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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
finally everything is cleared that geet is hamsa
and maan is prem
and how geet got her name
but maan's office staff confused that maan and geet are married to two different people
want to see more romance between maan and geet
please update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

ok...so geet is hamsa n maan is prem...hw come nobody knw dat...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

No one ever met Maaneet as pair other than at their wedding na 😆
Thanks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

poor hamsa
she suffered a lot
she was the one who cried a lot
peeps that is her prem
and she is his hamsa
but they dont know
after all jeevs being the naughty girl that she is
kept us all hanging didnt she
hell yes she did
no wonder all were not 100% sure if maneet got married
interesting name geet
but thanx to her sister she got shorter name
though he calls her hamsa too
so no one knew about maan wife
and geet hubby
but all is okay now naa

Yep all is okay ... so next would be epilogue then 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Amazing n lovely part. ..

😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 13
awesome...
fantastic...
finally the confusion is cleared...
so Geet is Maan's wife and Maan is her boss...
the name thing was absolutely funny...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Finally Geet gets her Prem and Maan his Hamsa. Could imagine the looks on Sasha, Arjun and Adi's faces seeing them in such a position. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitu-



Hii I am Mitu ...
I don't had any idea if you know me or not so thought to introduce my self first 😉
Well I know you... you used to read my stories before ... don't know why u left though 😛

Ok ok... actually I had a very bad habit when it's come to read FF
I always read few comments first before starting any FIction
So do I did with this one ... I got from few comments that this one is a mystery genre Fiction
So I was stalking this fiction whenever u update and read few detail comments
First time I found everyone is relieved as u cleared all mystery today ...
So I read this fiction from the start finally
😳
Well when I want to start some new even I choose the stories depending on the comments Embarrassed

First I want to tell you ... u r a natural writer as the amount of emotion
You add in story was fabulous and making ur reader confused o god ...
I seriously laughed after reading chapter 13 😆

Emotion ... I thought I haven't used any in this one 😉

Ok Prem n Hamsa ... actually prem never confused me much as I could relate him with maan easily

But Hamsa god whenever I read about her ... I got scared what if maaneet is really married to different persona

Till the chapter 12 ... I somewhere started to believe that Hamsa n geet r not same but bingo... Hamsa nandi sangeeta
😆

You know I even googled Hamsa meaning too ... to get a clue but could not able to relate with story
Well that wasn't directly related to anyone but still it was very much imp😆
Like maan is geet love so she called him prem ok logic
But I was so confused why should he call geet as hamsa
See you got this one ... but many are still contemplating what it is
Than confused office staff confued me like hell
They would be confused for a while now
Well I liked sasha so much here ... really awesome
Thought lets change sasha's avatar
Maan maasi is little bit annoying
But she was a v. imp part for planting the confusion
But hatta of to you to not to give any right clue to the readers till the time you have decided to reveled it
All 13 chapters are treat for me ... full evening quota heheh
😆
Well morning when I checked the comments it was a treat for me too ...u r the second one who saved them selves of confusion


Loved this FF/ss ... beautiful cs n beautiful writing

👏 👏 👏

Thank you Mitu.. for loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: icskwt

wonderful part JP...chalo shukar hai ki maan prem aur hamsa geet ek hi hain...yaar JP yeh naam aacha hai hamsa nandi geetangali...

ab office main yeh bomb kab phutega?????
sach main dear amazing part and yes going to add u for PM...

Thanks dear... I never said there weren't one na 😉
bomb .. dheere se ... jaldi kya hai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Finally the name game ended and Maan and Geet are together!!

Oh really it did kya ... so I should have written THE END at last ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fict

finally confusion over and back to happy lovely couple😆😆 Nice part. What will be the reaction of office staff and their friends on finding that maan and Geet are married to each other.😆

oh.. yep they are...
reaction ... how would I know... lets see what they show if they ever get to know 😆

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