked again at the man beside her. She smiled shyly as she remembered the feeling of being in his arms. The man beside her gave her glance and frowned at her shy expression. He nudged her and looked at her curiously. She shook her head and gave him an uneasy smile. Maan rolled his eyes and looked back ahead. Geet pouted at his annoyance and then smiled shyly again.

Today Maan and Geet got out of the house at the same time to go for Office and seeing this Daadi asked Geet to go to Office in Maan's car instead of going with Dev as she usually did. Maan grudgingly agreed to take her and soon they were driving towards their Office. Many times their hands touched while Maan changed the gear and that made Geet remember the way she felt when she was held in his arms in the party and also in his cabin on her first day of office. And that was why now while travelling in the lift alone with him made her glance at Maan every other minute. Through her peripheral glance, she noticed Maan fiddling with his phone but did not take much stock of it.

Suddenly, the lift jerked into a stop and Geet lost her balance. Luckily for her, Maan was able to grab her. Maan had grabbed her by her waist and Geet felt a tremor run through her body at his touch making her heart race wildly. She turned to look at Maan and her eyes were arrested at the way Maan stared at her intensely. Geet gulped nervously and continued to stare at him. Their stare fest stopped when the light went off making them come out of trance.

"Hey Babaji! Maan! Yeh kya ho raha hai?", Geet whispered in worry.

Maan patted her back in an effort to comfort her, "It is ok Geet! Kuch nahi hua! Lift kharaab hogayi hogi! Aur kuch nahi! We will be out soon!"

Geet nodded but every second ticking made her worry more.

Geet's gripped tightened when the lift jerked a bit. She hid her face into Maan's chest in fear. Maan stiffened first and then he placed his hand on her hair which soothed her a little bit. She took a deep breath trying to calm her wildly beating heart which was now beating fast in fear. She looked up at him with fear filled eyes when suddenly the lift started moving down with racing speed. Geet let out a wild scream and gripped Maan's arms tighter making her knuckles turned white. If Maan was hurt by her grip, he did not show. Suddenly, the lift stopped to jerk and the lights came back up.

"Shaayad lift theek hogaya hai! Thode der mein darwaaza khul jaayega!", Maan told her and Geet heaved a sigh of relief. She looked at Maan with tears filling her eyes and then she hugged him tightly. She was fine! They were fine! Maan hugged her back tightly, she assumed, in relief. They remained like that for few moments when Geet slowly opened her eyes. She took a sharp breath as she realised how close to Maan she was. Every part of her where Maan touched her felt like it was burning in fire. Her heart thumped wildly in chest as shiver went through her body. The feelings running through her body seemed alien to her and she was unable to understand them.

The door opened and the crowd alarmed at the lift problem gathered around the door but Geet was too lost in her feelings to care. She continued to revel in those new feelings which Maan made her feel. They were alien to her and yet they made her heart soar and her body sing in happiness.

It was only Dev's voice which brought her out of her trance.

"Geet! Bro! You two are safe! You can come out!", Geet pulled away from Maan and looked at Dev. She tearfully looked at him and then running towards him, she hugged him tightly and started sobbing. Dev comforted her and soon Geet was made to sit nearby by Dev. She looked up and her eyes locked onto Maan's eyes which were staring at her with concern and something which she could not discern.

The whole day, Geet did not remember anything happening around her. Geet did not remember being made to drink some water by Dev. She did not remember being taken to Dev's cabin to relax. She did not remember being sent home after a while as Dev realised that she was in shock. And she definitely did not remember NT and Daadima comforting her and then sending her to sleep after feeding her. All she remembered was the look in Maan's eyes as he stared at her and the sensations she felt when hugging Maan tightly and being hugged by him similarly.

FIVE YEARS LATER...

"Aur yeh thi tumhaari papa aur meri pehli Romance waali jhappi!", Geet giggled and hid her face in her hands as her face turned red. Mannat giggled from the cradle.

Maan smiled smugly as he looked on from behind the door. That is not the way I remember things!

FIVE YEARS BACK...

"I don't care how you do it! But I want it to happen. Jab main tumhein message karun, the lift should jerk into stop. Phir light off honi chaahiye! Aur thode der baad lift should jerk and with high speed it should come down and stop at the ground floor. Samjhe? I don't care how you do it but I want it done! Got it?", Maan said in his phone. The man on the other side agreed to do the task as long as Maan paid the money. Maan talked few more minutes and then he cut the phone.

Maan sighed as his plan seemed to be in motion. He had called an electrician who regularly serviced the company lifts to assist in his plan. Now all Maan had to do was make sure that Geet and he were the only persons getting into the lift. He smirked as he called Adi and ordered him to display Out Of Order' sign outside the main lift few minutes before Maan arrived and to remove it the moment Maan came near the lift and make sure that no one entered the lift except Maan and Geet. Adi was confused but knowing that asking questions would make him the target of Maan's anger, agreed to do as asked.

Maan's idea behind his order to Adi was that everyone would use the other lift and the main lift will be free for his plan. Now Maan's next job was to make sure that Maan and Geet went to office the same time. How to do that? He narrowed his eyes thinking and then smirked.

An hour later, Maan narrowed his eyes from his hiding place as he observed the scene in front of him. He smiled as he noticed Geet saying her goodbyes to Daadima and NT. Maan took a deep breath. Daadima! Please mere plan ki laaj rakhna! Maan's next move in his plan was hinged on Daadima's reaction to his action. As far as Maan knew, Daadima wanted Maan and Geet to get married and Maan hoped that her dream will push her to do what he wanted her to do.

Taking another deep breath, Maan walked out of his hiding place and passed by them nonchalantly. Just as he expected, Daadima asked Maan to take Geet with him to Office. Maan smirked; daily Geet would go with Dev to Office as Maan had early morning meetings which made him go early. But today he made sure all his morning meetings were cancelled and also made sure that him having no meetings and going to Office on normal time reached Daadima's ears by announcing it to NT during breakfast.

As predicted, Daadima acted just like he wanted and today Geet was sitting in his car waiting for him to drive them to Office. As he sat by her, he noticed her hand lying nearby the gears. He smirked as another idea entered his head. He started the drive making sure that his hand touched Geet's hand. She jerked her hand in shock and looked at him with wide eyes. Maan noticed her reaction but did not look at her, acting as if he was focusing on driving. The whole drive Maan made sure that his and Geet's hand continued to touch in one way or other making Geet unsettled and Maan grin inwardly.

Soon they reached the office and entered the lift. He sent a message to the electrician as a signal to start the lift problem. All went according to Maan's plan as few minutes after the plan started Geet was very close to him. But what surprised him was the tight hug Geet gave him at the end of the plan. He had so not expected that. Till then, Maan was in control of his actions. Every move he made was calculated and precise. Even when Geet hid her face in his chest, he stiffened only for moment before comforting her, but he continued to remain in control. But Geet hugging him was totally unexpected. It was so unexpected that it made him forget all his plans and he hugged her back not even noticing the lift opening. Infact, if his brother had not interrupted them, he was sure they would have stayed just like that forever.

The next moment, Geet was hugging Dev and Maan felt jealously bubble in his heart. He had to console himself saying that it was him who would marry Geet one day. His heart swelled at the thought of his marriage to Geet and his whole body vibrated with love for her. The intensity of his feelings must have shown in his eyes as Geet seemed startled by what she saw in his eyes. Maan felt hope bubble in his heart when she did not look away and continued to stare at him. The day passed with him working non stop. He attended meetings, worked on some projects, and visited a site but whenever his mind was free from work all he remembered was Geet in his arms and Geet staring at him.

PRECAP:

Glass on the floor! Hey Babaji! What to do?

No problem! Maan to the rescue!

Or is this just another plan?

Thanks for reading, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey babaji
yeh bhi plan tha
waah nalayaki karna toh koi inn se seekhe
hadh hai maan
parr pyaar mein baawre insaan se aur ke umeed ki jaa sakti hai
so far his plans have been going bang on
but werent there any that didnt deliver
parr phir maan ke paas back up plan bhi hoga naa
after all MSK jo hain
back plan toh rakhe hi honge
and this is very important to him
after all its about geet
and how to get her to be his wife
all these planning jkust to marry her
wow man he doesnt have it easy
and why would he
he himself made it difficult for himself
what with the fights and all that he cannot confess straight away
warna pagal khane mein naa bharti karwa de geet isse
he would be asking for that nonetheless
after doign what he did
but thats not the point
point is he got married to geet and its not like he forced her
which is one thing to be happy about naa
so he hid to make sure dadi will ask him to take geet to office
loved this dialogue Please mere plan ki laaj rakhna
he is so funny naa
and his plan was successful
geet was thinking all that accidental touches were just coincidence
wrong dear all part of the plan
kya yaar he has it all planned out
well she was feeling kuch kuch for him
thats what he wanted
it was just the hug he didnt see coming
or that geet would see love maybe in his eyes
but she wasnt sure what it was
jhappi toh planned naa thi
thats one good thing
awww their version of what really happened is cute
all is part opf plan for maan but geet thinks it just happened
not if maan is concerned
mannat my dear your father is very devious
and naughty too
dev se inka jalna kab band hoga
hello dev is happily married to his wife NT
so chill yaar
well its not that right
its the fact he has to do so much for her to notice him in different way while dev didnt have to do much
thats what bothers him
koi nahin maan puttar shaadi ke baad kuch karne ki zaroorat naa se
so chill now
ahhh plan going on full blast
awww geet was lost in maan
isnt that sweet
just what maan wanted
its a start anyway and things working out for maan
well now they are
he actually asked them to close the lift
and then to make sure that only the two of them would be in the lift he asked adi to put lift out of order sign
wow he sure is desperate aint he
but then why does it not surprise me
maan kya tha woh sab yaar
itni planning aur woh bhi itni precision planning
not that one exected anything less from this huy
now its good thing geet found out about it
it was all his doing and he will have to pay for it
and he will in the ext series
but the question remains how will she do that
but guess thats for next series
he sure was bitten by the love bug naa
no wonder he made all these plans
who would have thought he would do that
no wonder they didnt suspect him at all
well why would they naa
never think he will go this far just to get her with him
but then they didnt know the lover boy in him did they
oh well its best they dont know i think
but geet does now hmmm
lets see what more happen
whats with glass i wonder
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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