'Nee Chupule Naa Uphiri' Maaneet SS PART 2 PAGE 25 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

No I want ongoing to be continue. You can take time for new one.as I am very exited to read next part.


again u came there... 😆 k dear..then will give next part of this story tomorrow and start new one too...this story updates will be late from then
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again u came there... 😆 k dear..then will give next part of this story tomorrow and start new one too...this story updates will be late from then

Waiting for tomorrow to read.
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Waiting for tomorrow to read.


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I want to read this story too.


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PART-2



Araku village...geet's house...



Geeta came running to her house after the phone call and broke down completely not able to fight her bitter fate anymore...she was heavy in her heart ...her knees bulked and she collapsed on ground ...she was tired ..tired of being at the receiving end all her life...how can god become this cruel to punish her???...is she that bad?? .first she lost her mother at the tender age ..then her accident and blindness...and her father's irresponsibility and his death...now..now she completely became an orphan due to her relatives...will happiness ever be bestowed on her or will she have to live this cursed life forever...her chain of thoughts came to an end by the knocking of her door..she wiped her tears and opened the door...it was her house owner...

Phone booth...


Here maan stood perplexed seeing geeta running in a hurry ...she dropped her phone book on the ground which caught his attention..he lifted it and headed in the direction she went...he don't exactly know her house ..so he asked the by passers about her address...soon he reached her house and stood still listening to the shrieks coming from inside...he feared for her safety ...he don't know what he felt for this angel who lit his dark world within few minutes ..but the irony is she herself couldn't see light...he just couldn't bear some thing happening to his angel...sweat formed on his forehead and in jet speed he ran and broke opened her door with a loud bang...

The sight in front of him robed his breath...his entire being shook in rage which he himself never aware of...only one thought came to his mind...kill that bloody worm...who dared to hurt his angel...

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The house owner was forcing himself on geeta...first he calmly tried to explain her when she dint budge ...he lost it and started manhandling her...😡..he was old so geet could fight him..she started throwing the things and shouted for help that's when she heard a bang and then entered her savior...😳

Maan like a wounded lion attacked the owner and started beating him black and blue till he fell on the floor like a sack...hearing the commotion nearby villagers too came there and seeing maan killing the owner...they tried to stop him..maan then held his neck and started to throttle him ...he just couldn't see anything or anyone...his eyes became blood red...every nerve and tendon in his body throbbed in fury...but one voice stopped him...voice of his angel...

Rukjaayiye (stop)please...geeta was scared hearing all the people ...and by the sounds she can make out who is her savior and what he was doing for her...she don't want him to suffer coz of her...if he killed him then he will have to go to jail...

Maan released the owner with one last punch who fell on the ground flat chocking ...his face turned blue...one more minute then he would have died...

Geeta's neighbor who is her friend came running she was not present there as she went to market...she hugged geeta consoling her...

Geet I said right to go to ur relatives...did u called them...see now this b**tard took advantage of you...he should rot in hell....shanti looked at geeta for answer...


Hearing about her relatives again tears rolled geeta's eyes...me anath hogayi(I became orphan) they said wrong number...*sob*..everyone abandoned me...

Now where you will live...shanti was tensed and hurt listening to her...

She will come with me...all gasped hearing maan



...don't worry I have my mother too savitri... she will take care of her and u all know me right how I am...i will not harm her ... ...I don't want another bas***d to dare this again...maan couldn't even repeat what he saw...he squeezed shut his eyes as again rage bubbled inside him...a tear slipped from his eyes feeling his angel's pain

All villagers too agreed as they trust maan...but geeta dint agreed...

No plz ...because of me I don't want you in trouble...already u did soo much for me...i don't want to be burden on anyone...geeta cried...

Maan was about to stop her but shanti beat him...

Are pagli...thu bhoj kahe banegi...(you mad..how can u be burden)...u too do ur work...sell flowers and help them in house chores...and maan's mother also is feeling weak as she is old......shanti cupped geeta's face while eyeing maan to agree with her...

Yes yes...you yyou can help mm my mother...huh huh...maan shuttered...

As geeta being innocent agreed and with the help of shanty...she packed her bags ...

Take care...geeta bid shanty bye and left with maan...on the way geeta was crying..while maan was unable to console her...




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Maan's house...



Adi came searching for maan as he again needed money...

Maan maaan...where is he?...he went inside kitchen where savitri was working...

Aayi maan kidher gaya??(mother...where is maan)...adi enquired while popping some pokode in his mouth but soon let out a shriek as savitri burned him with spatula...

Aaahh aaahh...uhh,...ahhh .adi jumped...

What is this aayi...why u did this adi shouted but soon gulped seeing savitri's glare

What what u fool...why r you seeing me...again you want money...you nalayak(waste)...why cant you search a job ...alwayslooting my maan...how much more he will bore ...my poor child ...he has a very big heart...even though he is not rich he took me in his wing when my husband died...even though I am not his mother he took care of me like one... Now you too donkey...sanvitri thundered at adi feeling emotional...though it is normal bickering between them...always adi takes maan's money while savitri scolds him...but she loves both of them...

It is not like that aayi...adi tried to explain but stopped hearing the door knock...

There maan stood with a crying geeta...he gentle took her hand in his and led her inside...

This is my mom...aayi ye geet hai(this is geet)...maan introduced them to each other...while adi and savitri stood surprised and confused...they can see that geeta is beautiful but can make out she is blind...they felt bad for her...

Maan what....adi tried to interject but maan showed his hand stopping him from saying further...he then took geeta in room



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Room...


Umm umm...I kept ur belongings in cupboard shelf...u take rest...i know it will be hard for anyone to adjust in new place...but don't worry..you can be free here...if you want anything call me or aayi...k...maan tried to make geeta comfortable...while geeta felt overwhelmed seeing his care ...even in his talks he did not point out her blindness...he said for anyone it is hard to adjust in new place...but in reality for her it is hard to adjust to new surroundings...she felt a respect equal to god for him in her heart...he became her true soul friend(snehithudu)


listen to the song to feel it 😛


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sb-FGdltonU[/YOUTUBE]


Ninna Munimapullo Ninna Munimapullo Niddatlo Nee Vollo
Gaalalle Thelipotanu.. Illaa Dolaloogenu
Ananda Ardharatri Andaala Gurtullo Ninnu Valapincha
Manam Chediri Vilapinchaa
Kurula Nokkullo Nalupe Chukkallo Kurula Nokkullo Nalupe Chukkallo
Garvamanichenu Le Naa Garvamanigenu Le...

Snehitudaa Snehitudaa Rahasya Snehitudaa...
Chinna Chinna Naa Korikale Allukunna Snehitudaa
Ide Sakalam Sarvam... Ide Valapu Gelupu...
Swasa Tudi Varaku Velige Vedam Vanchalanni Varamaina Prana Bandam

||Snehitudaa||

Chinna Chinna Haddu Meera Vacchuno Ee Jeevitana Pula Punta Veyyavoi
Manase Madhuvoi
Puvvu Kose Baktudalle Metta Gaa Nenu Nidra Pothe Leta Gollu Gillavoi
Sandello Thoduvoy
Aidu Vellu Terichi Avu Venna Poosi Sevalu Sayavalegaa
Iddaramokatai Kanneeraithe Tudiche Velandam

||Snehitudaa||

||Ninna||

Shantinchali Pagalinti Panike...
Shantinchali Pagalinti Panike Nee Sontaniki Teccedinka Padake
Vale Poddu Valape
Woolen Chokka Arabose Vayase Neeti Chemma Chekka Laina Naku Varase
Vuppu Moote Ammey Naa
Vunnattundi Testaa Ettesi Visiresta Kongullo Ninne Dachestaa
Valaka Poddu Vidudala Chesi Varamokatadigestaa

||Snehitudaa||

Maan after thinking sometime...umm come I will show you way to wash room you can fresh up and then rest...he gently held geeta's hand and slowly led her to washroom ...his one hand was holding her hand while other on her waist...geet felt goose bombs in her body...butterflies tickled her in her stomach...she never felt these feelings...on the other hand maan's state was not less...her scent was driving him crazy...as she was wearing half saree..(langavoni)...her waist was visible ...her skin felt like silk...without his knowledge...his hand caressed hers...and his hold on her waist tightened...his trance broke as the washroom came...

Washroom is here...geeta went inside to freshen up while maan waited outside cursing himself...

How can i....pervert ...how can you think like that about her...what is the difference between you and that b**tard owner...maan felt guilty for thinking about geet like that...he want to trash himself badly...his self destructing musings came to an end as geeta came out...

Come....maan hesitated to hold her again...geeta felt that his hand is there she put her hand and leg out and stumbled forward ...ouch...

In the nick moment of time maan saved her from falling chiding himself...sorry...he mumbled slowly...while geet nodded..he then lead her to bed...

In this whole mishap geet's voni(duppata) slightly misplaced showing off her cleavage which caught maan's eye...he felt terrified ...he closed his eyes with his hands...

Maine kuch nai dekha(I did not see anything)....maan shouted and ran from the room gasping while geet was confused...😆

What happened to him...she mumbled and slept due to exhaustion as all the events of the day took toll on her...

Outside room...hall...


Adi and savitri was waiting for maan anxiously...

Maan came running there but stopped short seeing the audience eyeing him weirdly...

Adi started his tirade of questions...who is she?...from where you bought her?...etc etc...while maan narrated whole incident to them

Savitri cried listening to the suffering of poor girl... heybhagvan(ohh god)...

On th other hand there was adi ...even though somewhere he felt bad for geeta..he was more concerned for maan...he know maan is so gullible...he don't want another mishap in his life...

Fine...now for how many days she is going to live here?...adi eyed maan seriously...

What do you mean by how many days...I said na she don't have anybody...she is going to live here permanently......maan declared stretching his words...he did not like adi's question ...the thought of geeta leaving him scared him...he did not liked it ...

Maan are you mad...that girl...how and why...do you know hoe this girls are...they will take advantage of their defect and ur naivety and trap u...and u are saying her house owner did try to force her ...what is the guarantee that she did not try to lure him...may be she is a good digging bi

**TISSHHH**

...adi's venom stopped spitting as he felt a hard slap on his face ...he came to his senses and realized what he was saying...

Maan's eyes were burning red like coal...

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Lara's house...




Lara was reading book on her bed laying flat on her bed...while her mobile rang...


Hello guru...lara jumped...😛


Whattt...lara gasped...😲


You and ur family are coming to my house......lara hyperventilated ...😔

And you idiot say me now...lara thundered...😡

Think once again guru...lara tried...

Guru guru....lara hit her head...

OHH jesus.....lara cried...🤣

Soon she heard car engines roar...and ran into the hall...


Gurmeet ,sangeeta-satya(his parents) came inside...in the hall anju and david were seated...


Lara came running to the hall...gulping she silently stood near her parents...and looked at gurmeet who winked at her...she glared at him earning a chuckle from him...



Anju and david stood up...


Come in...and plz be seated...they welcomed them like guests...even though they know about their daughter's love...

May I know the purpose of ur arrival...david was straight to the point...

Umm we came here to ask lara's hand for our son...satya too was ready with his answer...

There was silence but one can feel the tension rising in the atmosphere ...lara's heartbeat raised and she looked at gurmeet who blinked his eyes assuring her...

No!!!!!! ...

Lara gasped .....dad..but stopped as david glared at her

What ...but why...see they both love each other crazily...they will be happy...what more can a parent want than their children's happiness....satya tried to put some sense in david's head

But not for me...for me more than my children's happiness...my prestige is important...my religion is important...and how the hell can you think that I will give my daughter to ur son...you are not from our religion...even if u were from our religion then too I will not agree u r son for my daughter...to this manner less brute....david was insulting gurmeet

Gurmeet was about to stand but lara pleaded him trough his eyes to control his anger...

don't dare say anything about my son....satya too got angry and stood up pointing his finger at david...

Huh son...who is a volcano...i've already decided decided my daughter's marriage should happen with our relative's son sam...and who know in his anger ur son may even kill my daughter...david mocked

HOW DARE YOU...gurmeet roared scaring the hell out of every one...he grabbed david's color and was about to punch him but a hand stopped him...

GURMEET...no plz leave him ...plz for my sake....lara begged him crying...her EYES ..her eyes are filled with tears which he couldn't bear...then how can anyone say that ..that he will harm her...he will die before that day occurs...


Gurmeet released david's color forcefully and pushed him...giving a last look to lara he exited the house angrily...followed by his parents

Gurmeet stop ...stop plz...lara ran behind him and took hold of his hand...which was bleeding due to the hit of car glass...lara gasped seeing blood ...she tore her duppata and tied to his hand



Plz plz...dont get angry...i am sorry ...I did not think dad will react like that...lara cried bt let out a hiss as gurmeet pulled her face clutching his hair...

Don't..dont cry...i cant see them...you are mine...drashti is mine only mine...you know right..ha you know right I will not harm you...but he said... he said ...there was a strange madness in his eyes which shook her...she know he is damn possessive for her but this...this is madness...mad obsession ... how he will live if anything happens to her...

No no...you will not harm...I fell safest in ur arms...lara hugged him...and iam yours...drashti is only gurmeet's ...😳

Gurmeet somewhat calmed himself listening to her heartbeat against his...without that he couldn't breathe...only she has the power to calm him...he hugged her tighter making her difficult to breathe

There is only one thing which we can do to become one...drashti slowly released herself from his iron grip...

What...

Drashti slowly raised her tows...and whispered in his ears...


Gurmeet gasped widening his eyes...


*********** to be continued**********



Precap-Execution of plan 😉



Maan- you will see this entire world...


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Gurmeet- i will burn this entire world...



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NOTE-Here is the part 2 dearies ...how's it pls like and comment it motivates me pls..silent readers thanx a lot for likes..but if u want u can comment in and pm to me if not in posts ...but i will feel happy to know ur feed back..



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IMPORTANT AUTHOR'S NOTE-


Guys as you all asked to continue i gave this update...from now onwards this story updates will be late as this story has hardly 4-5 parts more.Dyou want this story or should i stop it ..if you are getting bored or response is less means i will delete this story. coz i am starting new story ..which prolugue and CS will be given by today night...

Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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superb updte... can't wait 4 the update... pls continue soon... ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next update
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It's amazing. Geet is a blind girl and maan is lame because of polio desease. I really loved the way geet earn money for her bread. She didn't let herself weak and depend on others. Although she has father but he knew only to spend. But at the end he was her father so she used to love him immensely but when she lost him, her world crushed as she had only her father in the name of relation. Maan also lives his life with honour and pride. He has his own telephone booth by which he earn money. He is really very kind . I was amazed when I read that he kept a woman in his house as she lost her whole family. He address her dadi ma also gives respect to this relationship. He has also his share of pain which I think would be vanish ad geet entered in his life. Maan's meeting was really very nice. Maan felt bad seeing such a beautiful girl hasn't eyes. Seeing geet in trouble , maan brought her at his place. Now waiting for their love story to be started. N there gur meet and drashti are in love but because they belong to different culture, drashti's parents are not in favour of their marriage. Eagerly waiting for next dear
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awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Maan helped Geet when her house-owner tried to take advantage of her...👏👏👏...He took her to his own house and made her comfortable...😎...Geet felt respect for him...He is getting attracted to her...😉...Adi warns Maan by misunderstanding her which angers Maan for which he slaps him...😲...on the other hand, Gurmeet's parents came to ask for Drashti's hand to her parents...👍🏼...but they rejected him and insulted him...😡...He was going to punch Drashti's dad but stopped coz of her......waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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