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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updates.
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Part 10

geet house

she came in n saw her landlord sat in a chair waitng for her

shanta tai : made a taunting face n say agai maharani kaha thi itni dair pata hai na is ghar mein 8 baje k bad entry nahi milti

GEET : smile sheeply wooo tai woh mein n she came close to her limping coz of hurt

shanti saw it n said

ST : ye kiya howa kaise lagi chot dehan kha rehta hai tera kitni laprwah hogai hai

she made geet sat n look her wound n call other PG

ST : kha hai sab ki sab jaldi koi pani lao abhi sab phone par lagi hogi koi nahi sunta bas

she is worried n angry too all came

geet lived with shanti n some more girls lived with them too they live like family of 10 member including shanti n geet its a small banglow type well decorated

pari ( other pg) kiya howa ST y u shout jaise koi earth quick agya ho

other roll their eyes n came to see geet n her wound

omg what happen baby meera sid this time

GEET : kuch nahi woh aj subha jis ladkey ko mena pita tha aur police k hawley kiya tha us k sathi revenje k liya aaye they n she told about what happen including all maan family too

listen this all get shock n hug her

meera : geet tujhe police ko call karna chiya tha khai aur toh nahi lagi dekha muje

other : wow geet tu toh badi bahdur hai kash hum bhi mila hoty tera saviour say dreamy ( me lo jaaha msk wah ladiya abhi toh geet nai yeh nahi batya k msk is the saviour jab bati gi toh kiya hoga 😉)

geet n meera roll their eyes shanti went to kitchen

PARI : tuje kiya zarort thi humai phone karti hum maza chakatey unko unki itni himat pari ki friend ko tease kar unko toh mein mein

YAAD ajai toh kar lena ok shanti said n came close to geet she briing milk for geet n give it to her geet made faces

ST : chup chap isey pi ley mera dimag abhi bhut garam horaha hai bhut shock hai tum ladkiyo ko advancherrr karnai ka hai

pari mera n other laugh to listen advanture of shantu

chup she shout evry one kept their finger on their mouth

ST: kiya kiya bhut hasi arhi hai tum logo ko bhut maza araha hai socha agr woh ladkey nahi atey aur isey pointed to geet na save kartey to kiya hoja huh

she is much angry n all are hang their head

ST : kiya zarort hai tum logo ko yeh sab karne ki sahanti become so much emotinal n said agin tum logo ko pata hai jab tum log bhar jatey ho mein kitna pareshan ho jati ho nahi tum logo k liya toh tai kuch nahi na hai bus apna maan ki kiya jao maa toh kuch hoti nahi na
she blaber n went from there

GEET : yeh tai ko kiya howa

MEERA : geet uska letter aya hai aur phir tuje asey dekh kar
GEET : is leya zyada emotianl hai humeri shantu all noded


SAME night at KM


maan n all sitting in hall like befor e geet khata
pari narate all thing to nakul n he listen every thing with interst

NAKUL : waha kiya bath hai aj k zamney mein bhi asi ladki bikul sahi kya us ladki nai sahi sabk sikya us ladkey ko

MAAN mumer to himself : lo ek aur geet ka phanka (fan ) grreth sab k sab grrr

MAAN : bus bhut howa ab sab ja kar so jao aur adi tuje ghar nahi nahi jana subha *** co ki file ko sab say pehley mere desk par ho got it

Adi st kareala khi ka geet sahi kha tha n said ok n he left

MAAN to dadi n pari

MAAN ap dono ko bhi interview do hmm aur dadi ap ki med ka time hogya hai now boht go to ur room

both look each ohter n said ok

NAKUL came to maan n gifted him for his success

NAKUL : maan baba ap ko bhut badahi ho ap nai itni mehnat ki yeh chota say tohfa humri tarf say jantey hai ap ki layaq nahi he said with head down

MAAN ; ap ko kiya lagta hai k mein yeh gift accept karo ga huh he said with stern voice

dadi : maan betay

but he show his hand to stop her pari mute
nakal ; maan baba he scred that may be maan did not like him givig a gift

MAAN : ap ko kiya lagta hai k mein us insan ka gift nahi longa jis nai muje apn sholders par ghumya aur kilya hai kaka jitna waqt mein papa k sath nahi bitya uhtna mein nai ap k sath bitya hai aur ap nai soch liya k main ap ka gift laina mein sharminda mehsos karo ga
dadi n pari smile to listen n nakul eyes moist to see this much respect from maan

NAKUL : baba woh

MAAN : nahi kaka ap muje say bath bhi mat karo na mein ap say bath karo ga aur na hi ap k hand k parathy kaho ga aur yeh shirt yeh mein kal office pehan kar jao ga samje app

he trun to go but nakul held his hand

NAKUl : maan baba humain maff kar dijaiya humra woh matlab nahi tha

maan hug him n he also hug maan

MAAN: kaka plzz dont say u like my famliy too mom dad k jane k bad bhi ap na humra saht diya har mor par

DADi smile to see her pota geting emotinal

PAri : dada ap nai nakul kaka ko dara diya look his face kase dar gey heheheheh n think in her mind wow dada u great kiya plan banya ap nai parthey say bachney k liya n smile evily in her mind

NAKUL pout to listen this while dadi n maan laugh

maan st : kal toh bach gya maan parthey kahney say thankyou nakul kaka n smirk

to be continue

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Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kaha bhaag gayi update karr k 😡😡

10

👏 part
uff... maan is soo nautanki kya idea nikala partathe se bachne ka 😲😆😆
n pari understood his trick 😛
maans repect for nakul deserves 👏👏

shanta tai is so emotional 😲😛
but lovedd her😳
pari-meera.. geet ki assumed sisters😆😆
loved their bonding 😃


Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
edited 😳

Originally posted by: mirror1521

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uff.. so it was adi jisko geet ne bhaiiya bola😆😆
and adi was like "tune maari entry yaar.. dil me baji ghati yarr.."
bhai wali na 😳😆😆

maan calls geet as "lady bheem" 😲🤣

but geet ne bhi mr. sadu ko achha sabak sikhaya...
mana ka muh band ho gaya 😆😆🤣

loved how maan ne gundo ko maar k bahga diya 😳😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update
st become emotional after knowing what happened with geet
maan also get emotional when nakul gift him on his success
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Posted: 11 years ago
another nice update...so Maan becoming emotional ...wow definitely nakul is like a family member for the khuranas...and there ST another emotional person and what great friends Geet has in pari and meera...nice
waiting eagerly for another maaneet and princess encounter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan to geet katha sun sun kar pareshan ho gaya. He is very angry.😡
shanta tai geet ki chot k bare main sunkar pareshan ho gayi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear pair talks are very cute

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