A WORD CALLED 'LOVE'!! - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Interesting
And I have a feeling that this yash kapoor is the villain
Negative vibes
Anyway plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: caller123

OH this is so beautiful Sporthy.. I really love this story. no I have fallen in love with this story..If you ever discontinued this I will never talk to you.. This has become one of my favourite. I'm going to book mark it. I missed the updates coz of my busy work... but from now on I will read continue sly.


hay kate! good to see you!
n thanks for reading...
now this is the first time im trying to write some thing with a complicated plot
lets see if i'can continue with the same phase...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Interesting

And I have a feeling that this yash kapoor is the villain
Negative vibes
Anyway plz cont soon


In the movie??😕
but i've made him Hero of her movie right!😉

hmmm lets see how that character shapes up into!😃

thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74





PART # 4




Driving through the highway with old melodies playing on the stereo... he couldn't point out what happened yesterday. .that suddenly the trip which he planned with his maa coincides with Suraj Khurana's plans. ..

Co incidence yeah that's what happened he walked into the mansion to ask of leave as he just finished his exams n as planned earlier he wanted to visit golden temple ...but as he walked in he got to know that even Mr. Suraj was also planning to visit Amritsar!

So that's it ...Both the families were on their way to the sacred place. ..

They truly had a big heart or else who will allow their drivers family to travel with them in the same car...

Elders were as usual busy in their own talks ... But in all these all he got to know was his daughter was struck with some last minute work... n would be joining them directly in Amritsar!!

on the way we crossed a village which was quite in a festive mood on enquiring they said it was some local festival which was celebration of the harvest!

It was non till we reached the guest house... n on their persuasion they stayed in the guest house as it was too big n had couple of extra rooms... tired from the journey elders fell asleep as soon as they hit the bed.. But maan wasn't able to get some rest...

He was still lost in the festival n the rituals that were being performed. ... They felt more close to his heart as if he has been to one of those festivals maybe in his childhood. ..

His chain of thoughts broke with the frantic voice of Mr. Suraj!

But beta it's already late how will u stay alone... let me arrange for something. .. u be in the car... I'll ring you back in a while. ..


Sir, what's wrong? Any problem... U seem to be worried about something!

Maan!

Yes mam...

Maan wo my daughter she's struck near that village ... n she's all alone. ... I'm so scared. .. Maan do something. ...

She was so shattered n looked so helpless at the moment!

You don't worry about it. .. Maan start now n bring their daughter here safely. .. poor girl must have been so scared all alone...

Ji maa... sir, mam u please stop worrying I'll bring her back to you safely. ...

Thank you so much maan ... Here r the car keys... Come soon beta!

I will sir!

Maan take this with you in case u get late. ... u both can have something!


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Babaji it's getting so dark here... n the car it's struck so badly that I can't even take it back!

Wonder what this whole road block is about!

Hello! Papa. ..

Hmmm I'm alone. .. no I didn't have anything. ..

Ha maa... I'm fine maa... ok I'm inside the car only... don't cry maa... I'm safe. ..

Maa wo... I'm hungry! There's nothing to eat here u know! She said pouting n a thin layers of tears forming in her eyes..which were blurring her vision

Whom did u send??

Hello... hello. .. papa I can't hear u!

Hello! My battery is drained out papa... I think it's better if I end the call...

At least papa is sending someone... n it will take only one hour or so from Amritsar to reach here... But Babaji it's getting so dark in here... rubbing her eyes with the back of her palm waiting for the help her papa was send her way... this was our Geet hard n strong for the world but innocent nave at heart!

Slowly the people struck in the traffic started getting out of their vehicles for temporary relief n some to find any alternative ways to get out of the situation...

it was clear that it would almost take the whole night for them to clear the whole traffic ... in all this there was a poor soul who was struck in the car waiting for her aid to come n rescue her from this darkness which was slowly consuming around her eyes... With fear gripping her soul...

Like we always hear in our Granny's stories he was her destiny or the prince charming who was coming in the white car driving through the darkness to rescue his soul mate but then Babaji has his own ways to make his favorite people meet!

To Be Continued...

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Awesome
Yaar I really want to know what r u hiding behind the curtains, what past is??? but will wait kyunki intezaar ka phaal meeta hota hai and I want sweetest
wah family on family holiday with Maan and his Maa
do premi milte milte bichd gaye kya yaar maaneet ki meeting hi nahi kar wayi tumne not fair
but ab dono jaldi milne wale hai god I so excited for their first face to face meeting
want to know what will happen next
jaldi update dena
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

Awesome

Yaar I really want to know what r u hiding behind the curtains, what past is??? but will wait kyunki intezaar ka phaal meeta hota hai and I want sweetest
wah family on family holiday with Maan and his Maa
do premi milte milte bichd gaye kya yaar maaneet ki meeting hi nahi kar wayi tumne not fair
but ab dono jaldi milne wale hai god I so excited for their first face to face meeting
want to know what will happen next
jaldi update dena


thanks for reading!

will up date again in the night!
u can catch up in the morning!!😳

Are ha they r not lovers!!😆
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


thanks for reading!

will up date again in the night!
u can catch up in the morning!!😳

Are ha they r not lovers!!😆


I will wait till late night to read the update
aur ha abhi lovers nahi hai but jaldi hone wale hai hai na toh mere dreams par paani mat phero
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: -Adwika-


I will wait till late night to read the update
aur ha abhi lovers nahi hai but jaldi hone wale hai hai na toh mere dreams par paani mat phero


tho pir wait will up date in an hour!
n yes THEY ARE STRANGERS!!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


tho pir wait will up date in an hour!
n yes THEY ARE STRANGERS!!😛


bas itna sa wait toh thik agar tumne jaldi update diya na toh main tumhe cadbury silk dungi
nd I know they are stranger but I m saying they r would be lovers😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: -Adwika-


bas itna sa wait toh thik agar tumne jaldi update diya na toh main tumhe cadbury silk dungi
nd I know they are stranger but I m saying they r would be lovers😉


address bhej doon courier kardogi???😆
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago

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