A WORD CALLED 'LOVE'!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: christipie

congratz 4 d new story nd sry 4 late comment

maaneet talkd wit each other due 2 wrong num😃
maan lost meera nd dat time geet witout knwng anything tld soothing wrds👍🏼
waitng 4 d nxt part nd plz dont stop writng plz


Stopping writing n all there's a lot of time for that!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vani1984

Wonderful and hear touching concept Continue soon

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Will try to update soon. ..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
SOUNDS INTERESTING
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY

SOUNDS INTERESTING

Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36






PART#1


Dad please u can't do this to me plz... dad I love him!!

She confessed with tears flowing through her eyes. . Crying at her helplessness. ..

Stop it ! Now don't create a scene here... tomorrow u r getting married n that's final!

Let her cry she has chosen it as her fate... no one will help her... I repeat I don't want anyone to be seen near her room till tomorrow now leave...

Dad I know what you've planned for him... if u think locking me in the room will stop me reaching him then u r wrong dad!

Rain was poring heavily. .. as if it was crying with her on her grief. ..

Walking into the balcony she was lost in the memories of her past her childhood n then her love. ..

He would have been dead by now. .. she smiled bitterly at her fate ...

Wait for me love I'll not break my promise. .. I'll always be with you ...

She whispered faintly with a small smile closing her eyes in peace. ..With flowing rain even her blood was drained from her body. ..

Her grip loosen on the knife she was holding onto..Which fell on the ground making no sound...

CUT!!

Brilliant take Geet!

Go get changed we'll talk after that. ..

Stop that showers for now... n get ready with the next take guys...

Oh! Geet ur back, come sit so I heard u haven't signed any other projects yet... any special reason. .

No sir, nothing like that.. it's just I wanted to have a break from work for a month at least. .. but still I've got few endorsement n all so...

Actually geet there's this new director who's got a wonderful script... If u r free give it a try ... n I've personally seen his work he's definitely got a great future in the industry. ..

Ok Sir if u really feel so then I would definitely meet him ...
Sorry what did u say his name ...

Adi! Aditya kashap

Hmm... ok sir! I'll take ur leave now! Meet u at the promotion event of our film!


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After having a nice shower she settled in the garden with a book in her hands n lost in thoughts. ..

Wow! So finally someone managed to steal your heart!

Shanthi listen I've a good news for u ... our daughter found someone. ..

Huh!

Papa! Wait. ..

No let me tell ur mama she'll be too much happy it's time to celebrate beta...

But papa...

Shanthi where are u?

Papa y r u shouting?

Excitement Geet! It's called excitement!

He said running around the mansion with geet chasing him to stop...

What happened y r u both running around the house?

Maa wo...

See ur daughter is already feeling so shy in front of us... it's ok Geet tell us his name we'll fix everything!

Papa...

Is he ur co star from ur latest film? He looks like a villain to me ... sorry sorry. .. he's ur hero right!

That's it I broke into laughter god papa...U n ur imagination seriously!

What's wrong with u y r u behind my daughter. .. go ur office work is calling u...Come beta we have a nice ladies chat!

Maa, papa stop it! There's no one... seriously... n y did u think if there's someone I'll hide it from you?

Oh! So there's no one. .. but seeing you all lost in the garden I thought you found someone. ..

Oh! That I was thinking about what should we do in my short vacation. ..

Okay maa can I have nice desi food for dinner please. .. I'm really bored of papa lovely Italian cuisine. ..

Geet!

Hope life was always like this simple happy n carefree but who knows that there favourite actress fears night. .. she's still haunted by weird dreams sometimes its dark narrow streets. .. n sometimes it's someone hitting a child!



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Uncle please help me get this job u even said they pay well right... n I'm even having my license. ..

But Maan they are asking experience. ...

Please uncle it's only u who can convince them. .. u know how it is at home right ... maa needs a good doctor ... It will cost so much in big hospitals. ...

Ok beta I'll try but I cant promise anything. .. n how's your studies going on?

Fine uncle exams are just a month away. .. don't know y maa insists on my higher studies ... I can easily find a job on my graduation. ..

Beta studies are also important! N who knows it better than your maa... n how are meera's parents?

They are fine uncle still recovering but they are better now...

Maan don't feel low... Babaji must have planned something for you u just have to wait!

Ok uncle I'll take ur leave now. .. do let me know if there's any progress...

Walking though crowded market line smiling n greeting everyone he walked towards the place where he used to meet meera secretly!

Meera was a strong person both inside out .. n he loved her more as his bestie... with whom he would share his secrets, play pranks, argue over all silly issues...

N of course he missed her a little too much... they have grown up almost together ...

A lone tear escaped his eyes he quickly wiped it off n pulled out his cell trying to reach someone. ..

It was already dark n moon shining brightly over the sky as if it was also waiting for the one on other side to pick the call...

She woke up once again Panting from her dream. ..

Hello! she whispered breathlessly still grasping her surroundings making sure se was safe. ..

Ummm.. hi!

Do you remember me. .. u submitted my assignment.?

What assignment?

Few months back. . I've called u by mistake ... n u happened to submit my assignment!

Hmmm yes! Now do u want me to submit another assignment?

She asked innocently. .

He almost smiled at that..

No actually I've got my exams in a month's time n my id card n stuff are still with you so ...

Oh that yes sorry I forgot. ..

Hmmm... so how can I collect them...

I'll give them to raghu kaka he lives near that library ... u can collect it from there I guess. ..

That would be great! Thanks!

Ummm Wo...Y were u crying the other day? U know papa says men should not show there weakness to others. ..N u cried talking to me... she said frowning. ..

Its only u who know about it right ! So it will be our secret he whispered slowly. ..

She broke into laughter. ..

Y are you whispering? We are on call... she said controlling her laughter. ..

What I thought girls share their secrets like this only...

What!

N she continued laughing. ..

Ok... u didn't tell me the reason. .. composing herself

Some other time. .. Thanks for the help anyway Good Night!

Hmmm...good night!





To Be Continued. ...
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thats awesome !! I was so worried...who was cutting their hand...meera...or geet...or some past !! so, maan and geet started talking again...and they seems to have some past connection...bahut past...haina...! waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

thats awesome !! I was so worried...who was cutting their hand...meera...or geet...or some past !! so, maan and geet started talking again...and they seems to have some past connection...bahut past...haina...! waiting...



N that was a scene from her shoot😆
N meera is no more. ..
N here u r right they do have connection bahut past😉
But uske liye bahut time bhi h!
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Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u know the shooting part I thought that as a past and was worried thinking that Geet loved someone from childhood ( hoping that to be Maan ) but her father denied and she cut her wrist but then the cut word gave relief to me, nd then I understood that it was all shooting
u know mujhe laga tha ki Maan aur Geet are teenager but aisa nahi hai
aur Maan ko job chahiye, but I m not going to predict anything kyunki tumhari stories easily predictable nahi hoti hai
finally bohot time ke baad hi sahi Maaneet ne phir se baat ki, but itne dino tak usne number sambhal kar rakha, aww, and I think Maan loved Meera just a bestie not more than that
want to know the reason behind Geets nightmare,
waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Adwika-

u know the shooting part I thought that as a past and was worried thinking that Geet loved someone from childhood ( hoping that to be Maan ) but her father denied and she cut her wrist but then the cut word gave relief to me, nd then I understood that it was all shooting

u know mujhe laga tha ki Maan aur Geet are teenager but aisa nahi hai
aur Maan ko job chahiye, but I m not going to predict anything kyunki tumhari stories easily predictable nahi hoti hai
finally bohot time ke baad hi sahi Maaneet ne phir se baat ki, but itne dino tak usne number sambhal kar rakha, aww, and I think Maan loved Meera just a bestie not more than that
want to know the reason behind Geets nightmare,
waiting for more


On the contrary mare stories predictable hote h...
U know I have one of my reader who reads almost all my works. .. she even before I think of next update comes with a comment which gives away the next part!

N next part will update by afternoon n Dadi's wish by night😃

Thanks for reading!

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