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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



<font color="#ff6600" size="5">Hello my dear friends .. LOL</font>
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congrtas for new thread ...
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for the New Thread👏👏👏
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(F banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part - 10



Part - 11

They walked nd watched few more wild creatures like foxes, wolves , jackals nd hyena then snacks nd wild lizards in netted wooden boxes ,, after that they came in food zone * all d ppl wr resting nd taking their lunch their ,, Maan nd Geet took their table ,, Maan went nd brought eatables for both ,, he asked for manu but Geet refused saying she had his meal ,, she made manu sit in d chair , opened a tiffin box nd there was manu's curd n rice ,, Geet mixed them nd fed manu along with they ate their meal too ,, after lunch Geet took manu to loo nd changed his diaper , washed his hands , face nd changed his T shirt ,, he was touching fences nd nets nd then rubbed his hands with clothes so that make his dress dirty .

After a long rest nd lunch they started for next part lion nd tiger safari ,, there wr two option .. Ropeway or road ,, from ropeway ppl cn see wide area from top nd max lions nd tigers wr easily visible but from road they had to walk nd cd see only few animals which wr visible from road nd high net fencing ,, Maan wanted to go by ropeway bcoz it was more exciting nd enjoyable but Geet scared nd denied .

Maan: Geet why r u scaring , i'm with u na , come on.

Geet: no, I won't ,, that was open ropeway nd it passes over d animals area .

Maan: so what ,, see many r going , it's fun nd manu'll enjoy .

Geet: no o ,, what if he started jumping ,, it's dicey , no plzz , I cn't .

Maan was feeling bad seeing her scared like that nd worried for manu ,, she was not feeling secured with him , at last they took road view ,, after few yards walk they saw 2 lions sitting under a tree nd one was climbing on d rocky part ,, they stood there nd Maan showed manu d lions ,, he was watching them excitedly ,, when he satisfied Maan nd Geet moved ahead there wr tigers nd leopards , they wr resting on rocky area and quiet visible ,, Geet described manu d diff between them ,, they stood there to watch them nd their few activities ,, then they came to a pic nd drop point ,,they took a elec open cart nd came back to main gate ,, manu was in Maan's arms , all wr tired .

Geet: manu sunny r u happy now ?

Manu nodded his head , he was tired nd his eyes wr drowsy ,, Geet ruffled his curly hair lovingly .

Geet: feeling sleepy ?

He nodded again nd rested his head on Maan's shoulder ,, Maan made him sleep patting his back .

Maan: OK , sleep baby , he pecked his forehead .

They came in parking nd settled in d car ,, Geet settled manu in his seat nd buckled his belt nd tilted d seat back so that he cd sleep easily ,, took d driving seat ,checked d time nd started their back journey .

Geet : u want to shop for d family .

Maan: hummm ,, something for all .

Geet: OK , there is a good mrkt near ur hotel , u cn visit that .

Maan: r u not coming with me ? I don't have any idea , plzz help me .

Geet: but how cn I ? U better know about ur family .

Maan: plzz , I cn't shop alone , OK then drop d idea for shopping , let's go home.

Geet felt bad thinking that he went back empty handed from here so decided to give him company ,, she too needed few things for manu nd home ,, she parked d car in parking of a big shopping mall from where they cd shop all d things .

Geet: come , we cn find everything here .

Maan passed a smile to her nd mouthed thanks ,, he came out nd took sleeping manu in his arms nd then they went in d mall ,, first he choose shirts n T shirts for his dad nd him then perfumes for DM nd his mom ,, he was taking advices from Geet while selecting things ,, in ladies section Geet was watching things nd like a wrist watch very much she saw that nd kept back ,, she had 2-3 so avoid to waste money ,, then took a dress for manu ,, few items for home ,, she picks manu's red racer car ,, their trolley was full now ,, Geet came on counter for billing.

Maan: Geet , take my card for payment .

He took out his wallet with one hand nd forwarded to Geet , but Geet smiled nd refused .

Geet: it's OK mr Khurana ,, I have Sodexo passes , cash nd if I need i'll take .

Maan: Geet , why passes , take my card .

Geet: i'll if needed. Plzz .(Maan looked at her helplessly )

She paid d bill with d passes ,, she collected d bags in both hands nd they came out after 2 hrs ,, she too was feeling tired ,, Maan was holding sleeping manu in his arms from last 2 hrs ,, Geet placed d bags in d car's back seat ,, Maan settled manu in his seat ,, they started back home ,, manu wake up on d way but sitting lazily looking out from window ,, he was asking about things ,, Maan nd Geet wr replying ,, after 2hrs long travel they wr in d house ,, Geet parked d car nd huffed tiredly ,, she nd Maan took out all d bags out , locked d car ,picked g bags in both hands ,, she opened d door of her house ,, placed d bags on dining table , brought water for all nd handed Maan nd made manu to drink then had her ,, she slumped on sofa tired .

Maan: tired ?

Geet : very.

Manu remembered his car which he wanted to purchased form mrkt and asked.

Manu: mommy my cal ,, u folgot my car ,, he made face nd was going to cry .

Maan; baby mommy bought ur car nd that was in d bag .

Manu run towards d bag nd starting searching for his car nd got d pack ,, he was super happy now ,, he came nd climbed on sofa ,sat in Geet's lap nd kissed her both cheeks ,, Maan gave a broad smile seeing them .

Manu: thank u mommy , luv u .

Geet: u happy now .

Manu: this much ,, he spread his arms wide .

Geet saw d time , above seven .

Geet: mr Khurana , aap fresh ho jaeye mai coffee banati hu .

Maan: Geet , I'll leave now after taking my bag .

Geet: there is sufficient time to go ,, i'll call a cab for u nd that'll drop u hotel ,, take dinner .

Maan: u r tired Geet don't bother ur self .

Geet: it's OK mr Khurana , u r also very tired ,, u hold manu all d time ,, go nd freshen up .

Maan went in d room nd Geet prepared coffee for both nd fresh juice for manu ,, now manu was full charge nd playing with his new car showing Geet nd Maan.

Geet : u stayed with manu nd I'm in kitchen . she got up nd went to kitchen for preparing diner .

Maan started playing with Manu some time he gave a glance to Geet who was busy in cooking ,, he was half laying on sofa nd manu was sitting on his tummy , Maan was asking about d animals he saw in d zoo nd manu was describing them mimicking their sounds , he was also asking from Manu that did he saw t I g e l , l I o n ,,, foxy ,,, angly bild ,, on nd on ...


Precap --- Maan is back in hotel ..

Missing manu nd Geet ...



Part - 12



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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bohut se questions hai... But will wait...



Nice parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vibrant Update
The outing was fun , Maan seems to like Manu alot
Precap is Interesting as now Maan is missing Geet and Manu
waiting to see what happens next

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the new Thread Babie
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Originally posted by: rashmivaish

congrats on the new Thread Babie



😆😆 just tumhari trd se tahal ker a rahi hu dear..

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