MY husband does not love me ---- updated part 3 , Page no 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI all I am fariya you all know me as writer of MPKD
well this is MY new Id made by Pooja


well Me here with my new story ya i know old one is not complete yet n giving a slow update I write an other one
kiya karo yeh story mera brain mein aya aur mujko jena nahi de raha😭
socha ab isko write kar hi lo

This story base on real life story of my relative but with maaneet magic
story is about a girl n her married life
is mein meri Imagination bhi hai but real plot is base on my close one story

PROLOGUE


a men aged 45 working on his lappy when some one open door with bang and enter in cabin

Dad i don't want to live with him he is not love me any more

men look at her sighed close his lappy move toward her n made her sit on couch
give her water so she will compose herslef

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Posted: 10 years ago
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to all thanks for liking my new story mujko bhut nervousness thi 😊 but thanks to liking the story is about geet as well as maan but most of time is mein geet par zayada concntation hoga coz husbend toh uska hai 😉 yeh uski thinking hai apna husband ko lekar
In this story present n past dono hai kuch maaneet ki yadein hai unki zindagi ki

i want to give present character now so all confusion will clear who is men n girl so here it is 😆😆



Characters of Present

MAAN Singh Khurna : Age 45 a self made men his hard work made him today's No 1 business men love his family n his wife can not stand his daughter n wife tear burn whole world if some one try to do any thing against them



GEET Maan Khurna : Age 43 FULLY DEVOTED WIFE LOVE HER HUBBY TRULY


Pari khuran/ singhaniya : Age 20 daughter of maaneet sweet like her mother angry bird like her father married to Rahul singhaniya

Rahul Singhaniya : Age 23 a business men very loving n caring for him maan his mentor for evry thing phir chaye woh wife ko pyar aur izzat dena hi q hoo he just want to be like maan respect him n geet too more then his own parents ( sorry pooja i love pathsahla k rahul pari toh mein nai unko yeh liya hope toh chapal nahi mare gi 😆)


Armaan singh KHRANA : Age 23 son of maaneet just like Maan friend of rahul

Ridhima Arman khurana : 20 wife of Armaan intern in sanjevini love Arman close to geet she is orphan



abhi k liya itna character enogh hai sorry mujko pic post karna nahiaya 😭 so think which actor u want in that place expect maaneet 😉 😆



Edited by nihdear12 - 10 years ago
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HI to All of you thank you so much liking my new story i cross 50 omg big hug to all

this story is a girl her experince of marriage life how she manage her life n think her hubby did not love her well will her thinking is right why she think like that it big question

NOte : this story is about married life n there is lot of maaneet after marriage ff if any one think my story is ressemble to any of stories tell me i will change it


TH E BIG NOTE EVERY ONE KNOW ABOUT MY ENGLISH SO BEAR IT 😉


PART 1


maan made pari sat n give water he was so much angry to saw his pari crying before he said or asked any thing his phone ring he saw the caller want to blast on him

mAAN want to say hello but

other side men who was freak out hell sir dad uncle pari hai waha she is not taking her phone is she with you ??

maan :; rahul relax she is with me n came here fast mean fast he order sternly

while rahul take long breath of relaf

maan cut his call cares pari head

pari : i dont want to saty with him he is bad very bad dad he shout at me dad
she complain n sobing hard

maan dont know what to say he is men of rules dont judge book by cover knowing rahul how much he love pari then what the matter he thought

door once again bang n rahul hardly enter

RAHUL : are u ok pari why you came here damit with out infroming n y dont u pick my call i am so worried you know we will talk about it how can you be so care less pari

he shout in frustation n forget maan is also there

will you slow your tone maan said 😳

now RHUl realise maan is also there n he down his lashes n regard what he did

MAAN ; we will talk at home now pari go rest room n wash ur face we are going to kM n dont said anyone about ur fight understood 😳 you both


both node their head

pari went to rest room while RHUL was made puppy face infront of maan like galti hogye 😆😆

maan sighed

Pari in rest room washed her face

pari st : mein wapis nahi jao gi how dare he shout at me i will nevr go with him

she came out maan order lunch they had with out utering words

n went to KM

in car rahul want to talk with pari par madam avoide him

maan eyeing them shock his head whisper himself kids

they reached km pari came out n run without seeing back

maan rahul both look each other

n then brust in laghter 😆


dad ap apni biwi ko kase handle kartey ho yeh muje pagal kar de gi ek din said Rahul 😆

maan : rahul 😡 well my wife is soo sweet she love me n love me alot 😳😳😳

n pat his head from back n dont talk about my pari like this 😡

ouchh ok but

lucky you dad maa jaise koi wife nahi she is great 👍🏼 said Rahul

yaap maan agree

both came out n move toword mansion n rahul thinking how to monofy his wife or will he sleep in garden as punishmet


to be continue


i know small part hai par kiya karo type nahi hora hai 😭😭😭 is say zayda socha hulley hulley small say big update abhi k liya small part chala lo 😃


lub you all 🤗


NOTE FOR PM ADD Mahimaan n Pooja hug u both 🤗



Edited by nihdear12 - 10 years ago
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PART 1 ; Pg 1

PART 2 : Pg 20

PART 3 : Pg 24
Edited by maankijann - 10 years ago
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Congratz 4 d new story 🥳
intrsng prolouge
waitng 4 d update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: christipie

Congratz 4 d new story 🥳
intrsng prolouge
waitng 4 d update 😃


how u know about this mein nai toh pm bhi nahi kiya abhi 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nahi toh late nahi hai pata nahi yeh pie ko kase link mila sachi mein nai kisis ko pm send nahi kya tha😕
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a different concept😊😊
update soon😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariya20


nahi toh late nahi hai pata nahi yeh pie ko kase link mila sachi mein nai kisis ko pm send nahi kya tha😕


its ok...
par meri place gai na first page se😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirror1521


its ok...
par meri place gai na first page se😭

edit kar ley nihdear ki id say 😉

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