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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-

Beautiful update

Maan fully fida on sherni😉

yup..i love sherni geet
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Posted: 10 years ago

chapter 6

OUT SIDE THE NIGHT CLUB


"Geet yaar where are you...we are waiting for you outside the club" said Sonia (friend of Geet) ...Geet's friends are waiting for Geet out the club to celebrate sonia's birthday..."i will be their in 5 min just wait for me "said geet hurriedly getting into driving seat and drive away...

Her driver sham run after the car and shout for geet to stop the car...but geet have long gone... sham hurriedly call maan ...maan pic the call n first itself..."hello" said maa.n..."sir,mam mujhe phir road per choodgyee" said driver in literally crying voice ...he tell maan how geet have send him to bring water bottle and when he was in shop ... he saw her drived away...

"uuf yeh ladke bhi na "thought maan..." koye baat nhi bodyguard hai uske pechee... tum ghar jao per handa's ko phone matkerna main sab dekh logaa"said maan..." ji sir" said driver...maan call geet's one of the bodyguard...he told maan that they are following geet...maan told him to call when geet reach the place...

geet reached the club and get down the car... geet is feeling very happy thinking at least tonight she will have the freedom to enjoy without anyone watching her... unknown to geet bodyguards appointed by maan and Mr.Handa were follow her...

maan's bodyguard have already called him and told him about the place but unlike maan's bodyguard Handa's bodyguards don't make any call ... darji have given them strict instructions to ca ll them only when their is something important ... he want them to give geet the same freedom that are enjoyed by his grandsons...

IN KHURANA MANSION'S STUDY ROOM


Maan was busy in working on the important file when he got the call from bodyguards about geet being in night club...he at once leave his study and enter his bedroom...he fresh up and get ready to go to club...


Maan get into the car and call adi..."hello sir " said adi hoping maan will not give him anywork ..."adi come to khurana mansion and get the file from study room...i want you to complete it "said maan and cut the call without even listening to adi..."yeh maan sir bhi na pehle file ghar lejate hai fir mujsee chaker lagwatee hai" said adi shaking head...

IN CLUB


imagine geet with her friends

geet is sitting with her best friend Meera...other have gone to dance floor...they are dancing like mad...it was hard to see in dim lights of night club..."geet dear plz avoid strong drinks" said Meera..."meera yaar you always make me feel like i am kid" said geet rolling her eyes..."that because you behave like kid when you get drunk "said meera giving i know you look ...

"ok baba you select my drink... only because of you i avoid night club "said geet ..."promise" ask meera with big smile..."NO...because i always listen to you "said geet..."really" said meera challenging look..."yup "said geet ..."then do enlight me...how many time you listen to me when i told you to tell your family about maan veerji" ask meera ...before geet can answer her...sonia's boyfriend rahul got them soft drinks...
Before geet can pick it up meera stop her..."you promise you will let me choose your drink "said meera ..."hmm "said geet taking her hand back and told rahul to go and enjoy they will get their drinks...rahul go from their and told the bartender to attend the ladies ... bartender come and ask their orders...

"give me menu card "said meera... bartender give them ... meera go through the list of drinks... "2 long island iced tea" said meera thinking it must be some ice tea ... "mam you sure you want this" ask bartender..."yes we are very sure now go and get us drinks" said meera...


Bartender go t get their drinks..."meera have you drink this before...i think it is something strong thats why bartender was asking to confirm"said geet..."uff geet...you think i am stupid?"ask meera..."i have asked for long island iced tea"said meera giving stress on words iced tea ..."we will have just one iced tea and then we will go home" said meera ..."but i was to dance" said geet with pout...


"you want to dance with these mad peoples" ask meera pointing at the mad crowd on dance floor...geet nod her and said "yes"..."you want to dance na?...then dance as much as you want when we go home...i will set load music and dim lights for you" said meera..."uff... you are so boring"said geet ... bartender come their and give them their drinks...

Both took their drinks... before taking sip geet ask "meera are you sure?"..."see silly it look like cold tea and even taste harmless"said meera taking sip..."ok"said geet and both start taking on some random topic while sipping long island iced tea without knowing that this drink is over 90% liquor and does not taste like it. There has to be some sort of magic involved for a drink to have that much liquor but taste as harmless as it does. Because of that this sneaky devil can get you too drunk, too fast.


here maan enters night club after giving instructions to bodyguards ... Maan start searching geet... it took him sometime to find her as the night club is fully filled with peoples ... when maan see geet with meera he took sigh of relief as he know geet care for meera a lot ... meera is her best friend and very nice and Innocent...

It is hard to believe that they are best friends... both are like opposite poles...may be that is reason both are such close friends ... they balance each other well... Maan went to them and get angry when he see geet in short dress and get shocked when he see both drinking such hard drink...


At once maan pull the drinks from their hand... geet see maan " maaannn"said geet with silly smile and drunken voice ..."what the hell are you drinking"ask maan giving murdering looks... "meeraa...cooold tea"said geet with baby voice shaking head and pointing at meera like telling she give me..."meera...what is this"ask maan ...

"veerj...i cooold tea"said meera pouting and point her finger at glass in maan's hand...uff ...they are too drunk to say anything thought maan ... geet wanted to get up but fell when she try to stand ..."maaannn"said geet extending her arm like want him to pick her up... maan sit with her and at once call dev to take meera with him... maan know his brother love meera ...

Maan tell him about meera state without mentioning geet who is now sitting in his lap and playing with shirt buttons... Maan giving warning to dev to behave properly and cut the call ... he call his bodyguards to take care of meera ... he know meera will give silent treatment when she is drunk... he tell them to follow dev and make sure he took meera to her home only...

Maan pick geet up and go toward the exit door...he know handa's bodyguards have seen him with geet before also and they will not tell anyone if they see geet is sober... maan make geet stand before coming out and make her walk to his car... he have already told his bodyguards to leave his car in front of the gate ... as most of the time geet avoid drinks it is hard for maan to make them believe that geet is sober...


Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yahooo me first
geet is in club yeh geet kuch zayada spiol brat nahi matlab ase driver ko akeley road par chod diya
hmm maan ki nazar hemesha geet par wow
meera nai galt drink order kiya 😲
both are talli thank god maan came
he call dev n make sure that he take meera only her home maan ji i am fida over your gentle men
ab maan geet ko kaha le kar jai gaa 😆😆
tali geet n maan
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part dear geet left driver in mid way nd maan got d info nd bechara adi got d wrk again 😆
Meera cares abt geet bt dis time she selectd wrng drink 😲
bth r talli thank god maan is on time der 😃
maan tld dev 2 take care of meera nd he gong 2 take geet
nw wt geet is gong 2 do waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part...Geet in night club leaving her driver on road...maan too reached night club after being informed by his bgs...both geet and meera drunk...maan told dev to take care of meera and now helping tali geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
name of drink confuse meera n she order hard drink for both

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Posted: 10 years ago
talli geet ..
ab kya problem create karegi
i want to know why geet is hiding abt maan from her family ..



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Posted: 10 years ago
nic ff...
jst read 1st 3 nchap..
its interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

yahooo me first

geet is in club yeh geet kuch zayada spiol brat nahi matlab ase driver ko akeley road par chod diya
hmm maan ki nazar hemesha geet par wow
meera nai galt drink order kiya 😲
both are talli thank god maan came
he call dev n make sure that he take meera only her home maan ji i am fida over your gentle men
ab maan geet ko kaha le kar jai gaa 😆😆
tali geet n maan

congratz ...just wait n watch😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: christipie

Nice part dear geet left driver in mid way nd maan got d info nd bechara adi got d wrk again 😆
Meera cares abt geet bt dis time she selectd wrng drink 😲
bth r talli thank god maan is on time der 😃
maan tld dev 2 take care of meera nd he gong 2 take geet
nw wt geet is gong 2 do waitng 4 d nxt part

tkx dear ...

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