Pure Love Hv d Ability 2 change a person - MG SS epiloguePg131 10/5/17

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Pure Love

Have the Ability to change a Person


credit :Temptations

Welcome to My New SS

I m giving the 1st part directly

do tell me hows it


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Part 1

A girl of age 20 is sitting on the bed...with the bridal dress her face is covered with long veil...and the room is decorated with flowers...and she's waiting for her unwanted husband to come and rape her...and the door clicks open and a guy wearing golden sherwani enter the room...he came near the bed...and

Guy :maaf kijiyega geet ji...aapne jo mujhse umeede lagai hogi wo main puri nhi karsakta...(yes and the girl is Geet Handa...and now Geet Khurana)...kyonki main ek baal bhramchari hoon aur maine kisi bhi stri ko na chine ki sogandh khayi hai...aapse shaddi bhi maine sirf apni marti maa...ko thodi khushi dene k liye ki thi...

(After listen all this geet doing bhangra garba geeda...all the dance forms in her heart...and she uncovered her duppata and with excitemant...and then we show her beautiful face with a big smile...)

Geet :oh thank u sooo much Sid...(and geet's so called husband is Sid Khurana age 23 years old and very sharif bacha of his parents)...tum nhi jaante tumne mere dil se kitni bari tension utaar di...whoo...(she take a sigh of relief...warna pata hai mujhe kitni tension ho rhi thi...tum jaise champu k saath main apni suhag raat manaungi...yuck...mujhe toh soch k hi...ewww eww...bura mat maanna...par jo sach tha maine wo kaha...

Sid :(with smile)nhi geetji ismain bura maanne wali konsi baat hai...jo sach hai wo sach hai...

Geet :ha sahi kaha...acha ek baat sunlo...main koi ek achi biwi wale koi kaam nhi karne wali...like tumhare kapde nikalna...khana banana...mujhse ye sab kaam nhi hote...

Sid :Geet ji khaana banane k liye yahan par chef hai...aur kapde toh main khud hi nikalleta hoon...(he said very sweetly and innocently...)

Geet :ok cool...lekin main ek kaam bohot ache se karne wali hoon...tumhare paise udana...ghar se toh bade ameer lagte ho...(she said while looking at the interiors)

Sid :nhi nhi geet ji...aap galat samajh rhi hai...ye toh humare tauji k bete matlab humare bhaiya ka ghar hai...aur humara ghar toh...Punjab main hai...aur humare maa papa bhi wahi rehte hai...aur hum toh apne bhaiya ki company main hi assistant manager ki post par hai...aur humari salary sirf Rs 10,000 hai jismain se 5 hazar hum apne ghar bhej dete hai...

Geet :(in mind)oh god meri toh kismat hi phuti hai...ek baap hai wo bhi kangal aur ek pati mila wo bhi kangal...ab main kaise apni saari wishes puri karoongi...

( geet is totally a spoil girl who loves shopping parties and all but due to her father less salary...she unable to fullfill her desires...then she made boyfriends and spent their money...her parents are very well aware of their daughter acts...so they decided to get her married...but she was not ready for the marriage so her mom blackmail her with her fake heartattack...and than she got agreed coz she loves her mom)

few days passed...and these days Sid is busy in his office work and geet...at home busy in watching movies...geet ignores Sid mostly...she wears jeans and top...at homes and also don't wears any sindoor and mangalsutra

Precap : MSK entry

do click like button and leave ur comments

-kriti

Edited by Devil_kriti - 10 years ago
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I n d e x

Part 1 - scroll up

Part 2 - Pg 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4150186/pure-love-hv-d-ability-2-change-a-person-mg-ss-epiloguepg131-10-5-17?pn=4

Part 3 - Pg 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4150186/pure-love-hv-d-ability-2-change-a-person-mg-ss-epiloguepg131-10-5-17?pn=8

Part 4 - Pg 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4150186/pure-love-hv-d-ability-2-change-a-person-mg-ss-epiloguepg131-10-5-17?pn=12

Part 5 - Pg 16 (on blog)

Part 6 - Pg 25 (on blog)

Part 7 - Pg 38 (on blog)

Part 8 - Pg 61 (on blog)

Part 9 - Pg 83 (on blog)

Part 10 - Pg 90 (on thread)

Part 11 - Pg 104 (on blog)

last Part - page 121 (on thread)

epilogue - page 131 (on thread)

Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow, well this Geet is definitely different!

Interesting concept. Good luck!

I wonder how Maan's entry will effect things.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww superb strt
luvd it
hmmm geeg living in maan's home.
bs entry hogi n both gonna flat on eachother.
waiting for nxt
do pm ehn u updte.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so maan will be sid's cousin and with his entry geet's life will change...
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nice start Sid is champu nd geet was worried abt 1st nite bt got relief aft his confession seriously geetji🤣
so both r livng thier life witout any prblm in their way
ill be waitng 4 maan's entry😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super start of this new ss...this geet is totaly different...and that sid???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 4ever4love

wow, well this Geet is definitely different!
yes i knw 😆

Interesting concept. Good luck! thank u dear

I wonder how Maan's entry will effect things.lets see😉


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Originally posted by: christipie

nice start Sid is champu nd geet was worried abt 1st nite bt got relief aft his confession seriously geetji🤣

so both r livng thier life witout any prblm in their way
ill be waitng 4 maan's entry😃

thank u dear😃

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