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cute story !! maan left geet on their wedding day...but, realised the mistake and trying to amend !! it does take time to mend the broken heart...still, geet is such sweet heart...giving him another chance !! so, adi is making him to do all the work...and see if he sticks...!! nice to see maan jealous...aur thoda tadpana usse...!! waiting...

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PART 5

Next few days maan saw..geet and adi busy with rishab. Geet was very comfortable with rishab..as he was her only frnd after maan. She dint make nay frnds after he left..but rishab was very humorous and funny. He was very friendly and sweet too..he sometimes did reminded her of maan but later on It developed into a special bond.

For maan this was worse than the challenges he was facing. Adi had given him pile of works..right from a to z..everything in house. He dint get time to be with geet. Whereas rishab and adi had good relations. Rishab often came at their place..with geet..yes with geet in evening . ANd this hit him real hard. He was getting frustrated...everyone right from adi to pinky to geet even rohan used to admire rishab. His blood used to boil seeing geet with rishab.

His and geet's relations wer some what better. He dint speak a lot these days as..she was working hard for rishab's next assignment. So maan dint wanted to bother her with his talks. He was glad that she was so passionate about her work. So he silently took..all this shit. His and adi s relations grew bitter... As adi dint leave a chance to taunt maan and make him feel miserable.

It was next week..Tuesday night..when maan was retiring to his room..and he saw geet's room light on. He decided on check on her..so he marched there. He knocked her door.

Yes come in..its open

Maan came inside... and saw all her cloths scattered...in her room. She was searching something in her cupboard. She was busy in that.

Geet what r u.,doing this late

Geet pepped out side and spoke

Oh..woh maan I want an important design..i had made it years ago.. that will go well with the collection..so m searching that..but I don't knw where I kept making a baby face.

Maan shook his head and sat on the bed...and shifted the clothes a bit.

Do u need my help?? He asked her...

Let me try..fisrt..and again pepped outside.. warna..its ur lookout she said with a smile.

He too smiled and shifted his legs up...adjusting properly on her small bed. He saw something under the..pile of cloths. He removed it..it was a book there YEAR BOOK.

He smiled widely...as if he had found some treasure.

Mishty.he exclaimed in excitement look what I've found..

Geet looked at maan and shrieked in happiness

Wow..maan where did u find this..mujhe laga I lost it...

She came and sat beside him fodling her legs.

Well...mujhe mil gaya na..thank god finaklly u decided to clean ur cupboard.. warna may be hume next birth mai hi milte he teased

She frowned and snatched the book from him..

Phele mai ..dekhungi..

No ways..i got the book mishty... he tried to to take the book..

Maan..ouchh... she hid the book behind her back.. Maan tried ti reach her and in the process ...he landed on her.

She was laying in the bed while he on her. Her whole body was pressed by his. None of them realized his..they were busy . She was still pushing the book beneath her ..when maan pressed himself more to her..inorder to guide his hands to the book. Dats when..he realized..their position..when he felt her heartbeats going high so was his. She had gozzebums feeling him soo..close to her. She gazed his eyes...and found her self lost again. His hands softly rested on her waist and she held the book loose. Both of them...lost in their own world. Maan brushed the strands of her face...slightly touching her cheek. She close her eyes involuntary. He moved closer and fanned her skin..slowly. She shivered..with his assault and left the book..and clutched his arm. She felt her heart would just burst out of her chest..as it was beating fast. Maan saw her face...so..serene and beautiful. There was nothing artificial about her. He smirked at her condition..slowly took the from beneath her..and shouted

Got u ... and got up from her..laughing

She dint understand and opened to see him..laughing like a lunatic...

She glared him..sat on the bed and straightened herself..

U r cheater,,,I don't want to talk to u..just go.. She said getting irritated.

he smiled at her..

Fine..mishty we both will.see together okhay.. And sat next to her..

She looked him from the corners of her eyes still..pretending to me mad.

He held his ears and pleaded sorry through expressions.. She smiled ..and nodded.

Both sat down excitedly..and opened the book. They sat their...cherishing their memories of their past..well their beautiful past. They teased one another..laughed at each other, made of fun of others..gossiped about others. They never needed anyone else..in their life.Just them...only them.

NEXT MORNING

As sunglight...spread in the room. Maan lazily opened his eyes. He tried to remove his hand ..but coukdnt. He tried again..then gave up and slept again..holding something soft. Geet felt the hold on her tightening. She opened her eyes..and saw him. His cheek.. She was laying completely on him and was suing his shoulder and chest as pillow. Maan had his one hand around her waist and other around her stomach. both were gulled to each other...legs criss cross. Both slept after discussing their..school college and everything.. Geet widen her eeys..and immediately tried to get up. But couldn't due ti maan's hold she tried harder this time...landing on bed completely and maan on top of her. This woke him up..and he opened his eyes. As he opened his eyes ..he saw her. Her beautiful..face this was the best morning her thought. He smiled sweetly at her..she was going all..pink and pink. He ran his finger from her forehead to..her cheek..and then to her cheek. She tuned her face slightly..closing her eyes. That's when he understood..it wasn't a dream. He took back his finger and got up from her.

Sorry..geet who mai..i mean mishty..yeh kaise..m sorry he confusedly blabbered turning his face. Geet got up..feeling totally flushed.

Its..okay..maan and tucked her hair behind ear.

Okay.. and he left hurriedly.

She smiled...cutely..feeling like a new bride and hid her face..in her palms.

They dint see each other whole day. Adi again taunted him..but dint ..scolded him a lot as he had to leave..for an urgent work. At night Rohan was playing with maan ..and he was sleeping. So..he thought to leave rohan with pinky. He lifted sleepy rohan..and patted him slightly adjusting his head on his shoulder..and left upstairs.

He was about to..open the door.,.when he heard pinky saying

So..what have u thought about RK's proposal..

Hmm..i don't Bhabhi..I guess I would have said yes..if..

If what...?? Pinky probed her to say further

Bhabhi..now..m..i don't knw..maan nahi hota toh maybe yes bolti but abhi nahi..

Geet don't let it down so..easly..this is a great opportunity..and u knw..Rk na..he is the best ..trust him...N maan will understand..he is ur frnd frist..best frnd

I do...trust him..but..

What r u doing here?? Adi..scowled at maan

Maan looked him totally lost...Adi stared him..raising his eyebrows..

What?

Uhh..nothing..rohan.. he said without meeting his eye..

Adi took rohan from maan and carried him inside the room. Maan slowly walked to his room..shocked.

Rk proposed geet..??and geet trusts him..? He was feeling numb right now..HE sat on the bed..as the whole conversation came back..to his mind

Bhabhi..now..m..i don't knw..maan nahi hota toh maybe yes bolti but abhi nahi..

He felt tears gathering in his eyes..he let them flow.

M I too..late?? Geet did move on..with Rk

She still..considers me as a good frnd.. Was this the reason she gave me..2^nd chance.??

No..best frnd...he mocked at the word

He rubbed his face...and cried. All his hope..to begin a new life with his mishty hand crashed down. She maybe loved Rk..and he came in between them.
It wasn't her fault..i had left her on their wedding day...all my mistake..all..my mistake.. He sat their quietly totally dead. He wished for dead instead this. Whom should he blamed. All was his doing. God is punishing him..for his misdeeds.

The next part will..be then end..mostly!Sorry for mistakes..!!

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awsemm maneet bonding oops rk proposal

she doesnt love him dear
if she did would she do this to you
he better not screw it up
thats why they say eavesdroppers never hear anything good about themselves
and this is what happened
maan ask her
please dont assume
she cares for you
this is just jealousy that got to you
please dont leave her again
she will break
or does she love rk
no way right
gosh this is confusing
aww they had such nice time
am sure she loves him only right
what will he do now
but is it marriage proposal or something else
i think something else

nice part baby maaneet r cmng close 😃 maaneet moment was awesm☺️

nice.

awesome update!!!!