Kalpana's Maan Geet VMs Galore! Thread # 4! 14th VM on Page 55!

First Previous

Page

113

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#761

mine you better leave for last
it will be huge
waise the page you updated DFL for had my comment with oyur review
and then new chapter
of course again my comment
so funny

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Yup! I know! And here is a funnier thing! I was able to read your first review from my mobile but once you put up the second one, the page refused to load saying the page is too big!🤣

Luckily, I was sitting in front of PC at that time, so just logged in and read it here!😆

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

not surprised
think part 2 was bigger than part 1
am surprised it let you load for the first part

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Even I was surprised at that!

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

hello time for you to go
its late yaar
and you didnt get decent sleep
go to bed

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

Ok! Nighty night!

See you tomorrow! Take care!

May MSK and ASR come into your dreams and bring lots of popcorn for you! Coz you are going to need it on Sunday!😉 (Six of my stories you read and all six are going to be updated😃)

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

night dear
well may you dream of scorpion new epi you watched
with you helping those guys out too
more tomorrow
and yes the popcorn shall help

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

Hi bestie!

Today I had a tiresome day coz I went out in morning! Mom had some bank related work for me so I had to go to the station where the banks are mostly located and then i carried back some groceries as usual! I was planning to work on the stories in noon but was sleepy so went to sleep. In evening, I was way too nervous as MF and Kya Pyar both were pending. Thank goodness for small mercies, I was able to finish both of them just now!😃 No fast typing or anything like that! Did not strain my wrists! 😃 Was able to finish them off smoothly!

For tomorrow, editing for all four stories are left. Then i have to create Khushi version of MF as I write in Geet version. And AK and ZA version for Kya Pyar as there also I use MG as base. Then I have to add english translations to both MF stories!

I add translations later as there are some place where I feel Arnav is better off speaking in english while Maan says the same line in hindi and vice versa some places I feel Arnav is more effective with a hindi line while Maan say the same in English. It depends on how the line sounds in my head when said by the characters. So I convert MFG into MFK first and then add translations!

In short, writing work in done! Only editing and finishing is left!😃

Thought you would like to know! I am off to reply Kya Pyar reviews and your DFL reviews!😃

Missing you

Kapatine!

Quote

Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Kittu abhi tak nahi aayi?

Are you ok Kittu? Hope you are fine! Coz my brain is giving me very horrible ideas about why you have yet to come online! But I am sure main khaali fokat worry kar rahi hoon! I am sure you are just late! Must be working late!