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yeyyy..m able to comment..

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chahat sweety wonderful start...i so badly wanted to comment but coulnt...huuhh 😭😭

I dont knw y😡😡

i loved ur story..its very intersting..meeet and mahi...👍🏼

maneet ka bacpan is shoo cute!!😳😳


conitnue soon..n soo soo soo sorry for commenting late!!!😊
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nice part maaneet met nd maan hlpd geet😃
geet is followng her meet's words till nw
waitng 5 d nxt part😃
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Originally posted by: GC_deewani

<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> yeyyy..m able to comment..</font>


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<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">chahat sweety wonderful start...i so badly wanted to comment but coulnt...huuhh 😭😭</font>

<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I dont knw y😡😡</font>

<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i loved ur story..its very intersting..meeet and mahi...👍🏼 </font>

<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">maneet ka bacpan is shoo cute!!😳😳</font>


<font color="#999966" size="5" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">conitnue soon..n soo soo soo sorry for commenting late!!!😊</font>


Thanku dear.
I m glad u liket it.
Will update soon.
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Originally posted by: christipie

nice part maaneet met nd maan hlpd geet😃

geet is followng her meet's words till nw
waitng 5 d nxt part😃


Thanku dear.
Will update soon
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waiting for the update


Will update tomorrow dear.
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PART 4

Geet - dekho meet tumari mahi aaj bhi tumari
baato ko follow karti hai. Bus jaldi se tum muje
mil jao.
Geet thought break when meera came and hug her from back and geet got scared with meera sudden hug and screamed
Geet - AHH CHOR CHOR KOI BACHAO BACHAO.
Meera - geet!! geet!! main hu meera koi chor nai.
Geet - meera ki bachi aise koi kisi ko darata hai kya? Tune toh meri jaan hi nikal di thi.
Meera - chal jhuti teri jaan toh tere pass hai hi nai woh toh tere secret love ke pass hai kyn hai na.
Geet again thought about meet memories and again meera brought her frm there.
Meera - kaha kho gayi geet fir se apne
secret love ko yaad kar rahi ho kya?
Geet - meera tum muje kyun tang karti ho?
Meera -kyn na karu usske liye toh tum yaha delhi
aayi ho aur
main kuch bolo bhi nai.
Geet - meera plz abhi nai. Woh chodo uncle aunty kaha hai dikh nai rahe?
Meera - woh papa ko kisi project ke liye london jana pada aur mom unke sath gayi hai dad ki health karab na ho jaye isliye.
Meera and geet were neighboors in mumbai. They are best frds from childhood. Few year back meera saw geet locket in her hand and with much persuation geet told about her meet. Last year meera father got tranfer to delhi and they shift to delhi, now geet also came with support of meera to find her meet. They talk daily about everything happen in there life.
Geet - tabi toh main kahu ye itne ghar mein itne chips packet kyn hai woh bhi sub khali.
Meera - geet aaj tum aayi ho toh aaj party chalo phele mall chalege fir dinner.
Geet - okay madam ji.


In khurana mansion

Naintara is getting tense with maan sudden arrival bcoz its nt his tym to came home and when he came it means he is vry disturb.
Naintara - hum kya kare veerji toh room se bhar hi nai aaye aur na hi nakul ko coffee ke liye bola kuch toh baat hui hai warna veerji coffee na le aisa ho hi nai sakta. Dadima bhi ghar par nai hai jo unse baat kar sake, unne bhi abhi bahar jana tha. Lagta hai hume hi jana hoga veerji ke room mein. Chalo naintara bete ready ho jao agar volcano blast hua toh tumari khair nai.
In maan room
maan - kyun nai ho tum mere pass mahi? ab aur nai raha jata tumare bina. Bus ek baar mere samane aa jao, phir main tume kahi jane duga.
Maam thought break when he heard a knock on his door and naintara came with his coffee.
Naintara - veerji aapki coffee.
Maan - tum kyn layi naintara nakul ko bhej diya hota. Main abhi toh aaya tha bus nakul ko bulane wala tha.
Naintara - veerji aapko aaye hue 2 hours ho gaye aur jab humne dekha ki aapne coffee nai magayi toh humne socha ki aapse khud puchle ki kya koi prob hai?
Maan(surprised) - 2 hours aur muje pata bhi nahi chala. Aur tum tension matlo main kisi ke matlab kisi proj ke bare mein soch raha tha isliyd pata nai chala tym ka. Anyways dadima kaha hai?
NT - dadi ngo ke function ki final prepration dekhne gayi hai aur hum bhi wahi ja rahe hai. Kya aap bhi chalege? Dev bus aane wale hai office se.
Maan - nai muje kuch kaam hai tum dono jao.
NT - tekh hai and she left.
Maan after changing his office attire to causal he went toward park to find some peace in his heart. He came and sat on a bench and lost in memories of mahi with close eyes.
Uski muskurahat, uska chera, uski baatein maan ke mann mein aisi rahti hai jaise woh samane khadi ho par achanak unn yaado mein baar baar geet ka chehra aa raha tha aur maan bechain ho raha tha.
Maan - ye kya ho raha hai mujhe kyn uss ladki ka chehra mere samane aa raha hai. Maan apne aapko shant karo tum aaj tekh nai ho subah se isliye aisa ho raha. Ab ghar jakar so jao kal tak sab tekh ho jayega.

Geet and meera mall mein ghume aur fir dinner ke liye chinese resturanant chale gaye.
Meera - geet aaj kitne dino ke baad humne itna maja kiya hai warna main toh yaha aakar bore ho rahi thi.
Geet - chill ab main aa gayi hu toh ab bore hone ka toh sawal hi nai hoga. Meera -ye toh hai. Chalo ab ghar chalte hai kal
tumare clge mein first day hai toh late nai hona toh jaldi sona hai.
Geet - chal chalte hai.
Both came home and went to bed. Next day bring new hope in geet life and geet got up and first thing she did is to pray to her babaji.
Geet -good morning babaji, aaj ka din mere liye khaas hai toh muje thodi blessing dena aur baki ki baate din bhar karege abhi main ready ho jati hu.

8 am at KM
maan - gud morning dadima
Dadima - GM beta.
Maan - aaj baki sab kaha hai.
Dadima - dev- nt apne frds ke breakfast ke liye gaye hai aur vicky aate hi hoge.
Vicky - GM guys
Maan - GM. Vicky aaj tumara first day hai toh clge mein toh chalo main tume drop kar deta hu muje waha par kuch kaam hai.
Vicky - ji bro.

Maan and vicky in car
Vicky - bro aap muje drop kyun kar rahe hai aur aapko kuch kaam hai ye mat kahna.
Maan(sign) - vicky aaj tum ek naya step le rahe ho toh main tume waha jate hue dekhna chahata tha.
Vicky - Thank u bro for ur dis thought and wow ye toh mere liye bhut acha chance hai main MSk ke sath clge mein entry luga toh ladkiya muj par fida ho jayegi kyn haina bro.
Maan - ji nai kynki aap akele hi apni entry karege aur main bhar se dekhuga. Chalo ab jao tumara clge aa gaya and all the best.
Vicky - thanxs bro and bye ghar par milte hai.
Kuch der baad maan bhi clge principal se milne ke liye car se bhar aane hi wala tha ki tabi usse ek jana pahchana chehra dikhayi diya jo apne aapse hi baate kar raha tha.
Geet - geet puttar dar mat sab acha hoga. Tune toh badi badi prob solve ki hai toh ye toh prob bhi nai hai bus clge ka phela din hai. Babaji aur meet ko yaad karke chal dekhna sab tension dur ho jayegi.
Maan uski harkato ko dekhkar hasna chahta tha par usne control kiya aur principal se milne chala gaya.

PRECAP
(1) BOY - TUMNE MUJE SLAP KIYA AB ISKI SAZZA TOH TUME MILEGI.
GEET - LEAVE ME TUM BATAMIZEE KAR RAHE HO.
MAAN (ANGRYILY) - USSE CHODO ABHI KE ABHI
(2) MAHI - MEET TUMHE CHOT LAGI HAI.
MEET - KUCH NAI HUA BUS THODA CUT GAYA TEKH HO JAYEGA.
MAHI - CHUP BILKUL CHUP.


Hope u all like it.
CHAHAT
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very nice
both geet n maan missing each other very much
geet come to earch her meet hope she get success soon

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