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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest
confusion resolved completely. 😆
lovely update..cute lovely moments of Maaneet..

office colleagues are going to get a shock now..much more than they got while seeing them together..waiting for it.

Honestly I think I could have confused everyone for more time 😉

but then thought to let it go...😆

shock ... still not so soon... it would take time 😛

who is in a hurry 😆

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Aaru

@Amsk

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Oh amazing story behind geet's name Aah sorry Hamasa Nandi sangeeta loved it 😉
Nice update just loved it

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Amsk
Oh amazing story behind geet's name Aah sorry Hamasa Nandi sangeeta loved it 😉
Nice update just loved it

Thanks dear...

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

Honestly I think I could have confused everyone for more time 😉

but then thought to let it go...😆

shock ... still not so soon... it would take time 😛

who is in a hurry 😆

I wanted it..😉 😆

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

I wanted it..😉 😆

Next time .. you can have it...😆

If I write anything more confusing then this one 😉

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Piyu75

@Piyu75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

nice update. so cute they both were cuddled up together. Geet knew it was Maan next to her even in her sleep. The office staff doesn't know that they are both married to each other.

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Piyu75
nice update. so cute they both were cuddled up together. Geet knew it was Maan next to her even in her sleep. The office staff doesn't know that they are both married to each other.

Offcourse who else can do those things with her than her prem.

yep they don't...😉

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

ok...so geet is hamsa n maan is prem...hw come nobody knw dat...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

poor hamsa
she suffered a lot
she was the one who cried a lot
peeps that is her prem
and she is his hamsa
but they dont know
after all jeevs being the naughty girl that she is
kept us all hanging didnt she
hell yes she did
no wonder all were not 100% sure if maneet got married
interesting name geet
but thanx to her sister she got shorter name
though he calls her hamsa too
so no one knew about maan wife
and geet hubby
but all is okay now naa

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Hii I am Mitu ...
I don't had any idea if you know me or not so thought to introduce my self first 😉

Ok ok... actually I had a very bad habit when it's come to read FF
I always read few comments first before starting any FIction
So do I did with this one ... I got from few comments that this one is a mystery genre Fiction
So I was stalking this fiction whenever u update and read few detail comments
First time I found everyone is relieved as u cleared all mystery today ...
So I read this fiction from the start finally
😳

First I want to tell you ... u r a natural writer as the amount of emotion
You add in story was fabulous and making ur reader confused o god ...
I seriously laughed after reading chapter 13 😆

Ok Prem n Hamsa ... actually prem never confused me much as I could relate him with maan easily
But Hamsa god whenever I read about her ... I got scared what if maaneet is really married to different persona
Till the chapter 12 ... I somewhere started to believe that Hamsa n geet r not same but bingo... Hamsa nandi sangeeta
😆
You know I even googled Hamsa meaning too ... to get a clue but could not able to relate with story
Like maan is geet love so she called him prem ok logic
But I was so confused why should he call geet as hamsa
Than confused office staff confued me like hell
Well I liked sasha so much here ... really awesome
Maan maasi is little bit annoying
But hatta of to you to not to give any right clue to the readers till the time you have decided to reveled it
All 13 chapters are treat for me ... full evening quota heheh
😆

Loved this FF/ss ... beautiful cs n beautiful writing

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