New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago
you know its really sweet tht you took this story in a different tangent
i mean muskan di already wrote such a beautiful story tht there is nothing to change but still you bring a flavor to it which liked it till date 😉
nice update
loved it
but liked the most when maan first time bring a gift for geet
he's changing😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh sahi hai ki hum ko life mein jyada kuch nahi chahiye...bas thodi care, thoda pyaar aur thodi si muskuraht aur aaj Maan Geet ke liye woh sab kuch kar raha hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part...maan gifted geet a sari and geet so happy with his efforts , love and care...I loved it when maan was practicing in front of mirror how to gift geet a sari
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
maan trying 2 provehimsel
n putting efforts on it..
his first gift
geet enjoying his pl8
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab Updt.. Love tge way Maan trying to change
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update maan first gift 2 geet & maan cant express he shying awesome geet unconditional love great loved maans care love cooking lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute up baby maan support geet so much and boost her to finish her project. Awesome he not only take care of her but also support her. He cooked for her which surly not his cup of coffee 😆 but loved his love behind this gesture which touched Geet heart. She get her happiness after a long time ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 8
awesome...
Maan is indeed trying his best...
Geet is happy with this itself...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-9

Today it was there anniversary,geet got up in the morning n prayed to babji,thanking him for saving there broken realation,she was soo thankful to babaji to return her maan in her life,she was finaly happy,happy to have maan's care,his love.she was praying to babaji when maan came fom behind n started praying,when geet turned she was surprised to see maan there

Maan

Maan smilled geet held her hand n wished her happy anniversary geet,geet had tears of joy in her eyes,hearing those words for the first time in there 5 years of marriage.it was first time when maan wished her,she felt soo happy soo special,maan nodded no n wipped her tears

Maan held her shoulder n said

Geet i wanna promise u something today,geet i know could never be the perfect husband that u deserved,but ill try to give u all the happiness in world,pls b with me always saying this he bought sumthing near her neck

Geet was shocked to see a beautiful mangalsutra in maan's hands

Geet can i tie it to u as a token of my promise plss

Geet smilled with tears in her eyes,she hugged maan tightly n said thanku maan thanku soo much,thanku for everything,while maan hugged her close to his heart promising his heart never to let go of her

Maan take me home

Maan was shocked to hear what geet said,he looked at her once n geet nodded smilling take me home maan take me home,our home

Maan was soo happy hearing that coming from geet he hugged her tight,while geet kept saying thanku

Maan today u gave me all the happiness m soo happy maan

when suddenly maan kept his finger on her lips n said no geet there is still sumthing left

Geet looked towards maan

Haan geet i haven't returned u ur most precious happiness that i took away from u,saying this a tear dropped from maan's eyes m sooryy geet for taking away ur happiness,for hurting u for killing our baby,m soo sorry geet,will u ever b able to forgive me pls geet pls

Geet cried hearing maan n hugged him sobbing remembering about there dead babies...m sorry geet pls will u give me another chance to give u that happiness pls geet

Geet nodded n hugged maan dearly

She could never share the pain of loosing her babies with maan,but today hearing talk about that broke her completely geet cried hidding her face in his chest while maan took her to there room n consoled her.

He knew he can't change what was done but atleast with he can try n make there furure bright n give geet all the happiness that she deserved

Maan called daddi n informed her about there return daddi was soo happy hearing that finally geet was coming back were she belonged n finally maan has realised his mistakes

Finally after two day maaneet were standing here near the gate of KM finally maan bought his wife his geet back to were she always belonged

They were about to enter when pammi said rukiye maan

Maan n geet looked towards pammi

Mom said maan

Ek min maan aap andar aa sakte h but ye nahi,iske liye iss ghar k darwaje band ho chuke h n ye ab andar nai aa sakti,pata nai kitno k saath chakkar tha iska,apne hi patti ko divorce dene chali thi n ab dekhiye kaise wapis aane ko tyaar h,jarur isse wo comfort nai de paya hoga iska wo boyfrnd tabi to wapis aa gai h ye

Geet stood there with tears in her eyes,she didn't knew what to say,she knew coming back would mean more rude words from pammi but didn't expected that it would hurt her soo much,she was lost in her thoughts when she heard maan say

Mom pls aap ye sab kya keh rai h geet is my wife n she has aal the rights to stay with us

No maan u r wrong inka n aapka rishta usi din khatam ho gaya tha jab ye ghar chod k gait hi so ye iss ghar mai nahi aa sakti

Mom just a sec first thing geet ye ghar chod k nai gai thi it was u who dragged her out n second agar geet andar nai ayegi toh mai bhi nai aunga

Maan ye aap kya keh rae h aap iss iss ladki k liye apni maa se jaban lad arahe h

Mom ye koi ladki nai balki meri wife h,n iski respct ko protect karna mera farz h so pls i would suggest k aap apni jidd chod de

Maan ye ladki iss ghar mai hargis naai aa sakti,n aap kyun apni jindagi ek aisi ladki k liye kharab kar rahe h,ye ladki toh aapko baby ka such bhi nai de saki maan she is not gud for u pls aap zidd chod dijiye

Mom enough now u have said enough n i have heard enough,ye meri life n meri wife so ill so exactly what i want

Dekha maa dekha apne ye kaise iss ladki k liye humse jaban lada raha h pammi came towards geet glaring at her pata nai kya jaddu kardiya h isne mere bte par,mujse mera beta cheen rai h,iss ghar ko ek waris toh de nai saki n ab mera beta b mujse dur karrai h

N that broke maan's patience finally n maan screamed enough of it mom enough

Aap janti kya h aap kabse use sunaye jaa rai h n she is standing there hearing all ur nonsense just coz u r elder to her,

Maan tum

Ek min mom let me complete aur ye kya baby baby laga rakha h aapne,agar aaj humara koi baby nai h so its my decision not geet's fault.i was the one who wasn't ready for the baby,n itna hi nai i even aborted our two babies wo b geet k naa chahte hue,but usne ye kiya sirf isliye coz mai babies nai chahta tha n aap h ki use hi,,

Itna hi nai jab uss din annie ki sangeet party mai aapne n apki frnds ne geet ki insult ki tab bhi mai chup raha sirf isliye coz i didn't wanted to insult u or ur frnds,maine apni biwi ki insult hote hue dekhi without her any fault but didn't said a word but not anymore,agar aap meri mom h toh even she is my wife n to protect her selfrespect,her dignity is my responsibility,so now

Mom m telling u this for the last time one more word against geet,one more taunt against her n trust me i would walk out from here with geet n won't even bother to see back

Maan aap iss ladki k liye apni maa ko chod denge

M reapeating it again that this girl is no other girl but my wife n to protect her respect her is my duty n to fullfill it if ill have to stand against u ill do that also

Now the decision is urs aap kya chahti h apni jidd yaa apna beta

Befor pammi could say a word more dadima camne n hugged geet n told maan to take geet upstairs,though pammi tried to protest but daddima ignored her

Through out the convo geet stood there shocked seeing this new avatar of maan,she felt soo overwehlmed seeing the way maan stood for her took a stand for her,her heart was filled with joy

After maan took geet to there room daddima said

Pammi i would advise u to change,u better giveup on this attitude of urs otherwise u ll loose ur son oneday

Maaji aaap ye keh rai h aap apne dekha na maan ne kya kiya uss ladki ke liye usne mujse apni maa se

Ek min pammi jaisa k maan ne kaha k wo koi aam ladki nai iss ghar ki bahu h n maan ki biwi h n secondly aap ye mat bhuliye k aapne maan ko majboor kiya h ye sab bolne pe

Aap me itni kadwahat bhari h geet k liye k aap jo jee mai aaye bolti h,aap geet ki saas h toh aap ko lagta h k jo aap kar rahi h wo sahi h so jara huime ye bataiye k hum bhi toh aapke saas h agar hum bhi aap k saath waisa hi kare jaisea aapne geet k saath kiya toh kaisa lagega aapko

Pammi looked away

While dadima said before leaving u know pammi agar maan ne kuch kaha h toh wo use kar k dikhayenge to its better k aap apna ye ravaiya geet k saath badal le warna hume darr h k aap ek din iss ghar mai akeli reh jayengi said adddima before leaving

Maan bought geet upastairs n wipped her tears he gave her water

While geet hugged maan crying

M soo sorry maan ye sab meri wajah se hua aapko mumma se kitna kuch sunna pada m sorry

Nai geet tum kyun sorry bol rai ho it wasn't ur fault,n she needs to realise it that she can't blame u for everything in this world

But aapko mumma se aise baat nai karni chaiye thi une bura laga hoga

N tume geet tume nai bura laga jab uss din sabne tume itn kuch kaha,tume bura nai laga jab aaj mom ne tume itna kuch sunaya

Wo badi h maan

Badi h ka matlab ye nai h geet k woh kuch b galat sahi bolengi,bade hone se hume kisi ko hurt karne ka right nai mil jata geet n she needs to know this that now u r not alone,saying this maan hugged geet while geet felt blessedto have maan in her life

Finally geet got what she craved for all her life,the love,the care that she always needed finally she got it back,she thanked babaji million times in her heart for returning her maan to her

Precap

Last Part

okh guys that's it for now

will b waiting for ur response

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful emotional update! well written! Maan has proven himself! Geet happy! Its their 5 year anniversary! This time its different! Maan is with her! Geet overwhelmed! Maan apologises abt the babies! Maaneet go home! Dadi welcomes them! Geet happy she is with Maan! update soon

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