In The Eyes Of The Beholder~2~ Chapter 13, Pg 73, June 4, 2016

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Yeh R kia hai.. Updt coming 😲

M *thud* 🤢

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Off to bed.🤢

Pm's tomorrow.

Good night Sheen.

Good night Priya

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: Susegad
Off to bed.🤢
Pm's tomorrow.
Good night Sheen.
Good night Priya
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Good Night to u 🤗
Good evening to me 😆

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spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

that was a simple n lovely part!

n geet is opening up to maan !

n the tiny mystery which is building up in the back drop is wonderful!

Waiting for the next!😊

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Susegad
Off to bed.🤢
Pm's tomorrow.
Good night Sheen.
Good night Priya
🥱

goodnight nisha

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Oh geet has sooo much sad things stuffed inside her...i feel terrible for her...Am loving the fact that maan is slowly getting attached to her...

Even my dad has a bullet and also had a big round tummy..Although his tummy s gone now...,i lovvv travelling on his bullet with my hand holding his cute tummy...my friends make fun of me saying that i sit behind him like a frog 😆😆 i dont look like one though😕😳😆

Thanku diii for bringing back all those good memories😊😊

Lovvviiing the story more with each part...

and what is with this Abhinav and maan's brother?? is he maan's brother?? guess the story is not a comedy one as i thought it to be...so many mysteries are hidden behind...Who was he talking to?

Omg too many questions...Pls update sooon dii...

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

ab yeh abhinav kisse baat kiya maan ke baaremein. aur poor abhinav ab antiseptic ko chodkar maan aur geet ko pakadna hai😆. baap re maan kitna possessive bangaya hai . dekho geet AS ke paas jaane se pehle hi usko kheech liya wapas aur wo jaakar gale laggaye😆😆😆.😲yeh kya maan ko ek zor ka jhatka diya AS ne😆😆waise maanna padega maan ne AS ki body ke baaremein socha😆

geet apni bike ki story batadiya maan ko . poor geet choti se umar mein kitna saha aur ab tak uski papa wapas nahi aaye.

last dialogue tho ek dum mast hai . 😆sar ka chot😆

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Nice part

AS kisse baath ki

Maan hugged AS...ab usse poora dettol mein nahana padega😆

Maan ko AS ke aadat dekh ke uska bhai yaad aaya

Geet told her story

Eagerly waiting for the next

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Sudha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Gudone, ur updates always leave me crying by the end waiting fr the next

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-Lehar-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#230

nice part
loved it
maan got relief seeing geet safe...
he became possesive of her he stoped her going towards AS...
was AS talking with maan's father..?
AS handed over them maan's bike keys and both left inviting AS for coffee...
maan observed AS and remembered about his brother..
what that mystry maan hiding..?
and geet sharing her childhood memories with her father to maan...
maan thinking with geet besides him he living his life full
eagerly waiting for the next part