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Posted: 10 years ago

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Last Part

Thank u so much for all ur comments guyz

At night...

In party...

Sid and geet enters party as a perfect couple...geet is wearing black saree and sid black suit...

and after some tym our hero enters wearing black armani suit...he's looking damn hot...all girls goes gaga over him...and geet get jealous but she did nt show her inner feeling on her face...like all staff goes to greet him wiith their family & wifes...sid also goes to greet him...and intentionally he put his one arm around her bare waist...and after seeing this maan clenched his fist...and jaws tightened...he want to make sid red and blue...he ignores sid...who comes to greet him...and leaves from there...and goes to the bar...and gulp drinks...(no hard drink)...he's in anger beyond limts...

After some tym couple dance announced...then geet and sid nods to each other...and then sid goes towards the dj...and then the song played...AA zara kareeb se...from MURDER 2...

then they start dancing...only they are on the floor...they did some passionate moves...all look towards them in awe...but there's is one pair of eye who looking towards them in anger...his eyes were shooting daggers...he gulp one more drink...and leaves from the party...

After party over...sid and geet...leave the place...but sid have to go to some urgent work...so geet alone goes to the mansion...she going towards her room...murmuing the same song...and them some one pulled her in a room...she's going to scream but a manly palm...cover her mouth...batane ki zaroorat hai kon hai...off course maan...aisi harkatein aur kon kar sakta hai...ok back to the story...

he's looking at geet with anger filled eyes...his one hand covers her mouth...and one hand is n her waist...same place where sid place his hand...he's trying to erase his touch with his touch...and geet is trying to come out from his grip...he uncovers her mouth...and hold her waist...with his both hand...

G:maan ye kya kar rehe ho chodo mujhe...(but maan tightened his hold around her waist),...chodo...

M:kyo mazza nhi aa rha...ab wo sid tumhe jyada maza karwata...

G :maan chodiye mujhe...

M :kyo...pehle toh meri baho main aane k bahane dhundhti thi...ab jab ho...toh dur kyo jaana chahti hon...bade maza se nach rhi thi us sid k saath...pehle toh woh champu tha...ab kya hua...(now geet is also gets angry)

G :ha nach rhi thi uske sath...aapko kya...pati hai mere...aur aapse lakh gunna ache insaan hai...aur waise aapko kya farak padta hai...main kisi k saath main bhi rahu...oh jalan ho rhi mujhe sid k saath dekh k...

(then he hold her hair in his fist...and pull her face near his face)

M :ha ho rhi thi jalan pata hai kyo...pyaar karne laga hoon tumse...I am in love with u geet...I love u...(tears started flowing from her eyes...and a small smile come on her lips)...(he loosened his grip and hold her face in his both palms)

...ha pyaar karne laga hoon tumse...bohot bohot pyaar...tumhare bina...ek pal bhi maut k barabar hai...plz geet mujhse kabhi dur mat jaana...ha main maanta hoon...bohot galtiyan ki hai maine...bohot hurt kiya tumhe us din...par ab main badal gya hoon geet...ye cassnova maan...ab bas geet ka maan hai...tumhare pyaar ne badal diya mujhe...I want to marry u geet...I want to love u...like never before...I want to be a father of aur child...

G :ye wish toh aapki poori hone wali hai...aap papa banne wale ho...I'm pregnant...

M ;kya...par kaise...hum toh...(then he remember the party night...when in anger he forget to use protection)...oh god...

M :aa...aap khush nhi ho...(then he saw geet who is in verge of crying)

M:no..no baby I'm happy...wo achanak aise tumhne bataya I dont know how to react...but baby main really khush hoon...

G :sachi

M:muchi...(then he kiss her forehead)...acha ab batao...ye sid k saath kya chal rha tha...

G :wo wo aap ko jealous karne k liye...taaki aap apna pyaar confess kare...

M:kya...use humare bare main pata hai...?

G:ha...aur usene hi hume milane k liye plan banaya...

M :wow...maine nhi socha tha us bramhchari ka dimag in baaton main bhi chalta hai...

G :maan use aise mat boliye...usne humari help ki...ab humai baari hai...use uske pyaar se milawaye...

M :pyaar ?

G :ha..then she told him everything abt sid)

M :hmmm ab humari baari hai...but ab toh sid nidhi k beech sab theek ho gya hai na...ab bus subha use surprise milne wala hai...

G :surprise...?

M :hmmm bas dekhte jao...aur ab tum so jao...meri beti bhi bohot thak gyi hogi...

G :beti...?...oh hello Mr.singhania...beta hoga...

M :nhi beti...meri pyaari si cute si beti

G :beta

M :beti...

(and their cute si fight goes on after getting tired,,,both drifted to sleep in each other arms)

Morning...

Sid enters the mansion...and found some change in air...he going to his room upstairs...when a female hands cover his eyes from back...

sid touch that hands...

s :nidhi...

N :sid har baar tum mujhe kaise pehchan jaate ho...

S :pyaar jo karta hoon tumse...par tum yahan kaise...agar maan bhai ne dekh liya toh saara plan chpat ho jayega...

_ :koi plan chopat nhi hoga...

He look towards maan whos coming with geet hand in hand...

M :ab tumne itna sab kiya...toh uska prize toh tumhe milna chaiye...toh ye rha tumhare prize...aur waise plans ache banate hon...(he looks down...)...ae neeche kya dekh rhe ho...nidhi ki taraf dekho...kabse intezar kar rhi hai tumhari baho main aane k liye...

G :maan...aap chalo yahan se...kyo pareshan kar rhe ho...

M:are main toh...

G :maan samjha karo thodiprivacy chaiye inhe...humare samne hi thodi...

S :main main nidhi ko room dikha deta hoon...

G :ha ha room dikhao...(both are going upstairs...when maan stops them and )

M :sid aaj office jane ki koi zaroorat nhi hai...enjoy...and winks...then they finally goes upstairs)

M :ab um bhi chale soon to be mrs. Maan Singh Khurana...and winks...

G :maan aapko uske ilawa kuch sujta nhi haina...

M :are main toh doctor k paas jaane ko kehrha tha...

G:doctor k paas...?

M :ha doctor k paas...appointment hai na aaj ki...oh waise tumne kya socha

G:nh..nhi kuch nhi...

M:batao na

G :kuch nhi...

M:are batao na...batao na geet plz...

G :uurrrggghhh shut up maan...

In car

M:geet

G:kya hai...

M :tumne mujhe I love u too..nhi bola...

G :main kyo bolu...main nhi bolti...

M :are ye kya baat hui...plz bolo na...

G:nhi bolungi nhi bolungi...nhi bolungi...

M :acha main bol deta hoon...I LOVE U

a blush crept on her face...he saw her face

and

R :Haye...(and she blush more...and finally hides her face in his chest)



Precap : Epilogue ???????


hey guyz i want u all to share your journey with Pure Love plz i want to know how much u liked this story or there is some part line u disliked plz plz i want to know
Jisnai apni journey share ki uski ko Epillogue ka password milega😈


plz plz take out just 5 minutes from your busy schedule and share your feeling with me


Edited by CuteStrawberry - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. So jealousy made Maan to confessed his love for Geet. Geet disclose that she is pregnant. Happy for Maaneet .
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing end.. sid plan worked and maan confessed his love for geet... all are happy sis with nidhi and maan with geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sensational and Exciting Indeed

Sid and Geet's plan to make Maan jealous really worked well as he discovered that he loves Geet and other woman is now nothing for him
when Geet returned from the party Maan was still angry at the fact that Sid danced with Geet and he held her on her waist in all his anger Maan had to confess his love to Geet and he also realize that he did hurt her and I'm glad that he actually made mention of the fact .
knowing that Sid loves Nidhi he also had to help Sid and gave him a surprise .
surprisingly Maan is also happy with Geet's pregnancy
looking forward to the epilogue

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Maan jealous seeing sid and geet in party
Maan confused his love to geet
Geet say maan she's pregnant

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 a wonderful SS! superbly written! Love wins in the end! Thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Sid n Geet's plan worked! Maan angry seeing them together! Maan confronts Geet! he confesses! she reveals she is pregnant! Maan happy! she tells him abt Sid n Nidhi! Maan teases Geet! lovely end! waiting 4 epilogue! Love all the updates! 👏 ⭐️ 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow... superb update .
sid n geet plan work really well.i always like jealous part.
jealousy n fear to loose ur luv always help to understnd ur feelings n confess ur love.
finally maan confess his love
nd now both r happy for their new journey of life nd hving a content feeling for their expecting child.
nd both help sid n nidhi to bring them together.
now all 4 r happy.bt maan is too naughty now .last part is really nice.
nd ya plz give an epilogue too.
nd thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ha ha ha ha
Nice concept

So now geet is somebody else wife and Maan & geet or attracted to each other

I didn't understand about Sid Character here.

Can you please give me the link for your blog and also passowrd. i read first 3 parts in one go and i liked it lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm updt...jealousy wrked with maan...hw simply he cnfessed...and hw uniqly Geet tld him abt pregnancy...loved that sid and nidhi unite due to maneet cz sid helps alot...abt journy what i love abt this ff...Geet is bindhast and nt scred ti accept hr crving fr maan...and maan toh fully latto on Geet...such a beautiful ss comes to an end...updt soon epilog...and thanx fr pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10 wonderful update... Geet is pregnent... Sid understood her and is ready to help her amazing... Plzzz give me password of nxt part

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